Unit1 Period 3 Writing-【优学精讲】2026-2027学年高中英语选择性必修一同步教参（译林版）

Period 3　Writing 写作一　应用文写作(食物介绍类说明文) 假定你是李华，你们学校正在举办征文比赛，请以“我最喜欢的食物”为题写一篇文章参赛，内容包括： 1.最喜欢的食物名称； 2.食物的制作过程。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 　审题谋篇 　遣词造句 [第一段]　点明最喜欢的食物，并引出下文 1．饺子有着悠久的历史，它是我最喜欢的食物。 Jiaozi has__a__long__history and it is my favourite food. 2．它不仅制作简单，而且可以根据个人口味进行调整。 It is not only easy to make，but__it__can__also__be__adapted__to__individual__tastes． [第二段]　详细介绍制作过程 3．将配料和肉馅充分混合。 Mix__the__ingredients__and__meat__filling thoroughly. 4．在一个大碗中，逐渐向面粉中加入适量的水。 In a big bowl, add__proper__water__to__flour__gradually． 5．当它煮熟后，就可以上桌了。 When__well__cooked,__it is ready to be served. [第三段]　介绍食物的意义 6．每次我吃饺子，它都会给我带来家庭的幸福回忆和好运。 Each time I eat jiaozi, it brings__the__happy__memories__of__the__family and also good luck to me. 7．[读教材原句]　(教材P2)Sometimes the smell alone can do the trick，not to mention the lovely creamy flavour, which works like a time machine immediately transporting me back to my sunny childhood. [记句式]　which引导非限制性定语从句 [学仿写]　用非限制性定语从句改写句1 Jiaozi,__which__has__a__long__history,__is__my__favourite__food. 8．[读教材原句]　(教材P6)Not only is cooking at home cheaper, but I can cook exactly what I want. [记句式]　倒装句 [学仿写]　用倒装句改写句2 Not__only__is__it__easy__to__make,__but__it__can__also__be__adapted__to__individual__tastes. 9．[读教材原句]　(教材P2)Whenever I feel lonely, I have a secret recipe that never fails: rice, milk and sugar, cooked low and slow. [记句式]　whenever引导让步状语从句 [学仿写]　用whenever引导让步状语从句改写句6 Whenever__I__eat__jiaozi,__it__brings__the__happy__memories__of__the__family__and__also__good__luck__to__me. 　衔接成篇 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： My Favourite Food Jiaozi, which has a long history, is my favourite food. Not only is it easy to make, but it can also be adapted to individual tastes. Firstly, cut the meat into tiny pieces, and then add salt, oil, soy sauce and Chinese cabbage if you like. Mix the ingredients and meat filling thoroughly. In a big bowl, add proper water to flour gradually. Then leave the dough for about one hour with a cover and chop it into small pieces.Press each piece with your hand and get a pancake. Finally, put the filling in the center, wrap it into a half­moon shape and seal the edges. Put the jiaozi into boiling water.When well cooked, it is ready to be served. Whenever I eat jiaozi, it brings the happy memories of the family and also good luck to me. 第一段 简单介绍食物 1.Sushi evolved from Southeast Asian fermented fish preservation techniques over 2，000 years ago.　寿司是由 2 000 多年前东南亚的发酵鱼类保存技术演变而来的。 2.As one of humanity's oldest processed foods, cheese has nourished civilizations from ancient Mesopotamia to modern France.　作为人类最古老的加工食品之一，奶酪滋养了从古代美索不达米亚到现代法国的诸多文明。 第二段 食物的制作方法和工艺 1.Traditional Peking duck requires 18­hour air­drying before roasting. 传统的北京烤鸭需要风干 18 小时后才能烤制。 2.Authentic Neapolitan pizza must be baked in a wood­fired oven at 485 ℃. 正宗的那不勒斯比萨必须在 485 ℃ 的柴火烤炉中烘烤。 3.First, mix minced pork, chopped cabbage, and seasonings in a bowl to make the filling. 首先，将猪肉糜、切碎的卷心菜和调味料放入碗中搅拌，制成馅料。 4.Some families even add shrimp or mushrooms for extra texture. 有些家庭还会加入虾仁或蘑菇，以增加口感。 5.Whisk eggs and sugar until the mixture becomes pale and fluffy. 搅拌鸡蛋和糖，直到混合物变得苍白蓬松。 第三段 食物的意义和影响 1.Mooncakes represent family reunion at the Mid­Autumn Festival. 月饼代表中秋节家人团聚。 2.Thanksgiving turkey symbolizes harvest and gratitude.　感恩节的火鸡象征着丰收和感恩。 3.Beyond nutrition, cheese carries cultural significance.　除了营养，奶酪还具有文化意义。 4.As globalization continues, this ancient food keeps bridging cultures through shared culinary experiences. 随着全球化的不断深入，这种古老的食物通过共享美食体验，不断架起文化的桥梁。 写作二　场景微续写(袁隆平：以稻济世，以心报国) ——有效强化教考衔接 词汇 积累 [动作描写]　commit oneself to, acknowledge, defeat, analyse, insist on, flee, found, come to power, encounter, mourn [人物描写]　committed, academic, property, novelist, politician, genius, gentle, passion→passionate, extraordinary, moustache, peculiarity, professor, remarkable 佳句 积累 [人物描写]　1.Tu Youyou, a committed and patient scientist, was born in Ningbo, China, on 30 December 1930, and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1955. 2.Einstein was not only a genius；he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people. 3.To the public, he was seen as a slightly odd­looking but kind and funny man. [比喻]　He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock. [主旨升华]　It is indeed an honour for China's scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world. ——积累内化应用提升 [场景呈现]　袁隆平教授是农业领域一位非凡的天才。他致力于解决粮食短缺问题，全身心投入杂交水稻研究中。他是一个心地善良、性格温和的人，且对工作充满热情。在他漫长的研究历程中，尽管他遇到了无数困难，但他坚持继续前进。他的辛勤工作最终使许多地区的饥饿问题得到解决。他的巨大贡献得到了世界的广泛认可。他不追求名利，而是将自己的一生都奉献给了人类的福祉。当他去世时，全世界的人们都为他哀悼。他的精神将始终激励我们勇敢面对挑战，为更美好的未来努力奋斗。 Professor Yuan Longping was an extraordinary genius in the field of agriculture. 1.Committed__to__solving__the__problem__of__food__shortage (分词短语作状语), he devoted himself to hybrid­rice research. 2.He__was__a__gentle__man__with__a__kind__heart,__and__passionate__about__his__work. In his long research journey, 3.though__he__encountered__numerous__difficulties (让步状语从句), 4.he__insisted__on__moving__forward. His hard work finally defeated hunger in many areas. 5.His__great__contributions__were__widely__acknowledged__by__the__world. He didn't seek fame or fortune but dedicated his whole life to the well­being of humanity. When he passed away, people all over the world mourned for him. His spirit will always inspire us to face challenges bravely and work hard for a better future. 短 语 必 记 1.dedicate oneself to　　　　　致力于 2.give one's all 倾尽全力 3.go above and beyond 全力以赴 4.put one's heart and soul into 全心全意投入 5.devote time and energy to　 投入时间和精力于 6.selfless dedication　　　无私奉献 7.work tirelessly for... 不辞辛劳地为……工作 8.sacrifice personal interests for... 牺牲个人利益以换取…… 必 背 金 句 1.Despite facing countless failures, she never gave up and finally achieved her goal with her extraordinary perseverance.　尽管遭遇了无数次失败，她却从未放弃，凭借非凡的毅力最终实现了目标。 2.His selfless dedication to the education of rural children has changed the fate of hundreds of kids over the past 30 years.　过去 30 年来，他对乡村儿童教育事业的无私奉献，改变了数百名孩子的命运。 3.His dedication to the community service is truly inspiring; he volunteers every weekend to help the elderly and the disabled. 他对社区服务的奉献精神着实令人鼓舞，他每个周末都会志愿帮助老人和残疾人。 4.The teacher gave her all to ensure that every student received a quality education, which in turn helped students achieve their full potential. 这位老师倾尽全力确保每个学生都能获得优质教育，这反过来帮助学生充分发挥他们的潜力。 5.Because she dedicated her life to improving the lives of poor children, she has become a role model for many.　因为她致力于改善贫困儿童的生活，她已经成为许多人的榜样。 6.Her translation works have built a vital cultural bridge between China and Western countries, helping foreign readers understand the depth of traditional Chinese culture. 她的翻译作品为中西方搭建了重要的文化桥梁，助力外国读者领略中国传统文化的深厚底蕴。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $