Unit 5 Natural Disasters 写作精讲二-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（冀教版）

高中 冀教版·必修1 Unit5 Natural Disasters写作精讲二 Listing Some Tips for Pre-disaster Preparedness(列出灾前准备建议) Unit5 Natural Disasters写作精讲二：Listing Some Tips for Pre- disaster Preparedness(列出灾前准备建议) 写作在务：针对可能发生的自然灾害（如地震、台风、洪水等），给朋友或亲人写一封信（或一篇建议短 文)，列出2一3条具体的灾前准备建议，并说明理由，表达关心与祝愿。 申题 1 话题：自然灾害的灾前准备建议，涉及地震、台风、洪水等的应对措施 2 体裁：书信类应用文（建议信）或说明性短文（本题以书信体为例） 3 人称：以第二人称you为主，辅以第一人称I 4 时态：以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6 核心要点： >点明写信目的（关心对方，提醒防灾） >给出2-3条具体可操作的灾前准备建议（附理由） 〉表达鼓励与美好祝愿 二、文章结构 1开头段：礼貌问候+点明写信背景（如得知某地区可能发生自然灾害），引出提 供建议的目的 2 主体段：分条阐述具体建议（如准备应急包、熟悉逃生路线、保持信息畅通 等)，每条搭配合理理由，用连接词衔接，逻辑清晰 3 结尾段：表达关心与信心，祝愿对方平安，收尾符合书信格式 三、 核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 disaster n.灾难 preparedness n.准备；预备 emergency n.紧急情况；突发事件 survive v.幸存；生存→survival n. evacuate V.撤离；疏散→evacuation n. n,工具箱；成套用品（如emergency kit应急 kit 包) supply n.补给品；物资（常复数supplies) route n,路线(evacuation route疏散路线) awareness n.意识；认识(raise awareness提高意识) 2.常用短语 短语 释义 natural disaster 自然灾害 be prepared for 为…做好准备 emergency kit 应急包 first aid supplies 急救用品 keep calm 保持冷静 stay informed 保持信息畅通 follow the instructions 听从指示 短语 释义 protect sb.from harm 保护某人免受伤害 3.基础造句 1 I am writing to offer you some tips on how to prepare for a natural disaster. 我写信是为了给你一些关于如何为自然灾害做准备的建议。 2 First of all,you should prepare an emergency kit with food,water and medicine. 首先，你应该准备一个装有食物、水和药品的应急包。 3It is necessary to know the evacuation routes in your area. 了解你所在地区的疏散路线是必要的。 4By following these tips,you will be able to protect yourself and your family. 遵循这些建议，你就能够保护自己和家人。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通】 importantvital essential of great importance 普通】 helpful(beneficial of great value 普通 should do are advised to do it is recommended that... 普通 prepare make adequate preparations for 加分句型 1Knowing that a typhoon is likely to hit your city,I am writing to share some useful tips. 得知台风可能袭击你的城市，我写信分享一些实用建议。（现在分词作原因状语） 2 Not only should you prepare an emergency kit,but you also need to keep it within easy reach. 你不仅应该准备应急包，还需要把它放在容易拿到的地方。（部分倒装） It is highly recommended that you should make a family emergency plan together. 强烈建议你和家人一起制定一个家庭应急计划。（虚拟语气） 4Only by being well prepared can you stay safe when a disaster strikes. 只有做好充分准备，你中能在灾难来临时保持安全。（倒装句） 五、写作模板(100-120词) Dear [Namel, I am sorry to hear that a natural disaster may happen in your area.I am writing to offer you some tips on disaster preparedness. First of all,it is a good idea to prepare an emergency kit,because it can provide you with basic supplies like food and water.Besides,you should learn about the evacuation routes,which can help you leave the danger zone quickly.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to stay informed through official news,as it is essential for making wise decisions. I hope my advice will be of some help to you.Stay safe and take care! Yours sincerely, [Your Namel 参考翻译： 亲爱的[姓名]： 得知你的地区可能发生自然灾害，我深感忧虑。我写信给你一些关于防灾准备的实用建议。 首先，最好准备一个应急包，因为它能为你提供食物和水等基本物资。此外，你应该了解疏散路线， 这能帮助你迅速离开危险区域。最后但同样重要的是，我强烈建议你通过官方新闻保持信息畅通，因 为这对做出明智的决定至关重要。 希望我的建议对你有所帮助。注意安全，保重！ 你真诚的， [你的名字] 六、 作文仿得 (120词左右) 仿写题目：你的朋友李明住在沿海城市，台风季节即将来临。请给他写一封信，提 出3条灾前准备建议。 Dear Li Ming, I am sorry to hear that the typhoon season is coming to your city.I am writing to offer you some helpful tips on how to prepare for it. First of all,it is a good idea to store enough food,clean water and batteries, because these supplies can help you survive after the typhoon hits.Besides,you should fx the windows and doors to make your house stronger,which can prevent them from being damaged.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to make a family emergency plan,as it is vital to keep everyone calm and organized during the storm. I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that you will stay safe if you get well prepared. Yours sincerely, Tom 参考译文： 亲爱的李明： 得知台风季节即将来到你的城市，我很担心。我写信给你一些关于如何做好准备的实用建议。 首先，最好储存足够的食物、干净的水和电池，因为这些物资能帮助你在台风过后生存下来。此外，你应该加 固内窗，让房子更坚固，以防损坏。最后但同样重要的是，我强烈建议你制定一个家庭应急计划，因为它在暴 风雨中让每个人保持冷静和有序至关重要。 希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我相信只要准备充分，你一定能保持安全。 你真诚的， 汤姆 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议同学养成健康饮食习惯 Dear Li Ming I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired and weak.I am writing to give you some practical suggestions on keeping a healthy diet. First of all,it is a good idea to eat more fruits and vegetables every day,because they are rich in vitamins and can boost your energy.Besides,you should drink enough water instead of sugary drinks,which can help your body function well. Last but not least,I strongly advise you to avoid eating too much junk food,as it is beneficial to maintaining a healthy weight. I hope my advice will work for you.I'm sure you will feel more energetic soon. Yours sincerely, Jack 范文二：建议朋友提高时间管理能力 Dear Zhang Wei, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on managing time better.I'd like to share some useful tips with you. First of all,it is a good idea to make a daily to-do list,because it helps you prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important things.Besides,you should set specific time for each activity,which can improve your efficiency.Last but not least, I strongly advise you to avoid multitasking,as it is beneficial to focusing on one thing at a time and getting better results. I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to your progress. Yours sincerely, Cindy