Unit 3 Dancing with Words 写作精讲一-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（冀教版）

高中 冀教版·必修 Unit3 Dancing with Words写作精讲一 Describing the Cold Winter(描述寒洽的冬天) Unit3 Dancing with Words写作精讲- 单元：Unit3 Dancing with Words写作任务：Describing the Cold Winter(描述寒洽的冬天) 审题 1 话题：围绕冬季的寒冷天气，描写自然景象、环境变化、人们活动及个人感受 2 体裁：描写文/记叙文（场景描写类） 3 人称：以第一人称|或第三人称（景物作主语）为主 4 时态：以一般现在时（描写常态景象）或一般过去时（记叙某个冬日场景）为核心时态 5 字数要求：100-120词（高考标准） 6 核心要点： ,描写天气特征（温度、风雪、冰霜） >刻画环境变化（树木、街道、河流） ,描述人物活动与反应 >表达个人感受或冬季的独特氛围 二、文章结构 1开头段：总起引入，点明时间与天气状况，营造冬日寒冷氛围 Winter came,and the world turned cold and silent. 2 主体段：分层次描写 >层次一：自然景物描写（风、雪、冰、树、天空） >层次二：人物活动描写（穿衣、出行、取暖） ,层次三：个人感受或环境变化带来的情感 3 结尾段：总结冬日景象，抒发感慨或点明冬季的独特魅力 Although it was freezing outside,the winter beauty warmed my heart. 三、 核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 adj.极冷的；freeze v.结冰；frozen adj..冰冻 freezing 的 frost n.霜冻v.结霜 blizzard n.暴风雪 icy adj.结冰的；冰冷的 snowflake n.雪花 shiver V.颤抖 bare adj,光秃秃的（指树木） blanket n.覆盖物（喻大雪覆盖） bitter adj.刺骨的（如bitter cold) silent adj.寂静的 melt v.融化 glow v.发光，暖光（如fire glow) 2.常用短语 短语 释义 cover the ground 覆盖地面 短语 释义 a heavy snowfall 一场大雪 blow fiercely 猛烈地吹（风） turn.…into… 将变成 freeze over 结冰；封冻 keep warm 保暖 wrap oneself up 把自己裹得严严实实 shake with cold 冷得发抖 a layer of snow 一层雪 stand bare in the wind 光秃秀地立在风中（树木） 3.基础造句 1It was a freezing cold morning,and everything was covered with thick snow. 那是一个极度寒冷的早晨，一切都覆盖着厚厚的雪。 2 The cold wind blew fiercely,cutting through our clothes like knives. 冷风猛烈地吹着，像刀子一样刺穿我们的衣服。 People wrapped themselves in heavy coats and walked quickly along the icy street. 人们裹着厚大衣，在结冰的街道上快步行走。 4 The lake froze over,and the trees stood bare in the silent winter air. 湖面结冰了，树木光秃秃地立在寂静的冬日空气中。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通very cold→freezing cold/bitterly cold 普通white snow→a vast blanket of white snow 普通】 trees without leaves(bare trees leafless branches 普通 cold wind biting wind piercing wind 普通 the sun is not warmthe pale sun gives no warmth 普通 look bea utiful present a breathtaking scene 加分句型 1独立主格结构（描写场景画面） The snow falling heavily,the whole village turned into a white world. 大雪纷纷扬扬地飘落，整个村庄变成了一个白色世界。 2With+名词+非谓语动词（层次描写） With the cold wind howling outside,we stayed indoors,reading by the fire. 寒风在外呼啸，我们待在屋里，围炉读书。 3倒装句（强调寒冷程度） So cold was the winter that even the river froze solid. 冬天如此寒冷，连河都冻得结实。 4比喻句（形象生动） The snow-covered fields looked like a soft white carpet spread across the earth. 雪覆盖的田野就像铺在大地上的柔软白色地毯。 5分词作状语（简洁连贯） Walking in the deep snow,I could hear nothing but the crunch under my feet. 走在深雪中，我什么也听不见，只听见脚下咯吱咯吱的声音。 五、写作模板(100-120词) Describing the Cold Winter Winter arrived,and with it came the bitter cold. (总起描写天气) (景物描写1：风雪/树木/天空)·」 (景物描写2：河流/房屋/田野) People (人物活动：穿着/行动/取暖)，while I (个人感受：寒冷/感慨/ 喜爱)· (结尾：总结冬日特点，抒发情感).Despite the cold,the winter landscape presented a unique kind of beauty. 六、作文仿得(120词左右) 仿写题目：描写你记忆中一次大雪过后的冬日早晨，描述天气、环境、人们活动和 你的感受。 Winter arrived,and with it came the bitter cold.The night before,a heavy snowfall had turned everything white. The biting wind blew fiercely,shaking the bare branches of the trees.The ground was covered with a thick blanket of snow,and every roof wore a layer of white.The lake in the park had frozen over,shining like a mirror in the pale morning light. People wrapped themselves in heavy coats and walked carefully on the icy road their breath forming white clouds in the freezing air.Children,however,ran and laughed,throwing snowballs at each other. Standing by the window,I was deeply moved by the silent beauty of the winter morning.Despite the cold,the snow-covered world presented a pure and peaceful picture that warmed my heart. (120 words) 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：给好友描述北方寒冬 Dear Tom, I'm writing to tell you about the freezing winter in my hometown.First of all,the temperature often drops to-15C,and the biting wind cuts through clothes like a knife.Besides,heavy snow covers everything,making roads slippery and trees crystal-like.Last but not least,people stay indoors as much as possible,warming themselves by the fire with hot drinks. However,the cold also brings unique beauty-the silent white world and the cheerful laughter of children playing in the snow.I hope you can visit one day! Yours, Li Hua 范文二：给表姐描述冬日温暖时光 Dear Lucy, How is your winter?Here the cold has arrived,but it's surprisingly wonderful.First of all,the air is crisp and clear,and every morning we see frost on the windows. Besides,my family loves to cook hotpot together,which fills the house with warmth and delicious smells.Last but not least,the winter holiday means we can go ice- skating on the frozen lake-a magical experience. The cold weather actually makes people appreciate warmth and togetherness more.I miss you and hope you're keeping warm! Yours, Linda