Unit 6 At one with nature 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

高中 外研版·必修第一册 Unit6 At one with nature写作精讲 Writing a summary(写摘要) Unit6 At one with nature一写作精讲 写作任务：Writing a summary(写摘要) 审题 1话题：针对一篇关于“人与自然和谐相处”的文章（如描述梯田、生态农业、自然景观与人 类活动的关系等)，撰写一篇摘要，概括文章的主要内容与核心观点。 2 体裁：摘要(summary),属于说明性或议论文体的概括写作。 3人称：以第三人称为主(the author,.the article,it),避免使用第一、二人称。 4时态：以一般现在时为核心时态（描述文章内容时用一般现在时）；若涉及背景事实可用现 在完成时。 5 字数要求：高考标准约80-120词（根据原文长度灵活调整，通常为原文的三分之一左 右)。 6 核心要点： ,准确捕捉文章主旨(main idea) >提炼2-3个关键细节或分论点 >不加入个人观点、评论或例子 >用自己的语言重新组织，避免照抄原句 >保持逻辑连贯，使用连接词衔接 文章结构 1 开头段(1句)：点明文章的标题（若有）或主题，直接给出文章的主旨大意。 The article discusses how the local people live in harmony with nature by creating terraced fields. 2 主体段(2-3句)：按原文逻辑顺序，概括主要论据或关键过程。 >每句介绍一个核心信息，用适当连接词(frst,besides,moreover,.however)体现层 次。 >注意不要罗列细节，只保留支撑主旨的重要事实。 3结尾段(1句，可选)：对文章结论或总体意义进行一句话概括（也可融入主体段 末尾)。 In conclusion,the writer emphasizes the importance of respecting natural cycles. 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 summary n.摘要 main idea 主旨 key point 关键点 in harmony with 与..…和谐 adapt to 适应 make use of 利用 balance n.N.平衡 ecosystem n.生态系统 sustainable adj.可持续的 traditional practice 传统做法 2.常用短语 短语 释义 according to the article the a uthor 根据文章/作者 短语 释义 the passage mainly focuses on 文章主要聚焦于 it is pointed out that 文中指出 one of the key aspects is 其中一个关键方面是 as a result of 由于…的结果 in this way 通过这种方式 be closely related to 与…密切相关 reflect the wisdom of 反映了…的智慧 3.基础造句 1The article mainly describes how farmers turn steep slopes into productive fields. 文章主要描述了农民如何将陡坡改造成高产田。 2 First,the local people built stone walls to prevent soil from washing away. 首先，当地人修建石墙以防止土壤流失。 3 Moreover,they used a clever irrigation system that makes full use of rainwater. 此外，他们利用巧妙的灌溉系统充分利用雨水。 4The author concludes that this traditional method shows a deep respect for nature. 作者总结道，这种传统方法体现了对自然的深深尊重。 四、好词好句 (高级加分句型) 高级词汇替换 普通】 talk about discuss/explore illustrate 普通 important(significant/essential/vital) 普通 showdemonstrate reveal reflect 普通 useemploy make full use of/take advantage of 加分句型 1 The article offers an in-depth analysis of how... 文章深入分析了… 2 According to the text,..is a typical example of... 根据文章，.…是.的一个典型例子。 3 Through the description of...,the author highlights the importance of... 通过对.的描述，作者强调了.的重要性。 4It can be concluded that... 可以总结出… 5What the writer emphasizes is that... 作者强调的是… 五、'写作模板(80-120词) The article【文章标题，若有]mainly discusses[主旨：人与自然的某种关系/做法]， First,the author points out that[第一个关键点】.Besides,.[第二个关键点.More importantly,【第三个关键点或深层意义].As a result,[结果或结论]. In short,the passage reveals【总结性观点，如人类智慧与自然法则的融合]. 注意：模板中每空填入一句完整的话，并确保用自己语言改写，不照抄原文。 六、作文仿写(100词左右) 仿写题目：阅读下面关于云南哈尼梯田的短文，写一篇摘要。 The article describes the Hani Rice Terraces in Yunnan,showing how local people live in harmony with nature. First,it introduces the terraces built into the mountainsides,which prevent soil erosion and store water.Moreover,the author explains the clever water supply system that follows the natural height difference.More importantly,the passage emphasizes that this farming method has been passed down for generations reflecting the wisdom of the Hani people.As a result,the terraces not only provide food but also create a beautiful landscape. In short,the article demonstrates a perfect balance between human activities and the natural environment. 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议同学提高英语阅读理解能力 Dear Mike, I'm sorry to hear that you find it hard to improve your English reading.Here are some suggestions that may help you. First of all,it is a good idea to read English newspapers every day,because it helps you get used to different writing styles.Besides,you should guess the meaning of new words from the context instead of looking them up at once,which can save time and train your thinking.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to take notes while reading,as it is beneficial to remembering key points and vocabulary. I hope my advice will be useful.I'm sure you will make great progress soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 范文二：建议同学合理规划假期学习 Dear Sarah, I'm glad to hear that you want to make good use of the coming holiday.I'd like to share a few practical ideas with you. First of all,it is a good idea to make a daily schedule,because it helps you manage time wisely and avoid wasting it.Besides,you should set aside one hour to review what you have learned this term,which can strengthen your memory.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to do some outdoor activities,as it is beneficial to relaxing your mind and staying healthy. I hope my advice will work for you.Wish you a fulfilling and happy holiday. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei