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高中人教版·必修
Welcome Unit写作精炼
A student profile(学生个人简介)
Welcome Unit写作精炼
单元:Nelcome Unit写作任务:A Student Profile(学生个人简介)
审题
1话题:撰写一份个人简介,介绍自己的基本信息、性格特点、兴趣爱好、学习风格以及高
中生活(新学校、新环境)的期待或目标。
2体裁:介绍类短文(Profile)。通常为第一人称叙述,用于班级、在线学习社区或教师了解
新生。
3人称:以第一人称1为主。
4
时态:以一般现在时为核心时态(描述事实、习惯、性格);提及未来目标或期待时,可
使用一般将来时(will/am going to)。
5
字数要求:高考标准或课堂练习建议50-80词(基础版),进阶版可拓展至70-90词。
6
核心要点:
>自我介绍(姓名、年龄、来自哪里等基本信息)。
>个性特点(1-2个形容词)。
>兴趣爱好或特长。
,学习风格或对新学年的期待/目标。
二
文章结构
1
开头段:简短介绍自己(姓名、身份,如新生)。一句话点明主要特点或核心话
题。
2
主体段:扩展介绍个性、爱好、学习习惯等方面的2-3个细节。可以
用“Besides,”“Vhat I like most is.”“When it comes to..”等连接。
3
结尾段:表达对新环境、新学习阶段的期待,或自己的一个小目标。
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
profile
n.简介;人物简介
personality
n.个性;人格
outgoing
adj.外向的
curious
adj.好奇的
active
adj.积极的;活跃的
enthusiastic
adj.热情的
unique
adj.独特的
goal
n.目标
style
n.风格;方式
2.常用短语
短语
释义
be from come from
来自…
be good at/do well in
擅长
have a gift for
有..天赋
be interested in
对.感兴趣
in one's spare time
在某人空闲时间
make a good im pression
留下好印象(写作推荐表达)
look forward to (doing)sth.
期待(做)某事
adapt to
适应
短语
释义
keep a balance between...and...
在…和.之间保持平衡
3.基础造句
1I am a freshman from Chaoyang District.
我是一名来自朝阳区的新生。
2
I am outgoing and always curious about everything around me.
我很外向,并且总是对周围的一切充满好奇。
I am interested in reading science fiction and playing the guitar.
我对读科幻小说和弹吉他感兴趣。
4
My goal for this year is to make more friends and improve my spoken English.
我今年的目标是交更多朋友并提高英语口语。
四、好词好句
(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通I like→I am keen on/lam cra2 about/I have a passion for
普通
I am good at(l excel in/I am skilled at
普通
importantof great significance/vital
普通
veryextremely particularly rather
加分句型
1 As a student who is active in school clubs,I find it a great way to develop my
teamwork skills.
作为学校社团中活跃的一员,我发现这是培养团队协作能力的好方式。(定语从句+形式宾语t)
2 Born with a strong sense of responsibility,I always take my tasks seriously.
我天生具有强烈的责任感,总会认真对待任务。(过去分词短语作状语,表状态)
3What I want to achieve most this term is to adapt to the new learning style.
这学期我最想达成的事就是适应新的学习方式。(主语从句)
4Not only am I enthusiastic about learning,but I also enjoy physical challenges.
我不仅对学习充满热情,也喜欢体能挑战。(部分倒装句型)
五、军作模板(50-80词)
My name is INamel,a lagel-year-old freshman/senior high school student
from [Place].
I am [personality]and [second personalityl.
In my free time,I am keen on [hobby 1].Besides,I excel in am skilled at
[hobby 2 or subject].
As a learner,I prefer llearning stylel.
I hope to Igoal for the new terml.I am looking forward to [expected
outcome].
参考翻译:
我叫[姓名],一名[年龄]岁来自[地方]的新生/高中生。
我很[性格1]并且[性格2]。
在空闲时间,我热衷于[爱好1]。此外,我擅长[爱好2或学科]。
作为一名学习者,我更喜欢[学习方式]。
我希望[新学期目标]。我期待[预期成果]。
六、作文仿写(70词左右)
仿写题目:以Wang Lei的身份写一份学生简介,介绍他来自北京、性格开朗、喜
欢篮球和数学、希望与同学一起进步。
My name is Wang Lei,a 15-year-old freshman from Beijing.
I am outgoing and always enthusiastic about new things.
In my spare time,I am crazy about playing basketball,which keeps me active and
energetic.I also have a passion for math,and I often solve problems with my
classmates.
As a learner,I enjoy both group discussion and independent thinking.
This term,I hope to make good friends and improve my English by practicing more
every day.
参考译文:
我叫王磊,一名15岁来自北京的新生。
我性格开朗,并且总是对新事物充满热情。
在空闲时间,我酷爱打篮球,这让我保持活跃与活力。我也对数学充满热情,经常与同学一起解题。
作为一名学习者,我既喜欢小组讨论,也喜欢独立思考。
这学期,我希望交到好朋友,并通过每天多练习来提高英语成绩。
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议好友提高英语写作
Dear Mike,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with English writing.I am writing to
offer you some practical and useful suggestions.
First of all,it is a good idea to read English stories and keep a reading log,because
reading helps you learn authentic expressions and sentence patterns.Besides,you
should practice writing a short diary entry every day,which can gradually improve
your writing fluency and confidence.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to ask
your English teacher for feedback,as it is beneficial to correcting your mistakes
and making progress.
I hope my advice will be helpful.Remember,practice makes perfect!I'm sure you
will do better soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二:建议同学管理时间
Dear Lucy,
I'm happy to receive your letter asking for advice on time management.Here are
some practical suggestions for you.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a daily schedule and stick to it,because it
helps you organize your tasks and avoid procrastination.Besides,you should
prioritize important tasks first,which can ensure that you complete key work on
time.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to take short breaks between study
sessions,as it is beneficial to keeping your mind fresh.
I hope my advice will be useful.I'm sure you will manage your time well and
achieve better results.
Yours sincerely,
Xiao Ming