摘要:
本讲义聚焦七年级上册Unit 5写作课核心知识点,通过“复习招新广告→补全申请邮件→仿写邮件→创办俱乐部与设计海报→采访招募”脉络,搭建邮件四要素(表明兴趣、说明能力与不足、表达意愿、提出请求)、写作支架(Dear+组织者→兴趣→能力→不足与意愿→请求→署名)及海报四要素(社团名、活动内容、时间地点、联系方式)等学习支架。
该资料以“输出驱动”设计提升语言能力,如邮件仿写强化I'd love to、Can I...等句型运用,海报设计训练书面表达;通过采访记录(Can/Can't)与录用逻辑(so表结果)培养思维品质,自评表(Very well/OK/Needs work)助力学习能力发展。课中教师可依托支架高效教学,课后学生能借易错提醒(如share...with...搭配)查漏补缺,强化单元目标达成。
内容正文:
Unit 5 Fun Clubs Section B (2a-Reflecting) · 讲义
Unit 5 Fun Clubs
Section B (2a-Reflecting) (讲义 · 学生用)
课时基本信息
课题
Unit 5 Fun Clubs — Section B (2a-Reflecting)
课型
写作课
年级
七年级上册
课时
第 4 课时
教材
人教版(2024)英语七年级上册(Unit 5,课本 p.57-58)
主题
人与自我——补全并仿写加入社团的申请邮件,创办自己的俱乐部并设计招新海报
教学重点
用方框里的表达补全申请邮件(2a,课本 p.57);从 1b 中选一个社团,仿写一封说明加入理由的邮件(2b);想创办的社团并设计招新海报(3a-3b,课本 p.58);采访同学为自己的俱乐部招募新成员(3c)
教学难点
邮件正文的篇章组织(表明兴趣→说明能力与不足→表达意愿→提出请求);I'd love to 与 Can I ...? 的语用功能;海报要素的完整呈现与采访记录(Can / Can't / 能否加入)
新词学习
act out 表演(p.56)
interested in 对……感兴趣(p.56)
fall in love with 爱上……(p.56)
take photos 拍照(p.56)
collect /kəˈlekt/ v. 收集;采集(p.56)
discover /dɪˈskʌvə(r)/ v. 发现;发觉(p.56)
wildlife /ˈwaɪldlaɪf/ n. 野生动物;野生生物(p.56)
(一)复习导入:从广告到申请邮件
【过渡语】上一课我们读了三则招新广告,这一课学着写一封申请邮件。
回顾课本 p.56 的三条广告:Book Club(联系人 Bill)、Nature Club(联系人 Jenny)、Cooking Club(联系人 Ma Xiaohui)。
思考:想加入一个社团,怎样让组织者了解你?
【知识点】
邮件格式回顾(课本 p.57):To 收件人邮箱 → From 发件人邮箱 → 称呼 Dear ... → 正文 → 结束语 Best, → 署名——申请邮件的正文就是“兴趣+能力+意愿+请求”四步。
【提示框】
把 2a 邮件当范文:Xu Cong 想加入 Bill 的 Book Club——先找找他的邮件里这四步分别在哪句。
申请邮件四要素:① 表明兴趣(I'm really interested in your club.);② 说明能力与不足(I can ... but I can't ...);③ 表达意愿(I'd love to ...);④ 提出请求(Can I join your club?)。
(二)2a 补全邮件:Xu Cong 想加入读书社
2a Complete the email with the words in the box.(用方框里的词补全邮件。课本 p.57)
方框:I love I'd love to I'm really interested in Can I I can I can't
Email
To: billwhite@happymail.com From: xucong@student.com
Dear Bill,
__________ your club. __________ reading all kinds of books. I __________ read fast, but I __________ find many good books to read. I __________ read more and share what I think with others. __________ join your club?
Best,
Xu Cong
【知识点】
邮件里的关键表达(课本 p.57):I'm really interested in + 名词/doing 对……很感兴趣;I love reading all kinds of books(love + doing 表爱好);I'd love to 很愿意(= I would love to);share what I think with others 和别人分享我的想法(share ... with ...);Can I ...? 有礼貌地请求。
2a 参考答案:1. I'm really interested in your club. 2. I love reading all kinds of books. 3. I can read fast, but I can't find many good books to read. 4. I'd love to read more and share what I think with others. 5. Can I join your club?
(三)2b 仿写:给组织者写一封申请邮件
【过渡语】选一个你最想加入的社团,仿照 2a 写你自己的申请邮件。
2b Choose one club from 1b. Write an email to the organizer and say why you'd like to join the club.(从 1b 中选一个社团,给组织者写一封邮件,说明你为什么想加入这个社团。课本 p.57)
写作支架:Dear + 组织者名 → I'm really interested in your club. → I love / I can ... → but I can't ... → I'd love to ... → Can I join your club? → Best, + 署名
【知识点】
申请邮件正文四步(课本 p.57):① 表明兴趣(I'm really interested in your club.);② 说明能力(I can take good photos.——呼应广告里 Can you take good photos?);③ 坦诚不足与意愿(I can't ..., but I'd love to ...);④ 礼貌请求(Can I join your club?)——组织者的广告问什么,邮件里就答什么。
示例(申请加入 Nature Club): To: jenny66@happymail.com From: lihua@student.com Dear Jenny, I'm really interested in your club. I love nature and I can take good photos. I can't climb mountains very fast, but I can read maps. I'd love to watch birds and collect plants and insects with you. Can I join your club? Best, Li Hua
(四)Project 3a-3b 创办俱乐部,设计招新海报
【过渡语】光加入别人的社团还不够,来创办一个你自己的俱乐部吧。
3a Think of a club you would like to set up in your school.(想一个你想在学校创办的俱乐部。课本 p.58)
3b Make a poster to find new members.(制作一张海报来招募新成员。课本 p.58)海报应包含:The name of the club 社团名;What club members can do 成员能做的事;Meeting time and place 活动时间与地点;Contact information 联系方式。
示例海报 Robotics Club:Are you interested in robotics? We are looking for new members who can: work well with their hands / think up new ideas / work as a team. When: Tuesdays, 12:30 p.m. Where: robotics lab. Who to contact: ma.li8@happyschool.com
【知识点】
招新海报四要素(课本 p.58):社团名(The name of the club)、成员能力(What club members can do——who can 后接动词原形)、时间地点(When / Where)、联系方式(Who to contact);set up 创办;设置(think up new ideas 想出新点子;work as a team 团队合作)。
【提示框】
海报三连问开头:Are you interested in ...? / Do you love ...? / Can you ...?——先用问句抓住读者,再列成员要求(who can + 动词原形)。
设计示例:Chess Club——Are you interested in chess? We are looking for new members who can: play Chinese chess / think quickly / work well with others. When: Fridays, 4:00 p.m. Where: Room 205. Who to contact: lihua@school.com
(五)Project 3c 采访与 Reflecting 自评
3c Interview your classmates. Find new members for your club.(采访你的同学,为你的俱乐部寻找新成员。课本 p.58)
采访支架:A: Can you work well with your hands? B: Yes, I can. A: Can you come at 12:30 p.m. on Tuesdays? B: Yes, I can. / No, I can't.
记录表:Name 姓名 / Can 会 / Can't 不会 / Can he / she join the club? (Yes √ or No ×)
Reflecting 自评(课本 p.58):How well can you do these things? Very well / OK / Needs work
1. I can name different school clubs.
2. I can talk about people's abilities using can.
3. I can describe what people do in different school clubs.
4. I can explain the benefits of different clubs.
单元主题语:Our interests make us interesting. 我们的兴趣让我们变得有趣。
【知识点】
采访与录用(课本 p.58):能力问 Can you ...?、时间问 Can you come at + 钟点 + on + 星期?;两项都过关才打 √;Reflecting 四项对应本单元四大目标——说出社团名、用 can 谈能力、描述社团活动、说明社团益处(benefits)。
【提示框】
转述模板:... can ..., and he / she can come at ..., so he / she can join our club.(so 表结果)——把采访记录连成一句话就是录用通知。
采访示例:A: Can you play chess? B: Yes, I can. And I can think quickly. A: Can you come at 4:00 p.m. on Fridays? B: No, I can't. I have a piano lesson.(记录:Wang Lin—can play chess, think quickly—can't come on Fridays—×) 汇报句式:Wang Lin can play chess, but he can't come on Fridays, so he can't join our club.
(六)语言点精讲
【过渡语】把本课邮件与海报中的表达集中梳理。
1. I'd love to ...(2a,课本 p.57)我很愿意……:= I would love to,语气比 want to 更热情——I'd love to read more and share what I think with others.
2. share ... with ...(2a,课本 p.57)与……分享……:share what I think with others 和别人分享我的想法;share 后接分享的内容,with 后接分享的对象。
3. Can I ...?(2a,课本 p.57):Can I join your club? 我能加入你们的社团吗?——用 can 提出请求,比 I want to 更礼貌。
4. be interested in(2a,课本 p.57)对……感兴趣:I'm really interested in your club.(really 加强语气);interested 修饰人。
5. set up(3a,课本 p.58)创办;设置:Think of a club you would like to set up. 想一个你想创办的俱乐部;think up new ideas 想出新点子(work out 算出;think up 想出)。
6. who can + 动词原形(3b,课本 p.58):We are looking for new members who can work well with their hands. 我们在寻找动手能力强的新成员——who 引导的从句修饰 members。
7. benefits(Reflecting,课本 p.58)益处:the benefits of different clubs 不同社团的益处——说明益处可用 We can learn ... / It helps us ...
【知识点】
本课高频考点:① I'd love to = I would love to;② share ... with ... 固定搭配;③ Can I ...? 礼貌请求;④ be interested in + 名词/doing;⑤ make us interesting(make + 宾语 + 形容词)。
【提示框】
易错:share it to me(×)→ share it with me;I'd love to 后接动词原形(I'd love to joining ×);make us interestingly(×)→ make us interesting(make + 宾语 + 形容词)。
易错提醒
把 2a 邮件当范文:Xu Cong 想加入 Bill 的 Book Club——先找找他的邮件里这四步分别在哪句。
海报三连问开头:Are you interested in ...? / Do you love ...? / Can you ...?——先用问句抓住读者,再列成员要求(who can + 动词原形)。
转述模板:... can ..., and he / she can come at ..., so he / she can join our club.(so 表结果)——把采访记录连成一句话就是录用通知。
易错:share it to me(×)→ share it with me;I'd love to 后接动词原形(I'd love to joining ×);make us interestingly(×)→ make us interesting(make + 宾语 + 形容词)。
答题技巧
选词三看:① 看位置——句首空多填主语短语(I love / I'd love to / I'm really interested in);② 看搭配——read fast 前填 I can、find many good books 前填 I can't(but 转折);③ 看语气——请求加入用 Can I。
仿写三查:① 收件人对不对(Nature Club 写给 Jenny,Book Club 写给 Bill,Cooking Club 写给 Ma Xiaohui);② 能力与广告要求是否呼应;③ 格式四件套(称呼、正文、结束语、署名)是否齐全。
语言点归纳
语言点精讲:本课语言点服务于两种输出:笔头申请邮件(兴趣 → 能力与不足 → 意愿 → 请求)与口头招新采访(Can you ...? → 记录 Can / Can't → 录用决定)。贯穿单元的关键词仍是 can:广告用它提要求,邮件用它秀能力,采访用它做决定。建议把 2b 邮件誊写工整,作为本单元的写作成果。
课堂总结
本课时(课本 p.57-58)是 Unit 5 的写作收口:2a 用方框里的六个表达补全 Xu Cong 写给 Bill 的申请邮件(I'm really interested in your club. I love reading all kinds of books. I can read fast, but I can't find many good books to read. I'd love to read more and share what I think with others. Can I join your club?);2b 从 1b 的三个社团中选一个,给组织者写一封说明加入理由的邮件;Project 环节 3a 想一个自己想在学校创办的俱乐部,3b 设计一张招新海报(包含社团名、成员能做的事、活动时间地点、联系方式,参照 Robotics Club 示例海报),3c 采访同学为自己的俱乐部招募新成员(Can you work well with your hands? / Can you come at 12:30 p.m. on Tuesdays?);最后用 Reflecting 四项自评回顾单元目标,呼应主题语 Our interests make us interesting.(我们的兴趣让我们变得有趣)。
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