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Unit1 Attitudes Towards Our Elders写作精讲一
Introducing the Chongyang Festival(介绍重阳节)
Unit 1 Attitudes Towards Our Elders写作精讲一:Introducing
the Chongyang Festival(介绍重阳节)
单元:Unit 1 Attitudes Towards Our Elders|写作在务:Introducing the Chongyang Festival(价
绍重阳节)
申题
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话题:介绍中国传统节日一一重阳节,突出尊老敬老的文化内洒
2
体裁:说明文/介绍文(客观描述,可适当加入个人感受)
3
人称:以第三人称it(指代节日)为主,适当使用we/people
4
时态:以一般现在时为核心时态(介绍事实和传统)
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字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
>节日的日期(农历九月初九)
>起源(如消除灾祸、登高避疫的传说)
〉主要习俗(登高、赏菊、插茱萸、吃重阳糕、敬老)
>文化意义(尊老、团圆、健康长寿)
二、文章结构
开头段:引出节日,点明名称和日期,简要说明其重要性
2
主体段:
,第一层:介绍起源传说
>第二层:介绍主要习俗(如登高、赏菊、插茱萸)
>第三层:介绍现代意义(特别是尊老敬老)
3
结尾段:总结节日价值,发出邀请或表达祝福
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
festival
n.节日
ancestor
n.祖先
tradition
n.传统;traditional adj.传统的
respect
v./n.尊敬
elder
n.长辈;老年人
climb
v.攀登;mountain n,山
chrysanthemum
n.菊花
cornel
n.茱萸(一种植物)
longevity
n.长寿
reunion
n.团圆;团聚
2:常用短语
短语
释义
fall on
落在(某一天)
be celebrated as
被庆祝为…
get together
团聚
climb mountains
登山
enjoy chrysanthem ums
赏菊
wear cornel
佩茱萸
短语
释义
show respect for the elderly
尊敬老人
wish for health and longevity
祈求健康长寿
carry forward the tradition
传承传统
3.基础造句
1
The Chongyang Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month.
重阳节在农历九月初九。
2 It is a day to show respect for the elderly and wish them good health.
这是一个尊敬老人、祝他们健康的日子。
3People often climb mountains to avoid bad luck and enjoy the beautiful
autumn view.
人们常登山以避邪,并欣赏美丽的秋景。
4Wearing cornel and drinking chrysanthemum wine are also traditional
customs.
佩茱萸、饮菊花酒也是传统习俗。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通important→of great significance
普通old people→the elderly/senior citizens
普通】
likebe keen on take delight in
普通
celebrateobserve commemorate
普通
show respect-pay tribute to express reverence for
加分句型
1Falling on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month,the Chongyang Festival is a
day to honor elders.
重阳节在农历九月初九,是一个尊敬长辈的日子。(现在分词短语作状语)
2)Not only do people climb mountains to enjoy the autumn scenery,but they
also pay visits to their elderly relatives.
人们不仅登高赏秋,还会去看望年迈的亲戚。(部分倒装句型not only..but also.)
3 It is widely believed that wearing cornel can drive away evil spirits.
人们普逼认为佩茱萸可以驱邪。(主语从句it is widely believed that..)
4Only by cherishing our traditions can we carry forward the spirit of respecting
the elderly.
只有珍惜传统,我们扌能弘扬尊老的精神。(oly+状语置于句首的倒装句型)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Title:The Chongyang Festival
The Chongyang Festival,also known as the Double Ninth Festival,falls on the ninth
day of the ninth lunar month.It is a traditional Chinese festival of great
significance.
According to legend,the festival originated from an ancient custom of climbing
mountains to avoid disasters.Nowadays,people observe it by climbing mountains,
enjoying chrysanthemums,and wearing cornel.More importantly,it is a day to
show respect for the elderly and wish them health and longevity.Families often
get together for a reunion dinner.
In short,the Chongyang Festival reminds us to cherish and respect our elders.It
is a precious tradition that we should pass down from generation to generation.
参考翻译:
重阳节,又称“重九节”,在农历九月初九,是一个意义重大的中国传统节日。
相传这一节日源于古人登高避灾的习俗。如今,人们通过登高、赏菊、佩茱萸来庆祝这一节日。更重
要的是,这一天是尊敬老人、祝愿他们健康长寿的日子。家人常常团聚,共进晚餐。
总之,重阳节提醒我们珍惜和尊敬长辈。这是一份应当代代相传的宝贵传统。
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:写一篇短文,介绍重阳节,重点突出“尊老"这一主题。
The Chongyang Festival
The Chongyang Festival,or Double Ninth Festival,falls on the ninth day of the
ninth lunar month.As the ninth is considered a "yang"number in Chinese culture,
this day is called "Double Ninth".
Historically,people climbed mountains and wore cornel to avoid evil spirits
Today,these customs are still popular,especially climbing mountains to enjoy the
autumn scenery.But the most important meaning of the festival is to show
love and respect for the elderly.It is a day for visiting grandparents,sending
them gifts,and wishing them good health and a long life.
In my opinion,the Chongyang Festival is not only a cultural tradition but also a
reminder for us to care for our elders.I hope everyone can keep this tradition
alive.
参考译文:
《重阳节》
重阳节,又称“重九节”,在农历九月初九。由于“九”在中国文化中被视为“阳”数,这一天被称为“重九”。
古时候,人们登高、佩茱萸以避邪。如今,这些习俗依然流行,尤其是登高赏秋。但这一节日最重要的意义是
表达对老人的爱与尊敬。这一天人们去看望祖父母,送他们礼物,祝他们健康长寿。
在我看来,重阳节不仅是一种文化传统,更是在提醒我们关爱长辈。我希望每个人都能让这一传统延续下去。
拓展范文背诵积累
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