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高中
冀教版·必修2
Unit1 Family写作精讲一
Unit 1 Family写作精讲一
Unit1 Family写作精讲
写作任务:A letter of advice(建议信)一一针对家庭关系问题
审题
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话题:针对他人在家庭生活中遇到的困扰(如与父母沟通不畅、兄弟姐妹矛盾、家庭压力
等),撰写建议信提供实用建议
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体裁:书信类应用文(建议信)
3人称:以第二人称you为主,辅以第一人称I
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时态:以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态
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字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:点明写信目的;给出2-3条具体可操作建议;表达鼓励与美好祝愿
文章结构
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开头段:礼貌问候+点明写信背景与目的(回应对方的家庭困扰),引出下文建
议
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主体段:分条阐述具体建议,每条建议搭配合理理由,用连接词衔接,逻辑清晰
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结尾段:表达鼓励与信心,祝愿对方解决家庭问题,收尾符合书信格式
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
concern
n.担心;忧虑v.使担忧
advice
n.建议(不可数);advise v.建议
beneficial
adj.有益的;benefit v.使受益n.益处
challenge
n.挑战v.向.…挑战
improve
v.提高;改进;improvement n.改进
pressure
n.压力
balance
n./N.平衡
overcome
v.克服
relationship
n.关系
communication
n.沟通
2.常用短语
短语
释义
face a family challenge
面临家庭挑战
deal with family conflicts
处理家庭矛盾
take my advice
采纳我的建议
have a heart-to-heart talk
进行一次交心谈话
keep a balance between personal freedom
保持个人自由与家规的平衡
and family rules
build up mutual trust
建立相互信任
relieve family pressure
缓解家庭压力
adapt to the new family situation
适应新的家庭状况
show understanding and respect
表示理解与尊重
3.基础造句
1I am writing to offer you some advice on how to get along better with your
parents.
我写信是为了给你一些与父母相处更好的建议。
2 First,you should have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents to express your
feelings.
首先,你应该和父母进行一次交心谈话,表达你的感受。
It is beneficial to spend more time doing family activities together.
多花时间参与家庭活动是很有益的。
4If you follow my advice,you will build a closer relationship with your family
soon.
如果你采纳我的建议,很快就会和家人建立更亲密的关系。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通Ithink→As far as I am concerned/From my perspective
普通】
very important(of great significance
普通】
helpfulbeneficial rewarding
普通
try to domake every effort to do
加分句型
1Knowing that you are having trouble communicating with your parents,I am
writing to give you some practical suggestions.
得知你在与父母沟通方面遇到困难,我写信给你提供一些实用建议。(现在分词作原因状语)
2 Not only should you listen to their opinions,but also you need to share your
own thoughts calmly.
你不仅应该倾听他们的意见,还需要平静地分享自己的想法。(部分倒装句型)
3 It is highly recommended that you should join in family activities to strengthen
your bond.
强烈建议你参加家庭活动来加强你们的纽带。(虚拟语气句型)
Only in this way can you solve the family problem effectively.
只有用这种方法,你扌能有效解决家庭问题。(倒装句型)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with(遇到的问题).I am writing to
offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to(建议-),because(原因-).Besides,you should
(建议二),which can help you(好处二).Last but not least,I strongly advise you
to(建议三),as it is beneficial to(好处三).
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will overcome
this challenge soon.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
参考翻译:
亲爱的[姓名]:
得知你在(遇到的问题)方面遇到麻烦,我写信给你一些有用的建议。
首先,(建议一)是个好主意,因为(原因一)。此外,你应该(建议二),这能帮助你(好处二)。最
后但同样重要的是,我强烈建议你(建议三),因为这对(好处三)有益。
希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我相信你很快就能克服这个挑战。
此致,
[你的名字]
六、
作文仿导(120词左右)
仿写题目:给好友李华写建议信,帮助他与父母改善关系,减少家庭矛盾。
Dear Li Hua,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting along with your parents.I
am writing to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to have a heart-to-heart talk with them,because open
communication can help both sides understand each other's feelings.Besides,you
should try to be more patient when they express different opinions,which can
reduce unnecessary arguments.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to spend
more quality time with your family,such as having dinner together or going for a
walk,as it is beneficial to building a stronger family bond.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will improve
your family relationship soon.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
参考译文:
亲爱的李华:
得知你在与父母相处方面遇到困难,我很遗憾。我写信给你一些有用的建议。
首先,和他们进行一次交心谈话是个好主意,因为坦诚的沟通能帮助双方理解彼此的感受。
其次,当父母表达不同意见时,你应该尽量更有耐心,这样可以减少不必要的争吵。
最后但同样重要的是,我强烈建议你多和家人度过美好时光,比如一起吃饭或散步,因为这有助于建立更牢固
的家庭纽带。
希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我相信你很快就会改善家庭关系。
此致,
汤姆
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议同学改善与父母的沟通
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear that you often argue with your parents.I'm writing to offer you
some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to listen to them patiently,because it shows respect
and helps you understand their thoughts.Besides,you should express your feelings
calmly after they finish,which can avoid unnecessary conflicts.Last but not least,I
strongly advise you to spend quality time together,such as cooking or walking,as
it is beneficial to building a closer relationship.
I hope my suggestions will help you.I believe your family will become more
harmonious soon.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Ming
范文二:建议朋友帮助年幼的弟弟适应新学校
Dear Zhang Wei,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on helping your younger brother
settle into a new school.Here are some practical tips.
First of all,it is a good idea to encourage him to join a club he likes,because it
helps him make friends and feel less lonely.Besides,you should help him review
lessons at home every day,which can boost his confidence in class.Last but not
least,I strongly advise you to share your own school stories with him,as it is
beneficial to comforting him and showing your care.
I hope these ideas work for him.I'm sure he will enjoy school life soon.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Ming