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Unit2 Managing Your Time写作精讲一
Reporting Time-management Problems(汇报时间管理问题)
Unit 2 Managing Your Time
写作任务:Reporting Time-management Problems(汇报时间管理问题)
审题
1话题:向他人(如老师、朋友)汇报自己在时间管理方面遇到的问题(如拖延、分心、计
划不合理等),并表达困惑或寻求建议。
体裁:书信类应用文(汇报信/求助信)。
3人称:以第一人称1为主,描述自身问题;若收信人为对方,可适当使用第二人称you。
4时态:一般现在时(描述现状)+现在完成时(强调已产生的影响)+一般将来时(表达
期望)。
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
6
核心要点:
>点明写信目的(汇报问题)
>具体描述2-3个时间管理问题(原因或表现)
,表达困惑或寻求帮助
>礼貌收尾(感谢或期待回复)
二、
文章结构
开头段:礼貌问候+点明写信目的(汇报时间管理问题,希望得到建议)。
I am writing to report some time-management problems I have been facing.
2主体段:分条描述具体问题,每条可附带简单原因或影响。常用衔接词:Fist
of all To begin with,Besides Additionally,What's worse /Furthermore.
例:
I often procrastinate and leave tasks until the last minute.
I get distracted easily by my phone while studying.
I don't make a proper schedule,so I often forget important things.
3
结尾段:表达期望(希望得到建议或帮助)+礼貌收尾。
I would appreciate it if you could give me some practical advice.
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
schedule
n.日程表V.安排
priority
n.优先事项
procrastination/procrastinate
n.拖延;v.拖延
distraction/distract
n.分心的事物;v.使分心
deadline
n.截止日期
efficiency efficient
n.效率;adj.高效的
organize
V,组织;安排
adjust
V.调整;适应
2.常用短语
短语
释义
have trouble with time management
在时间管理方面有困难
put off/postpone tasks
推迟任务
get distracted by...
被..分心
make a to-do list
制定待办清单
短语
释义
set priorities
分清轻重缓急
stick to a schedule
坚持按计划执行
waste time on...
在.上浪费时间
manage time wisely
明智地管理时间
3.基础造句
1 I am writing to report my time-management problems.
我写信是为了汇报我的时间管理问题。
2
I often put off my homework until the last minute.
我经常把作业拖到最后一刻。
I find it hard to concentrate on study because of my phone.
因为手机,我很难集中精力学习。
4
I hope you can give me some advice on how to use my time better.
我希望你能给我一些关于如何更好地利用时间的建议。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通】
have problemsstruggle with /be faced with
普通
difficult(challenging overwhelming
普通
wantdesire eagerly hope
普通
use time-allocate time/manage time efficiently
加分句型
I现在分词作状语:Knowing that I am struggling with time management,Iam
writing to ask for your help.
得知我在时间管理方面遇到困难,我写信寻求帮助。
2比较结构:The more I try to focus,the more easily I get distracted,
我越试图专注,就越容易分心。
3部分倒装:Not only do I fail to meet deadlines,but also I feel stressed all the
time.
我不仅无法按时完成任务,而且一直感到压力。
4ltis+adj.+for sb.to do sth.(形式主语):It is of great importance for me to
learn to prioritize my tasks
学会区分任务优先级对我来说非常重要。
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
I am writing to report my time-management problems.Recently,I have
been having difficulty organizing my time effectively which makes me feel
stressed.
First of all,I often procrastinate and put off important tasks until the last
minute.(问题一的具体影响).Besides,.I am easily distracted by my smartphone
while studying,wasting a lot of time.(问题二的具体影响).What's worse,I
seldom make a detailed schedule,so I always forget what to do next.
I sincerely hope you can give me some practical advice on how to manage
my time better.I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
[Your Name]
参考翻译:
亲爱的[姓名],
我写信是想汇报我的时间管理问题。最近,我一直难以有效地安排时间,这让我感到压力很大。
首先,我经常拖延,把重要的任务拖到最后一刻。(问题一的具体影响)。此外,学习时我很容易被智
能手机分散注意力,浪费大量时间。(问题二的具体影响)。更糟糕的是,我很少制定详细的计划,所
以总是忘记接下来要做什么。
我真诚地希望您能给我一些关于如何更好地管理时间的实用建议。期待您的回复。
此致敬礼,
[你的名字]
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你是李华,写一封信向你的英语老师Mr.Smith汇报你在时间管理
方面遇到的问题,并请求帮助。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing to report my time-management problems.Recently,I have been
struggling to balance my studies and personal time,which makes me feel
exhausted.
To begin with,I often put off my homework and end up staying up late.As a result,
I feel sleepy in class the next day.Besides,I cannot resist the temptation of social
media,so I spend too much time on my phone.Furthermore,I seldom make a
proper schedule,so I often forget important tasks or miss deadlines.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me some suggestions on how to use my time
more wisely.I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考译文:
我写信是为了汇报我的时间管理问题。最近,我一直在努力平衡学习和个人时间,这让我感到精疲力竭。
首先,我经常拖延作业,最后熬夜到很晚。结果,第二天上课时我感到昏昏欲睡。此外,我无法抵制社交媒体
的诱惑,所以在手机上花了太多时间。而且,我很少制定合理的计划,所以经常忘记重要任务或错过截止日
期。
如果您能就如何更明智地利用时间给我一些建议,我将非常感激。期待您的回复。
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议同学改善时间管理
Dear Li Hua,
I heard that you are struggling with time management and often feel stressed.I'm
writing to offer some practical advice that I find useful.
1.First of all,it is a good idea to make a daily schedule every morning.For
example,list all your tasks and arrange them by priority.This helps you focus on
important things and avoid wasting time.
2.Besides,you should set specific deadlines for each task.Having a clear deadline
can push you to finish on time and prevent procrastination.
3.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to avoid multitasking.Focusing on one
thing at a time improves efficiency and reduces mistakes.
I hope my advice can help you.I'm sure you will manage your time better if you
follow these tips.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
范文二:建议表弟合理规划时间
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you want to improve your time management.I'd like to share
some useful suggestions with you.
1.First of all,it is a good idea to break large tasks into smaller parts.For instance,
if you have a big project,divide it into several steps.This makes the work less
overwhelming and easier to start.
2.Besides,you should limit your screen time on phones and games.Reducing
distractions can save a lot of time for study and rest.
3.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to review your daily plan every evening
Checking what you have done helps you see progress and adjust for the next day.
I hope these tips will work for you.Keep trying and you will improve.
Yours,
Cindy