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高中
译林版·必修第一册
Unit1 Back to school写作精讲
Starting a new school club(创办新的学校社团)
Unit1 Back to school写作精讲
写作任务:Starting a new school club(创办新的学校社团)
审题
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话题:以杜团创始人的身份,介绍自己创办的新社团,包括社团名称、创立原因、主要活
动、
招募对象及号召加入。
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体裁:应用文(社团介绍/倡议书/招新通知),可看作一篇简短的宣传文稿。
3人称:以第一人称I/We为主,向读者(同学)介绍时可用第二人称you进行号召。
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时态:一般现在时(介绍社团现状、宗旨、常规活动)为主;一般将来时(展望杜团未来
或活动计划)为辅。
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字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
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核心要点:
>社团名称及创办缘由
>社团目标与意义
>2-3项主要活动内容
>招募方式与鼓励加入
二、
文章结构
1开头段:直接点明社团名称,说明创办目的或背景,引起读者兴趣。
I'm excited to announce that I have founded a new club-[Club
Name].
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主体段:分2-3点详细展开。
>社团宗旨/目标
〉具体活动(如:每周例会、实践项目、特邀讲座等)
〉加入社团的好处(提升能力、结交朋友、丰富校园生活等)
各部分使用衔接词(First of all,,Beside5,Moreo ver),做到层次分明。
3结尾段:发出号召,表达期待。
If you are interested,please sign up at...We are looking forward
to your joining!
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
found establish
v.创立
aim/purpose
n.目标
activity
n.活动
member
n.成员
recruit
V.招募
contribute
v.贡献
enrich
V.丰富
opportunity
n.机会
2.常用短语
短语
释义
set up start a club
创办社团
be aimed at
旨在…
provide a platform for
为提供平台
短语
释义
develop skills
培养技能
broaden one's horizons
开阔视野
make a difference
有所作为
sign up for
报名参加
have a chance to do
有机会做.…
3.基础造句
I am writing to introduce our newly-founded school club-the English Corner.
我写信介绍我们新创办的社团一一英语角。
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Our club aims to help students improve their spoken English.
我们的社团旨在帮助学生提高英语口语。
3We will hold activities every Friday afternoon.
我们将在每周五下午举办活动。
4You will have the chance to communicate with foreign teachers.
你将有机会和外教交流。
If you are interested,please join us without hesitation.
如果你感兴趣,请毫不犹豫地加入我们。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通want→desire/be eager to
普a通help→contribute to provide.for
普通
importantsignificant/of great importance
普通
manya variety of various
加分句型
1Not only does our club offer a chance to practise English,but it also broadens
our horizons.
我们的社团不仅提供练习英语的机会,还开阔我们的视野。(倒装句)
2 It is through these activities that we can explore our potential.
正是通过这些活动,我们中能发掘自己的潜力。(强调句)
There is no doubt that joining our club will make your school life more
colourful.
毫无疑问,加入我们的社团会让你的校园生活更加多彩。(名词性从句)
Equipped with professional guidance,our club is sure to bring you a rewarding
experience.
有了专业指导,我们的社团一定会给你带来充实的体验。(分词做定语)
5 We firmly believe that every member will benefit a lot from this platform.
我们坚信每位成员都将从这个平台中获益良多。(宾语从句)
五、军作模板(100-120词)
Dear fellow students,
I'm thrilled to announce that I have founded a new school club-IClub Namel
The club is aimed at Ipurposel.
First of all,we will lactivity 1l,which can [benefit 11.Besides,our club regularly
[activity 21,helping members [benefit 21.Moreover,you will have the
opportunity to lactivity 31.
If you are interested,please sign up at llocation/wayl.I'm convinced that this
club will enrich your campus life.Looking forward to your participation!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考翻译:
亲爱的同学们:
我很激动地宣布,我创办了一个新的学校社团一一[社团名称]。该社团旨在[目的]。
首先,我们将[活动1],这可以[好处1]。此外,我们的社团定期开展[活动2],帮助成员[好处2]。而
且,你将有机会[活动3]。
如果你感兴趣,请在[地点/方式]报名。我相信这个社团会丰富你的校园生活。期待你的参与!
此致
敬礼!
李华
六、文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你是李华,你想创办一个名为“Green Action''的环保社团,请写一
篇介绍文章招募成员。
Dear fellow students,
I'm excited to announce that I have founded a new school club-Green Action.
The club is aimed at raising environmental awareness and protecting our campus.
First of all,we will organize a "trash sorting"activity every month,which helps us
develop good habits.Besides,our club holds a recycling workshop,teaching
members how to turn waste into useful items.Moreover,you will have the chance
to join tree-planting trips and learn more about nature.
If you are eager to make a difference,please sign up at the student union office
before Friday.I firmly believe that your participation will make our school greener.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考译文:
亲爱的同学们:
我很激动地宣布,我创办了一个新的学校社团一一Green Action.。该社团旨在提高环保意识、保护我们的校
园。
首先,我们每月组织一次“垃圾分类”活动,帮助我们养成好习惯。此外,我们杜团还举办回收利用工作坊,教
成员如何将废弃物变成有用的物品。而且,你将有机会参加植树之旅,更深入地了解自然。
如果你渴望有所作为,请在周五之前到学生会办公室报名。我坚信你的参与会让我们的校园更加绿色。期待见
到你!
此致
敬礼!
李华
拓展苑文背诵积累
范文一:建议创办读书俱乐部
Dear Li Hua,
I am writing to share my idea of starting a new school club-a Book Club.I
believe it will help us enjoy reading together.
First of all,we should invite classmates who love reading,because it can create a
supportive community.Besides,we need to choose a regular meeting time,which
can help us stay organized.Last but not least,it is a good idea to prepare
discussion topics,as it is beneficial to deepening our understanding of books.
I hope you will join me in this plan.I'm sure it will be a great success.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
(112 words)
范文二:建议创办环保社团
Dear Chen,
I am excited to tell you about my plan to start a Green Club at school.It aims to
raise environmental awareness among students.
First of all,organizing recycling activities is a good idea,because they can reduce
waste and keep our campus clean.Besides,we should plant trees and flowers
around the school,which can beautify the environment.Last but not least,I
strongly advise you to invite a teacher to guide us,as it is beneficial to getting
professional advice.
I hope you can support this idea.Let's work together for a greener school!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Fang
(108 words)