Unit 5 Animals Around Us 写作精讲一-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（冀教版）

高中 冀教版·必修3 Unit5 Animals Around Us导作精讲一 Describing an Amazing Animal(描述-种神奇的动物) Unit5 Animals Around Us写作精讲- 单元名称：Animals Around Us|写作任务： Describing an Amazing Animal(描述一种神奇的动物) 审题 1 话题：介绍一种命你感到神奇或独特的动物，从其外形、习性、生存技能等方面描述，突 出其“神奇”之处。 2 体裁：描述类说明文（非书信）。 3人称：以第三人称(t/they)为主，可适当使用第一人称()表达感受。 4 时态：以一般现在时为核心时态（说明客观事实），描述具体经历或观察时可用一般过去 时。 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词（或120-150词，视题目而定）。 6 核心要点： >明确要描述的动物名称； 〉描述其外形特征、生活习性、栖息地等； ,突出其独特或神奇的能力或特点； >表达对该动物的惊叹或喜爱。 二、文章结构 1开头段：引出要描述的动物，给出总体介绍（如“Among all animals,.is the most amazing one."),或直接点明d like to introduce."。 2 主体段：分条描述： >外形特征(size,color,body parts); >生活习性(habit,,diet,habitat); >神奇之处(unique ability,survival skill,,adaptation)。 使用连接词(First,Besides,.What's more,Most amazingly等)使逻辑清晰。 3 结尾段：总结该动物的神奇之处，表达个人感受或呼吁保护。 三、 核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 amazing /incredible /extraordinary adj,神奇的；合人惊叹的 feature n.特征 habitat n.栖息地 adapt/adaptation v.适应；n.适应 camouflage n.N.伪装 migrate V.迁徙 survive survival V.生存；n.生存 species n.物种（单复数同形） unique adj.独特的 fascinating adj.迷人的 2.常用短语 短语 释义 be known as /for 作为.而闻名/因.而闻名 be covered with 覆盖着. have the ability to do sth. 有能力做某事 in order to survive 为了生存 短语 释义 play an important role in... 在.…中起重要作用 be native to 原产于（某地） hunt for food 捕食 live up to 不辜负；达到 3.基础造句 1 The animal I want to describe is the chameleon,which is famous for its ability to change color. 我想描述的动物是变色龙，它以改变颜色的能力而闻名。 2 Its body is covered with tiny scales that help it camouflage. 它的身体覆盖着细小的鳞片，帮助它伪装。 3 It mainly feeds on insects and small animals. 它主要以昆虫和小动物为食。 4What makes it truly amazing is that it can stay underwater for up to 30 minutes. 让它真正神奇的是，它能在水下待长达30分钟。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通very amazing→absolutely fascinating/truly extraordinary 普通Iive→dwell/inhabit 普通be different from→distinguish itself from 普通 likebe similar to resemble 加分句型 1非谓语动词作状语 Native to the rainforests of South America,the toucan is easily recognized by its large, colorful beak. 原产于南美洲雨林，巨嘴鸟因其巨大而多彩的喙很容易被认出。 2定语从句 The octopus,which has three hearts and blue blood,is one of the most intelligent creatures in the ocean. 章鱼拥有三颗心脏和蓝色血液，是海洋中最聪明的生物之一。 3强调结构 It is its ability to regenerate lost limbs that makes the axolotl so amazing. 正是它再生失去肢体的能力让美西螈如此神奇。 4倒装句 Not only can the Arctic fox change its fur color with the seasons,but it also has thick fur to keep warm. 北极狐不仅会根据季节改变毛色，还有厚厚的皮毛来保暖。 五、写作模板(100-120词) There are many amazing animals in the world,and the one that fascinates me most is[动物名称]. First of all,,it is[外形特征].For example,[具体例子].Besides,,it has a unique living habit:[习惯描述]. What makes it truly incredible is its ability to能力].This helps it作用]. In my opinion,this animal is a perfect example of nature's creativity.I hope we can learn to protect such wonderful creatures. 参考翻译： 世界上有许多神奇的动物，最合我着迷的是[动物名称]。 首先，它[外形特征]。例如，[具体例子]。此外，它有一个独特的生活习性：[习惯描述]。 真正让它不可思议的是它[能力]的本领。这帮助它[作用]。 在我看来，这种动物是大自然创造力的完美典范。我希望我们能学会保护这些神奇的生物。 六、作文仿写 (约120词) 仿写题目：描述一种神奇的动物一一章鱼(octopus)。 There are many amazing animals in the world,and the one that fascinates me most is the octopus. First of all,it has a soft body with eight long arms called tentacles,each covered with suckers.Besides,it lives in oceans and is highly intelligent-it can open jars and solve puzzles.What makes it truly incredible is its ability to change both color and shape to blend into the environment.This helps it escape from predators and hunt for food. In my opinion,the octopus is a perfect example of nature's creativity.I hope we can learn to protect such wonderful creatures. 参考译文： 世界上有许多神奇的动物，最合我着迷的是章鱼。 首先，它身体柔软，有入条被称为触手的长臂，每条都覆盖着吸盘。此外，它生活在海洋中，非常聪明一一它 能打开罐子、解决谜题。真正让它不可思议的是它既能改变颜色又能改变形状来融入环境。这帮助它躲避捕食 者并捕食。 在我看来，章鱼是大自然创造力的完美典范。我希望我们能学会保护这些神奇的生物。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：描述神奇的章鱼 Dear Alex, I'm writing to share with you an amazing animal-the octopus.It is famous for its intelligence and incredible abilities. First of all,it has eight flexible arms covered with suckers,which can grasp objects and even taste food.Besides,the octopus can change its color and skin texture instantly to blend in with the surroundings,making it a master of camouflage.Last but not least,it has three hearts and blue blood,helping it survive in deep,cold ocean water. I hope you find this creature as fascinating as I do.Looking forward to hearing about your favorite animal. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (字数：110词) 范文二：描述神奇的蜂鸟 Dear Sarah, I'd like to introduce you to a truly amazing creature-the hummingbird.It is the smallest bird in the world yet possesses extraordinary abilities. First of all,it can fly backwards and hover in mid-air,thanks to its rapid wing beats of up to 80 times per second.Besides,its heart beats over 1,200 times per minute, providing enough energy for its active lifestyle.Last but not least,it has a long, thin beak for sipping nectar from flowers,and it can remember every flower it has visited. Isn't that incredible?I hope you enjoy learning about this tiny marvel. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei (字数：116词)