Unit 2 Making a difference 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

高中 外研版·必修第三册 Unit2 Making a difference写作精讲 Writing a biography(写传记/人物小传) Unit2 Making a difference·写作精讲：Writing a biography (写传记/人物小传) 写作在务：根据给定的人物信息或主题，撰写一篇人物传记(biography),介绍某位做出积极贡献的人物， 突出其成就与影响，体现“Making a difference"的主题。 申题 1 话题：介绍一位在某个领域（科学、教育、慈善、环保等）做出重要贡献的人物，描述其 生平、主要事迹及影响。 2 体裁：记叙文（人物传记)，可带有议论或评价。 3人称：以第三人称(he/she/his/her)为主，可适当使用第一人称(we/our)表达 后示。 4时态：一般过去时（叙述生平事迹为主，一般现在时（描述影响或现状），一般将来时 (展望意义)。 5 字数要求：高考标准100-140词（根据题目灵活调整）。 6 核心要点： ,人物身份与背景（何时何地出生、从事什么领域） >主要贡献或成就（做了什么重要的事） ,人物品质（坚持、奉献、勇气等） >意义或后示（如何改变了世界或他人） 二、文章结构 1 开头段：引出人物，简要介绍其身份、时代背景或最突出的标签。 2主体段：按时间顺序或重要性顺序，叙述人物生平的主要事迹，着重描写其关键 贡献、克服的困难以及体现的精神品质。 3】 结尾段：总结人物的影响，表达敬意或后发读者“making a difference"的意 义。 三、 核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 contribute contribution v.贡献；捐献；n.贡献 devote/devotion v.投身；奉献；n.奉献 commit/commitment v.承诺；致力于；n,承诺；投入 achievement/achieve n.成就；V.实现 inspire inspiration v.激励；n.鼓舞人心的人/事 influence n./N.影响 overcome V.克服（困难） remarkable adj,非凡的；显著的 pioneer n.先驱；v.开创 determination determined n.决心；adj.坚定的 2.常用短语 短语 释义 make a difference 产生影响；有所作为 devote oneself to 致力于 be committed to 致力于；全心投入 overcome difficulties 克服困难 短语 释义 set an example for 为…树立榜样 leave a deep impression on 给…留下深刻印象 be known as 作为.而闻名 make great contributions to 对.做出巨大贡献 in one's lifetime 在某人的一生中 change one's life 改变某人的生活 3.基础造句 1He was born into a poor family but never gave up his dream. 他出生在一个贫困家庭，但从未放弃自己的梦想。 2 She devoted all her time to helping the sick children. 她把所有时间都用来帮助生病的孩子。 3 His remarkable achievement inspired millions of people around the world. 他的非凡成就激励了全世界数百万人。 4 Through his hard work,he made great contributions to medical science. 通过努力，他对医学做出了巨大贡献。 四、好词好句（高级句型） 高级词汇替换 普通great→remarkable/extraordinary/significant 普通】 famous well-known distinguished renowned 普通 helpassist support contribute to 普通】 hard work perseverance /dedication relentless effort 加分句型 1 Born in ...he showed great talent for...at an early age. 出生于，他从小就展现出…方面的极大天赋。（过去分词短语作状语） 2 It was his determination and perseverance that enabled him to succeed. 正是他的决心和毅力使他成功。（强调句型） 3Only after years of hard work did he finally achieve his goal. 经过多年努力，他扌最终实现了目标。（倒装句型）】 4Not only did she save countless lives,but she also set a shining example for us. 她不仅拯救了无数生命，还为我们树立了闪光的榜样。（部分倒装） 5 So great was his influence that people still remember him today. 他的影响如此之大，以至于今天人们仍然记得他。(so.that倒装) 五、写作模板(110-130词) Title /Introduction (人物姓名)was a remarkable(身份/领域).Born in(出生年份/地点)，he/she showed (品质/字能)from an early age. Main body In his/her life,he/she devoted himself/herself to(主要事业).One of his/her greatest achievements was(具体成就).Despite(遇到的困难)，he/she never gave up.He/She once said,“(人物名言或精神)”. Conclusion (人物姓名)made a real difference in(领域).His/Her story teaches us that with dedication and courage,anyone can make a difference.We should remember his/her spirit and carry it forward. 参考翻译： 标题/引言 (人物姓名)是一位杰出的（身份/领域）。他/她出生于（出生年份/地点），从小就展现出（品质/扌 能)。 主体 他/她一生致力于（主要事业）。他/她最伟大的成就之一是（具体成就）。尽管（遇到的困难），他/她从 未放弃。他/她會说：“（人物名言或精神）”。 结论 (人物姓名)在（领域）真正做出了改变。他/她的故事告诉我们，只要有奉献和勇气，任何人都能有 所作为。我们应该铭记他/她的精神并传承下去。 六、文仿写(120词左右) 仿写题目：假设你是李华，请根据以下信息写一篇人物传记，介绍“杂交水稻之父” 袁隆平的生平与贡献，体现“making a difference"的主题。 Yuan Longping:A Man Who Made a Difference Yuan Longping was a renowned Chinese scientist known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice".Born in Beijing in 1930,he was determined to solve the problem of food shortage from a young age. In his lifetime,he devoted himself to agricultural research.One of his greatest achievements was developing hybrid rice,which greatly increased rice production and fed millions of people.Despite many failures and doubts,he never gave up.He once said,"My life's goal is to keep everyone away from hunger." Yuan Longping made a real difference in agriculture.His spirit of dedication and perseverance continues to inspire people around the world.We should learn from him and try our best to make a difference in our own fields. 参考译文： 袁隆平：一位有所作为的人 袁隆平是中国著名科学家，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。他1930年出生于北京，从小立志解决粮食短缺问题。 他一生致力于农业研究。他最伟大的成就之一是研发杂交水稻，大大提高了水稻产量，养活了数百万人。尽管 历经多次失败和质疑，他从未放弃。他會说：“我毕生的追求就是让所有人远离饥饿。” 袁隆平在农业领域做出了真正的贡献。他奉献与坚持的精神继续激励着世界各地的人们。我们应该向他学习， 在自己的领域尽力有所作为。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：袁隆平小传 Yuan Longping,known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice,"was a great Chinese scientist.He devoted his whole life to solving the food problem. 1.Born in 1930,Yuan witnessed severe hunger in his youth,which inspired his determination to increase rice production. 2.He led his team to successfully develop hybrid rice,boosting global rice output by millions of tons each year. 3.His invention has fed countless people worldwide,especially in developing countries.He was awarded the World Food Prize in 2004. Yuan Longping's selfless dedication and pioneering spirit will always inspire us.His legacy lives on in every grain of rice. (115 words) 范文二：海伦凯勒小传 Helen Keller was an inspiring American writer and activist.Despite being blind and deaf from a young age,she achieved remarkable success. 1.Born in 1880,she lost her sight and hearing after a serious illness,but never gave up hope. 2.With the help of her teacher Anne Sullivan,she learned to read,write and speak, graduating from Radcliffe College with honors. 3.She wrote many books,including The Story of My Life,and fought for the rights of the disabled.Her courage and perseverance encouraged millions around the world. Helen Keller proved that disability does not limit one's potential.Her life is a true testament to the power of determination. (118 words)