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高中
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Unit1 Attitudes Towards Our Elders写作精讲三
Making a Plan to Take Care of the Elderly(制定关爱老人的计划)
Unit1 Attitudes Towards Our Elders写作精讲三
单元:Unit 1 Attitudes Towards Our Elders写作任务:Making a Plan to Take Care of the
Elderly(制定关爱老人的计划)
审题
话题:围绕如何关爱老人,制定具体可行的计划,包括陪伴、生活照料、精神关怀等方面
2
体裁:计划类文章或倡议书(可采用书信格式,面向同学或社区成员)
3
人称:以第一人称we或I为主,号召大家共同参与
4
时态:以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态
5
字数:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
,明确计划的目的与意义
)列出2-3条具体措施(做什么、怎么做、为什么)
〉表达呼吁或美好祝愿
文章结构
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开头段:简要说明制定计划的背景或意义,引出关爱老人的重要性
示例:
With the purpose of showing love and respect for the elderly,our class has
made a plan to take care of them.
2
主体段:分条阐述计划内容,每条搭配理由,用连接词衔接
〉①定期探望,陪伴聊天→缓解孤独
〉②帮助做家务或购物→减轻生活负担
>③组织文艺活动→带来快乐,增进代际沟通
3
结尾段:呼吁大家一起行动,表达信心与期望
示例:
Let's take action now and make a difference in their lives.I believe our efforts
will brighten their days.
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
词性
释义
elderly
adj.
年老的;老年人
respect
n/.
尊重
care
v./n.
关心;照顾
accompany
V.
陪伴
volunteer
n./v.
志愿者;自愿做
responsibility
n.
责任
loneliness
0,
孤独
gratitude
n.
感激
2.常用短语
短语
释义
show respect for...
对…表示尊重
take care of.…
照顾.…
keep sb.company
陪伴某人
provide emotional support
提供情感支持
offer a helping hand
伸出援手
短语
释义
make a difference
带来改变
bridge the generation gap
弥合代沟
enhance the quality of life
提高生活质量
3.基础造句
1
It is our duty to take care of the elderly.
照顾老人是我们的责任。
2 First,we can visit them regularly to keep them company.
首先,我们可以定期拜访他们,陪伴他们。
Helping them with housework is also a good way to show our care
帮他们做家务也是表达关心的好方法。
4
By doing so,we can bring warmth and joy to their lives.
这样做,我们可以给他们的生活带来温暖和快乐。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通important→of great significance
普通help→provide assistance to
普通old people→the senior citizens/the aged
普通
happycheerful delighted
加分句型
Realizing that many elderly people feel lonely,we have made a plan to care for
them.
意识到许多老人感到孤独,我们制定了关爱他们的计划。(现在分词短语作原因状语)
2 Not only can we help with daily chores,but we can also chat with them to ease
their loneliness.
我们不仅能帮忙做家务,还能和他们聊天以缓解孤独。(部分倒装,连接并列内容)
It is highly recommended that we (should)volunteer at the local nursing home
every weekend.
强烈建议我们每周末到当地养老院做志愿者。(虚拟语气)
4Only through small acts of kindness can we make the elderly feel valued.
只有通过小小的善举,我们扌能让老人感到被重视。(oly+状语置于句首引起的倒装)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear classmates fellow students,
With the purpose of showing love and respect for the elderly,our class has made a
plan to take care of them.Here are some specific measures.
First,we will visit the elderly at the nursing home every Saturday afternoon,
bringing them fresh fruits and cheerful conversations.This can help reduce their
loneliness.Second,we can help them with some housework,such as cleaning and
cooking,to make their daily life easier.Third,it is a good idea to organize talent
shows for them,which will bring happiness and laughter.
Let's take action now and make a difference in their lives.I believe our efforts will
brighten their days.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考翻译:
亲爱的同学们:
为了让老人感受到爱与尊重,我们班制定了关爱他们的计划。以下是一些具体措施。
首先,我们每周六下午去养老院看望老人,带给他们新鲜水果和愉快的交谈。这有助于减少他们的孤
独感。其次,我们可以帮他们做一些家务,如打扫卫生和做饭,让他们的日常生活更轻松。第三,为
他们组织扌艺表演是个好主意,这会带来欢乐和笑声。
让我们立即行动起来,让他们的生活有所改变。我相信我们的努力会让他们的日子更加明亮。
此致
敬礼
李华
六、作文仿得(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你是班长,请制定一份班级关爱社区老人的计划,写成倡议书。
Dear classmates,
Aging is a natural part of life,and the elderly deserve our respect and care.
Therefore,I am writing to propose a plan to show our love for the senior citizens in
our community.
First,we can set up a"Weekend Companion"group to visit the elderly regularly
chatting with them and helping them read newspapers.This will relieve their
loneliness.
Second,we plan to offer practical help,such as grocery shopping and cleaning,to
ease their daily burdens.
Lastly,we will invite them to our school activities,like the Spring Festival party,to
bridge the generation gap.
I sincerely hope everyone can join in and contribute a little.Together,we can
create a warmer community for the elderly.
Yours sincerely,
Monitor Li
参考译文:
亲爱的同学们:
变老是生命中自然的一部分,老人值得我们尊重和关爱。因此,我写信提出一项计划,向社区中的老人表达我
们的关爱。
首先,我们可以成立一个“周末陪伴”小组,定期看望老人,陪他们聊天、帮他们读报。这将减轻他们的孤独
感。
其次,我们计划提供实际帮助,如代购日用品和打扫卫生,以减轻他们的日常负担。
最后,我们将邀请他们参加学校活动,如春节联欢会,以弥合代沟。
我真诚地希望大家都能参与进来,贡献一份力量。让我们共同为杜区老人创造一个更温暖的大家庭。
此致
敬礼
班长李华
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议朋友如何关爱家中老人
Dear Li Hua,
I'm glad to hear that you want to take good care of your grandpa.I'm writing to
share some practical ideas with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to spend at least 30 minutes talking with him every
day,because it can make him feel loved and reduce loneliness.Besides,you should
help him check his blood pressure regularly,which is beneficial to keeping healthy.
Last but not least,I strongly advise you to take him for a walk in the park,as it
helps him exercise and enjoy fresh air.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful.I'm sure your grandpa will be happy.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Lin
范文二:建议班级组织关爱社区老人活动
Dear classmates,
Our class is planning to take care of the elderly in our community.I'd like to
propose a simple but meaningful plan.
First of all,it is a good idea to visit the old people's home once a week,because we
can chat with them and help clean their rooms.Besides,we should prepare some
performances like singing or storytelling,which can bring joy and warmth to them.
Last but not least,I strongly advise us to teach them how to use smartphones,as it
is beneficial to connecting with their families.
I hope our plan will be carried out soon.Let's make a difference together!
Yours sincerely,
Monitor Zhang