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Unit4 Amazing art写作精讲
Writing about an artwork(描写艺术作品)
Unit4 Amazing Art写作精讲
写作任务:Writing about an artwork(描写艺术作品)
审题
1话题:描述一件具体的艺术作品(如绘画、雕塑、建筑等),包括其基本信息、外观特征、
艺术手法以及个人感受或评价。
2体裁:描述性短文(说明文/记叙文)
3人称:以第三人称(it/the painting/the sculpture)为主,可适当使用第-人称()
表达个人观感
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时态:以一般现在时为核心时态(描述画作内容、艺术特点等),必要时使用一般过去时
(介绍创作背景)
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字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
>点明作品名称、作者、创作年代等基本信息
>描述画面/作品的主要内容、色彩、构图等
>分析艺术手法或象征意义(可选)
>表达个人感受或评价
文章结构
1开头段:介绍作品名称、作者、创作时间及艺术类型,概述作品给观者留下的第
印象。
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主体段:
>详细描述作品的内容(人物、景物、颜色、光线等)
,分析艺术手法(如笔触、明暗对比、构图技巧等)
>简要提及作品的历史或文化背景(如有必要)
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结尾段:总结个人感受,点明该作品为何吸引你,或它对艺术史的价值。
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
masterpiece
n.杰作
brushstroke
n.笔触
composition
n.构图
colour
n.颜色;色调
shade
n.阴影;色度
contrast
n./.对比
realistic
adj.写实的
abstract
adj.抽象的
emotional
adj.富有情感的
vivid
adj.生动的
capture
V.捕捉(瞬间、情感)
portray
V.描绘
represent
V.代表;象征
2.常用短语
短语
释义
be famous for...
因…而著名
短语
释义
be painted by...
由…所画
in the foreground background
在前景/背景
draw one's attention
吸引某人的注意
a sense of peace movement
一种宁静/动感
use light and shadow to do...
运用光影来.
leave a deep impression on sb.
给某人留下深刻印象
be rich in detail
细节丰富
3.基础造句
1
The painting was created by Van Gogh in 1889.
这幅画由梵高于1889年创作。
2 In the centre of the painting stands a woman wearing a red dress.
画面中心站着一位穿红裙的女士。
3
The artist uses bright colours to express a feeling of joy.
艺术家运用明亮的色彩表达喜悦之情。
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The contrast between light and shadow makes the scene more realistic.
光影对比使场景更加真实。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通
bea utiful(magnificent/breathtaking stunning
普通
famousworld-renowned celebrated
普通
showdepict/illustrate/demonstrate
普通
interesting-(fascinating appealing /captivating
加分句型
When first viewed,the painting immediately draws the viewer into a world of...
初看这幅画,它立刻将观者带入一个..的世界。(时间状语从句+生动动词)
2What impresses me most is the way the artist uses light to create a
mysterious atmosphere.
最合我印象深刻的是艺术家运用光线营造神秘氛围的手法。(what主语从句)
3 Not only does the painting show a beautiful scene,but it also conveys a deep
meaning about life.
这幅画不仅展现了美丽的景色,还传达了关于生命的深刻含义。(部分倒装)
It is the delicate brushstrokes that make the artwork come to life
正是细腻的笔触让这件艺术品栩栩如生。(强调句型)
五、军作模板(100-120词)
Title of the Artwork
The Starry Night by Vincent van Gogh(1889)
Opening:
The Starry Night,painted by Vincent van Gogh in 1889,is one of the most famous
masterpieces in the world.It immediately catches the viewer's eye with its swirling
sky and bright stars.
Body:
In the foreground,a dark cypress tree rises like a flame,while the village below
lies in shadow.The sky is filled with rolling clouds and glowing stars,painted with
thick,expressive brushstrokes.Van Gogh uses strong contrasts between blue and
yellow to create a sense of movement and emotion.
Closing:
This painting deeply impresses me because it shows the artist's inner world full of
both anxiety and hope.It is a perfect example of how art can express feelings
beyond words.
(约120词)
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:请你描述一幅你最喜欢的中外画作(例如《蒙娜丽莎》《清明上河图》或
《向日葵》等),写一篇短文介绍其内容并表达你的感受。
参考范文(以《向日葵》为例)
Sunflowers,painted by Vincent van Gogh in 1888,is a series of still-life paintings
that are full of life and warmth.The moment I saw the bright yellow sunflowers,I
felt a strong sense of energy.
In the painting,twelve sunflowers are placed in a simple vase.Some are fresh and
upright,while others are bent or wilting.Van Gogh uses thick,textured
brushstrokes and varied shades of yellow-from pale gold to deep orange-to
show different stages of life.The background is a soft light blue,which makes the
yellow flowers stand out even more.
What touches me most is the way Van Gogh turns ordinary flowers into a symbol of
hope and vitality.This painting reminds me to find beauty in everyday things.It is
truly a masterpiece that shines both on the canvas and in the heart.
(约120词)
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一描写油画《星月夜》
Dear Vincent,
I am deeply impressed by your masterpiece The Starry Night,which is now one of
my favorite artworks.I'd like to share my thoughts on it.
First of all,the swirling sky and bright stars create a dreamlike atmosphere,
making the painting full of energy and emotion.Besides,the dark village below
contrasts sharply with the glowing sky,which highlights a sense of loneliness and
beauty.Last but not least,the thick brushstrokes and vivid colors contribute to the
painting's unique texture and power.
I feel both calm and inspired when looking at it.Truly a timeless work of art!
Yours sincerely,
Lucy
范文二:描写雕塑《大卫》
Dear Michelangelo,
I recently saw a photograph of your famous statue David and was amazed by its
perfection.Let me tell you what I observed.
First of all,the detailed muscles and natural posture show David's strength and
confidence right before the battle.Besides,the thoughtful expression on his face
reflects both concentration and courage,which makes the figure lifelike.Last but
not least,the smooth marble surface and balanced proportions demonstrate your
extraordinary skill.
Every time I look at it,I feel the power of human spirit.Your work is truly
inspiring!
Yours sincerely,
Tom