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高中
外研版·必修第三册
Unit6 Disaster and hope写作精讲
Writing safety guidelines(撰写安全指南)
Unit6 Disaster and hope写作精讲
写作任务:Writing safety guidelines(撰写安全指南)
审题
1话题:针对自然灾害(如地震、台风、洪水、火灾等)或突发紧急情况,撰写安全指南,
指导人们如何预防、应对及自救互救
2体裁:说明类应用文(安全指南),通常采用分条列举式,语言简洁明了,具有指性和警
示性
3人称:以第二人称you为主,也可使用祈使句(无主语);必要时辅以第一人称w表示
共同行动
4
时态:以一般现在时为核心时态(说明普逼适用的规则),析使句用动词原形
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
>说明灾难/紧急情况的类型
>给出3-4条具体的预防或应对措施
>强调安全原则,必要时列出禁止事项
>表达希望与鼓励(如“保持冷静”“遵循指南”)
文章结构
开头段:简要说明本指南针对的灾难/紧急情况,引出目的(确保安全)
2主体段:分条阐述具体安全措施,每条用祈使句或you should/must表达,
搭配简短理由或注意事项;可用连接词(First,Second,Finally等)使层次清晰
3
结尾段:总结关键原则(如“保持冷静最重要”),表达祝愿或鼓励
三、
核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
disaster
n.灾难
emergency
n.紧急情况
evacuate
V.疏散;撤离
shelter
n.避难所y.躲避
survive
V.幸存;生存
precaution
n.预防措施
calm
adj.冷静的v.使冷静
instruction
n.指示;说明
dangerous
adj,危险的
protect
V.保护;protection n.保护
2.常用短语
短语
释义
natural disaster
自然灾害
stay calm
保持冷静
take shelter
躲避
follow the instructions
遵循指示
be aware of
意识到;注意
in case of
如果发生…
短语
释义
keep away from
远离
call for help
求救
first aid
急救
emergency exit
紧急出口
3.基础造句
1In case of an earthquake,stay calm and take shelter under a strong table.
如果发生地震,保持冷静,躲在结实的桌子下。
2
You should prepare an emergency kit with water,food,and a flashlight.
你应该准备一个装有水、食物和手电筒的应急包。
3
Never use the lift during a fire;use the stairs instead.
火灾期间绝不使用电梯,应走楼梯。
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Follow the evacuation route and go to the nearest safe area.
沿着疏散路线前往最近的安全区域。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通
important of great significance vital essential
普通
dangerous→
hazardous/life-threatening
普通
need to are required to /must
普通
always→under no circumstances(绝不,用于否定)
普通
stay→remain
加分句型
1 It is essential that you remain calm in the face of a disaster.
面对灾难时,保持冷静至关重要。(主语从句+虚拟语气)
2 Not only should you evacuate immediately,but you also need to help others if
possible.
你不仅要立即撤离,如果可能还要帮助他人。(部分倒装)
3 Under no circumstances should you ignore the official warnings.
在任何情况下你都不应忽视官方警告。(否定倒装)
Only by following these guidelines can you ensure your safety.
只有遵循这些指南,你扌能确保安全。(倒装句型)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Safety Guidelines for [Disaster Typel
In case of a(n)[Disaster Namel,it is vital to follow these safety guidelines
to protect yourself.
First of all,[Measure 1].This is because [Reason].
Secondly,make sure to [Measure 2].For example,[Examplel.
Finally,[Measure 3].Remember:[Reminder/Warning].
Above all,stay calm and act quickly.If you follow the instructions above,
you will greatly increase your chances of survival.
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:针对地震灾害,撰写一份安全指南,指导学校师生如何在地震中保护自
己。
Safety Guidelines for an Earthquake
In case of an earthquake,it is essential to follow these safety guidelines to protect
yourself and others.
First of all,stay calm and take shelter under a strong desk or table.Keep away
from windows,heavy furniture,and anything that might fall.
Secondly,if you are outdoors,move to an open area away from buildings,trees,
and power lines.Do not stand near walls or lamp posts.
Finally,after the shaking stops,check for injuries and follow the evacuation
instructions.Use the stairs instead of the lift,and go to the designated safe zone.
Above all,remain calm and help others when possible.Only by staying prepared
can you reduce the risks during an earthquake.
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议同学注意网络安全
Dear Tom,
I am sorry to hear that you are worried about online safety.I am writing to offer
you some practical suggestions.
First of all,it is a good idea to never share personal information like your phone
number or address online,because it can protect you from cyber fraud.Besides,
you should use strong passwords for all your accounts,which can prevent others
from hacking into them.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to avoid clicking
on unknown links,as it is beneficial to keeping your device safe.
I hope my advice will work for you.I'm sure you will enjoy a safer online
experience.
Yours sincerely,
Jack
范文二:建议同学注意交通安全
Dear Anna,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on staying safe in traffic.I'd like to
share some useful tips with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to always walk on the pavement and use zebra
crossings,because it helps avoid accidents.Besides,you should never use your
mobile phone while crossing the road,which can keep you fully aware of the
surroundings.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to wear a helmet when
riding a bike,as it is beneficial to protecting your head from injury.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to hearing about your safe
travels.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy