内容正文:
高中
译林版·必修第一册
Unit2Let's talk teens导作精讲
Giving advice on parent-.child relationships(就亲子关系给出建议)
译林版必修第一册Unit2Let's talk teens写作精讲
单元:译林版必修第-册Unit2Let's talk teens写作在务:Giving advice on parent-child
relationships(就亲子关系给出建议)一一写一封建议信,帮助他人改善与父母的关系。
审题
1
话题:针对他人在亲子关系方面遇到的问题与困扰(如沟通不畅、代际观念冲突、父母期
望过高)撰写建议信,提供实用建议。
2体裁:书信类应用文(建议信)
3人称:以第二人称you为主,辅以第一人称|
4时态:以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态
5字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
〉点明写信目的(回应对方亲子关系问题)
>给出2-3条具体可操作建议(如换位思考、主动沟通、共情理解)
〉表达鼓励与美好祝愿
二
文章结构
1
开头段:礼貌问候+点明写信背景与目的,简要回应对方在亲子关系中的困
扰,出下文建议。
2
主体段:分条阐述具体建议,每条建议搭配合理理由,用连接词衔接(First of
all,Besides,Last but not least),逻辑清晰。
3
结尾段:表达鼓励与信心,祝愿对方改善亲子关系,收尾符合书信格式(ous
sincerely,.署名)。
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
conflict
n.冲突;矛盾
understanding
n.理解;体谅
respect
n.w.尊重
communicate v.-communication n.
沟通;交流
patience n.patient adj.
耐心;耐心的
appreciate v.-appreciation n.
感激;欣赏
compromise
n.N.妥协;让步
emotion n.emotional adj.
情感;情感的
2.常用短语
短语
释义
have a conflict with sb.
与某人有冲突
bridge the generation gap
弥合代沟
put yo urself in sb.'s shoes
站在某人的角度想
share your feelings
分享你的感受
listen to sb.patiently
耐心倾听某人
make a compromise
做出让步
ease the tension
缓和紧张关系
show respect for
表现出对.…的尊重
3.基础造句
I am writing to offer you some advice on how to improve your relationship with
your parents.
我写信是为了给你一些关于如何改善与父母关系的建议。
2 First,try to put yourself in your parents'shoes and understand their concerns.
首先,试着站在父母的角度考虑,理解他们的担忧。
3It is beneficial to have a heart-to-heart talk with them when both sides are
calm.
当双方都冷静时,与他们进行一次坦诚的谈话是很有益的。
4If you follow my advice,you will gradually build a better parent-child
relationship.
如果你采纳我的建议,你会逐渐建立更融洽的亲子关系。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通
want to desire to long to
普通
important→
of great significance/vital
普通
understand each otherdevelop mutual understanding
普通
solve the problemresolve the issue effectively
加分句型
1Knowing that you are troubled by the tension with your parents,I am writing
to offer you some practical suggestions.
得知你因与父母关系紧张而烦恼,我写信给你提供一些实用建议。(现在分词作原因状语)
2 Not only should you express your feelings honestly,but you also need to listen
to their opinions patiently.
你不仅应该坦诚表达感受,还需要耐心倾听他们的想法。(部分倒装句型)
3 It is highly recommended that you should choose a proper time to have a face-
to-face conversation.
强烈建议你选择一个合适的时间进行一次面对面交流。(虚拟语气句型)
Only by taking the first step to understand them can you gradually dissolve
the misunderstanding.
只有迈出理解他们的第一步,你扌能逐渐消除误解。(倒装句型)
五、写作模板
(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting along with your parents.I
am writing to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to put yourself in their shoes (-)because
understanding their perspective is the key to effective communication(
-)Besides,you should share your true feelings with them in a gentle way
议二),which can help you both know each other better(好处二).Last but not
least,I strongly advise you to take part in family activities together(建议三),as
it is beneficial to creating a warm and relaxing atmosphere at home ()
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will improve
your parent-child relationship soon.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
参考翻译:
亲爱的[姓名]:
听说你和父母相处得不好,我很遗憾。我写信给你一些有用的建议。
首先,最好站在他们的角度思考(建议一),因为理解他们的观点是有效沟通的关键(原因一)。其
次,你应该温和地与他们分享你真实的感受(建议二),这能帮助你们更好地了解彼此(好处二)。最
后但同样重要的是,我强烈建议你一起参加家庭活动(建议三),这有助于营造温馨轻松的家庭氛围
(好处三)。
希望我的建议对你有帮助。我相信你很快会改善亲子关系。
此致
敬礼!
[你的名字]
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:你的朋友王芳来信说,进入高中后她和父母经常因为学习时间安排吵
架,她很苦恼。请给她写一封建议信。
Dear Wang Fang,
I am sorry to hear that you often argue with your parents about your study
schedule.I am writing to offer you some practical advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to sit down and calmly explain your plan to them,
because open communication can reduce misunderstanding.Besides,you should
try to listen to their concerns and reach a compromise,which may help you find a
balanced timetable.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to prove your self
discipline through small actions,as it is beneficial to gaining their trust.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful.I am sure that with patience and effort,you
and your parents will understand each other better.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考译文:
亲爱的王芳:
听说你经常因为学习安排和父母争吵,我很遗憾。我写信给你一些实用的建议。
首先,最好坐下来平静地向他们解释你的计划,因为坦诚的沟通可以减少误解。其次,你应该试着倾听他们的
担忧并达成妥协,这也许能帮你找到平衡的时间表。最后但同样重要的是,我强烈建议你通过小行动证明你的
自律,这有助于赢得他们的信任。
希望我的建议对你有帮助。我相信,凭借耐心和努力,你和父母会更好地理解彼此。
此致
敬礼!
李华
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议改善与父母的沟通
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear that you often argue with your parents.I'm writing to offer you
some useful advice on improving your relationship
First of all,it is a good idea to listen to your parents patiently,because it helps you
understand their concerns and avoid unnecessary conflicts.Besides,you should
express your own feelings calmly,which can make them respect your opinions
more.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to spend quality time together,such
as having dinner or going for a walk,as it is beneficial to building trust and
closeness.
I hope my advice will work for you.I'm sure you will get along better soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jack
范文二:建议主动分担家庭责任
Dear Wang Lin,
I'm glad to hear that you want to strengthen the bond with your parents.Let me
share some effective tips with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to help with housework regularly,because it shows
your responsibility and relieves your parents'stress.Besides,you should share
your school life with them,which can make them feel involved and valued.Last but
not least,I strongly advise you to say "thank you"and "I love you"often,as it is
beneficial to creating a warm and supportive atmosphere at home.
I hope my advice will be helpful.Looking forward to your happy family life.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy