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高中人教版·必修三
Unit2 Morals and Virtues写作精讲
A review of a moral fable(道德寓言的读后感/评论)
Unit 2 Morals and Virtues
写作任务:A review of a moral fable(道德寓言的读后感/评论)
审题
1话题:针对一则道德寓言故事(如《狼来了》《龟兔赛跑》《国王迈达斯》等),撰写读后感
或评论,分析故事寓意并联系现实生活。
2
体裁:议论文/读后感(书评类短文)。
3人称:以第三人称为主(介绍故事),辅以第一人称I(表达个人观点、感受)。
4
时态:
>介绍故事情节→一般现在时
>阐述寓意&个人观点→一般现在时
联系现实例子→一般现在时或一般过去时
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
6
核心要点:
①点明故事名称与出处(可选)
②简述故事核心情节(1-2句)〉
③揭示寓意(moral lesson)
④联系现实生活或自身经历谈感悟
⑤总结评价,给出推荐或反思
二、文章结构
开头段:引出寓言名称+点明故事核心冲突,迅速吸引读者。
2主体段
,简述情节(简明扼要,避免过多细节)
>揭示寓意(直接点明故事想传达的道德教训)
>联系现实:用生话例子或自身经历说明该寓言的现实意义
3
结尾段:总结个人看法,强调该寓言对读者的后发或推荐阅读价值。
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
moral /'morel/
adj.道德的;n.寓意
fable /'ferbl/
n.寓言
virtue /'v3:rtfu:/
n.美德;高尚品德
lying /'larn/
n.说谎
trust /trAst/
n./N.信任
consequence /'ka:nsIkwens/
n.后果
greedy /'gri:di/
adj.贪婪的
patient/'perfnt/
adj.耐心的
honest/'pnist/
adj.诚实的
lesson /'lesn/
n.教训;经验
2.常用短语
短语
释义
teach a moral lesson
教给一个道德教训
learn a valuable lesson
吸取宝贵教训
in the long run
从长远看
短语
释义
serve as a warning
作为警示
apply to real life
应用于现实生活
be well known as
作为.而广为人知
It is no exaggeration to say
毫不夸张地说
draw a conclusion
得出结论
3.基础造句(用《狼来了》为例)
1
This fable tells a story of a young boy who cried "wolf"for fun.
这则寓言讲述了一个小男孩为了好玩而喊“狼来了”的故事。
2
The main message is that lying destroys trust.
主要寓意是说谎会毁掉信任。
3In our daily life,we should always be honest.
在日常生活中,我们应该始终保持诚实。
4
If we lie too often,no one will believe us when we really need help
如果我们经常说谎,当真正需要帮助时,就不会有人相信我们。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通important→of great significance/ital
普通
tell a storyunfold a tale relate a story
普通
show reveal demonstrate/illustrate
普通】
thinkreflect/hold the view that...
加分句型
1 Having read this classic fable,I am deeply impressed by its timeless wisdom.
读完这则经典寓言,我对其永恒的智慧印象深刻。(现在分词作状语)
2 What the story tries to convey is that honesty is the foundation of trust.
这个故事试图传达的是,诚实是信任的基础。(what主语从句)
Only when we take the lesson seriously can we avoid making the same
mistake.
只有当我们认真吸取教训时,扌能避免犯同样的错误。(倒装句型)
4It is through this simple story that we learn the importance of being truthful.
正是通过这个简单的故事,我们学会了诚实的重要性。(强调句型)
五、导作模板(100-120词)
The Fable of
is a well-known moral fable that teaches a valuable lesson.The
story goes that_(简述情节).From this fable,we can see that
(直接写出寓意,如honesty/patience/kindness的重要性).
In real life,this lesson still holds true.For example,_
(举一个生活中的例
子或自身经历).Without_(教训的核心品质),we may end up
(后果).
All in all,this fable is not only entertaining but also meaningful.It reminds
us to develop good virtues and always think about the consequences of our
actions.I strongly recommend it to everyone.
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:以“The Boy Who Cried Wolf'"为题,写一篇道德寓言读后感/评论
(120词左右)。
The Boy Who Cried Wolf
"The Boy Who Cried Wolf"is a classic moral fable that teaches a clear lesson.The
story tells of a shepherd boy who repeatedly cried "wolf"for fun.When a real wolf
came,no one believed him and his sheep were eaten.
This fable reveals the value of honesty.Lies may bring short-term amusement,but
they destroy trust in the long run.In our daily life,the same thing happens.If a
student often lies to teachers or parents,they will lose credibility and find it hard
to get help when truly needed.
In my opinion,this short story is a powerful reminder of why we should always be
truthful.It is a simple but thought-provoking tale that every teenager should read.
I believe it will help us build stronger relationships and a better character.
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议朋友改善与父母的关系
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble communicating with your parents.I
am writing to offer you some helpful suggestions.
First of all,it is a good idea to start a conversation with a smile,because it can
create a friendly atmosphere and make both sides feel relaxed.Besides,you should
listen patiently to what they say,which can help you understand their true
concerns.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to share your own thoughts
calmly,as it is beneficial to building mutual trust.
I hope my advice will work for you.I'm sure you will get along better with your
parents soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jack
(字数:112)
范文二:建议同学克服考试焦虑
Dear Wang Fang,
I'm sorry to hear that you often feel anxious before exams.I'd like to share some
practical ways to deal with it.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a study plan a week earlier,because it helps
you organize your time and reduces panic.Besides,you should do deep breathing
exercises before the exam,which can help you calm down and focus your mind.
Last but not least,I strongly advise you to get enough sleep the night before,as it
is beneficial to keeping a clear head.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to your good news.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy
(字数:115)