Unit 1 Section Ⅳ Writing a book review(Word学生用书)-【学霸笔记·同步精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修第二册(外研版)
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摘要:
**基本信息**
以《小王子》书评为例,通过“语言学习-结构分析-佳句积累-写作实践-语料运用”分层路径,系统提升书评写作能力,兼顾语言能力与思维品质培养。
**分层设计**
|层次|知识覆盖|设计特色|
|----|----------|----------|
|基础层|被动语态、定语从句等语法点,核心词汇(memorable等)|通过课文分析提炼语言规律,搭配“出彩佳句”背诵,夯实语言基础|
|进阶层|“总—分—总”结构,句间衔接技巧|以《秘密花园》推荐为题,分步骤引导审题、合并句子,训练写作逻辑|
|应用层|情感/动作描写词汇在语境中的综合运用|设置数学考试诚信、家庭晚餐反思微情境,要求用指定句式续写,提升语篇创造能力|
内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing a book review
【演练佳作•写美文】
写作步骤
二、1.The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden is written by American author Frances Hodgson Burnett.
2.The book is well worth recommending.
3.The Secret Garden tells the growth of a lonely girl named Mary.
4.She comes across a deserted garden.
5.With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately brings it back to life, which transforms her into a cheerful girl in the meanwhile.
6.The book is not only a heart-warming read but also conveys an inspiring truth: It is wise of us to unlock the secrets of our hearts and embrace the support of those around us.
7.Thus, we can rise to challenges in life with a smile.
三、1.The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden, written by American author Frances Hodgson Burnett, is well worth recommending.
2.The Secret Garden tells the growth of a lonely girl named Mary, who comes across a deserted garden.
四、
The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden, written by American author Frances Hodgson Burnett, is well worth recommending.
The Secret Garden tells the growth of a lonely girl named Mary, who comes across a deserted garden. With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately brings it back to life, which transforms her into a cheerful girl in the meanwhile.
The book is not only a heart-warming read but also conveys an inspiring truth: It is wise of us to unlock the secrets of our hearts and embrace the support of those around us.Thus, we can rise to challenges in life with a smile.
【语料运用•练续写】
微情境1
1.so tiresome that
2.Tempted by the high score
3.Swallowing my greed
4.obey the rules
微情境2
5.chewing my food slowly
6.how selfish I had been in the past
7.huge commitment to the family
8.cherish every memorable day with them
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Section Ⅳ Writing a book review
The Little Prince was written and illustrated by the French writer Antoine de Saint-Exupéry during World War Ⅱ.It is a children’s fantasy book, but it is also enjoyed by adults.
It tells a story about a pilot who has crashed in the desert.While he is trying to fix his aeroplane, a little prince comes to him.Visiting from another planet, the little prince recounts his adventures to the pilot, and the two become friends.
The book talks about the importance of looking beneath the surface of things to uncover their real meanings.I like it because it is simple, and yet it really made me think a lot about life and death, love and responsibility, friendship and loneliness.One of the most memorable characters in the book is a rose, which the little prince fell in love with.I was really touched by the line — “It’s the time you spent on your rose that makes your rose so important.” — because it shows how we form special bonds with others by caring and taking responsibility for them.
Personally, I think this is a touching book that everyone should read, whatever their age.
学语言
第一段首句使用被动语态介绍了图书的作者和写作时间。
第二段首句使用It tells a story about ...这一常用句式来概述图书内容,语言简洁自然。同时,首句还使用了由who引导的定语从句。介绍图书故事情节时,共使用了两句话。评论者为了避免语言的重复,分别使用了while引导的状语从句和动词-ing形式作状语,使语言表达富有变化。
第三段在进行图书评论时,评论者先描述了需要点评的地方,然后再进行评论。例如前两句话,在首句评论者说明要点评的地方后,第二句用I like it because ...展开评论。下文也采用了类似的方法,如:I was really touched by the line,because it shows ...等句子进行评论。
第四段用Personally这一副词开头,表达评论者自己的观点。本段虽然只有一句话,但是却恰当地运用了从句,提升了表达效果,如that引导的定语从句和whatever引导的让步状语从句。
学结构
本文使用了“总—分—总”结构,首段整体介绍图书概况,直接点明《小王子》这本书的作者、创作时间以及内容特点;主体段,即第二、三段分别简单描述该书的情节和对图书的评价;尾段进行总结与推荐。
1.The novel is set in the 19th-century London.
这部小说以19世纪的伦敦为背景。
2.Published in 2010, the book is popular among teenagers.
这本书出版于2010年,很受青少年欢迎。
3.Robinson Crusoe is the work of the famous novelist Daniel Defoe, which is worth reading.
《鲁滨孙漂流记》是著名小说家丹尼尔•笛福的作品,值得阅读。
4.In fact, the fiction story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it.事实上,这本小说的故事很有意义,我可以从中学到很多东西。
假定你在校英文论坛上看到大家在讨论自己最喜欢的课外书。请你根据所给提示,向同学们推荐你最喜爱的文学读物《秘密花园》(The Secret Garden)。
作者
美国作家弗朗西丝•霍奇森•伯内特(Frances Hodgson Burnett)
故事梗概
性格孤僻的玛丽无意中发现了一个废弃的花园。在新结识的朋友们的帮助下,玛丽使花园恢复了生机,同时,她也变得开朗起来
感悟
面对挫折时,要敞开心扉,笑对人生
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
一、审题谋篇,结构分明
二、要点陈述,语言规范
1.文学名著《秘密花园》是由美国作家弗朗西丝•霍奇森•伯内特所著。
2.这本书非常值得推荐。(be well worth doing)
3.《秘密花园》讲述了一个名叫玛丽的孤独女孩的成长故事。
4.她偶然发现了一个废弃的花园。
5.在新朋友们的帮助下,玛丽最终让花园重获生机,同时,她也变成了一个开朗的女孩。(非限制性定语从句)
6.这本书不仅温暖人心,还传达了一个鼓舞人心的真理:我们解开内心的秘密并欣然接受身边人的支持是明智的。(not only ...but also ...)
7.这样,我们才能微笑着迎接生活中的挑战。
三、句间衔接,过渡自然
1.用过去分词短语作定语合并要点1和要点2
2.用非限制性定语从句合并要点3和要点4
四、检查誊写,卷面整洁
词汇
佳句
情感描写
subtle adj.难以察觉的;微妙的
bittersweet adj.苦乐参半的
memorable adj.难忘的
disheartened adj.沮丧的,灰心的
tiresome adj.烦人的,令人厌烦的
①Finally,during the most exciting part,the music takes a softer turn and ends on a bittersweet note,telling us how the couple transform into butterflies and fly away to be together forever. (情感描写)
最后,在最激昂的部分,乐曲转而柔缓,以凄美的曲调收尾,它告诉我们,这对情侣化蝶而去,永世不再分离。
②I had been disheartened by the failure of my Drawing Number One and my Drawing Number Two. (情感描写)
“一号画作”和“二号画作”的失败使我心灰意冷。
③Boa constrictors swallow their prey whole, without chewing it. After that they are not able to move, and they sleep through the six months that they need for digestion.(动作描写)
蟒蛇把猎物整个吞下,完全不咀嚼。在这之后,它们就动不了了,它们在六个月的睡眠中消化食物。
动作描写
obey v.服从;遵守
swallow v.吞下,咽下
chew v.咀嚼
tempt v.诱惑,引诱
cherish v.重视,珍视
人物描写
mature adj.成熟的,明白事理的
selfish adj.自私的
commitment n.投入,花费
integrity n.正直诚实
virtue n.美德
微情境1 在一次重要的数学考试中,“我”遇到了难题,内心产生过动摇,但最终克服了高分的诱惑,选择了诚实,通过这次经历,“我”理解了正直的含义。
Staring at the difficult math problem, I felt disheartened.The calculation was 1. (如此枯燥乏味,以至于;结果状语从句) I wanted to give up.Suddenly, a note with answers was passed to my desk.2. (受高分的诱惑; 过去分词作状语), I reached out my hand.However, recalling my father’s words about integrity, I stopped. 3. (吞下我的贪念;动词-ing形式作状语), I decided to 4. (遵守规则).I realized that honesty is a virtue more important than grades.
微情境2 “我”即将离家求学,在最后的家庭晚餐上,气氛微妙。“我”反思了自己过去的任性,体会到了父母的付出,心态真正变得成熟。
The atmosphere at the dinner table was subtle.I sat there, 5. (慢慢地咀嚼着食物;动词-ing形式作状语).What struck me was that this was a bittersweet moment.Looking at my parents’ grey hair, I realized 6. (过去我是多么自私; 宾语从句).I had ignored their 7. (对家庭的巨大投入).Now, I promised to become a mature person.I would 8. (珍惜与他们共度的每一个难忘的日子).
完成课后作业 UNIT 1 Section Ⅳ
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