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高中
冀教版·必修1
Unit4 Culture and Cultural Diversity写作精讲二
Relating Chinese Calligraphy to Your Chinese Handwriting(关联中国书法与汉字书写)
Unit4 Culture and Cultural Diversity写作精讲三
单元:Unit4 Culture and Cultural Diversity写作任务:Relating Chinese Calligraphy to Your
Chinese Handwriting(关联中国书法与汉字书写)
写作任务:假设你的朋友李明在汉字书写方面遇到困难,字迹潦草、难以辨认,他
写信向你寻求建议。请你给他写一封建议信,建议他通过练习中国书法来改善自己
的汉字书写,并简要说明书法与书写之间的关联。
申题
1话题:针对他人汉字书写潦草的问题,提出通过练习书法来提升书写质量的建议,并阐述
书法与日常书写的内在联系。
2体裁:书信类应用文(建议信
3人称:以第二人称you为主,辅以第一人称I
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时态:以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态
5字数要求:高考标准100-120词
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核心要点:
〉点明写信目的(回应对方书写问题)
>给出2-3条具体建议(涉及书法练习)
>说明书法如何帮助改善书写(文化关联)
,表达鼓励与美好祝愿
文章结构
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开头段:礼貌问候+点明写信背景与目的,简要回应对方的问题,引出下文建
议
2
主体段:
〉第一条建议:推荐从基本笔画开始练习书法(如楷书)
〉第二条建议:坚持临摹名家字帖,培养良好书写习惯
〉第三条建议:将书法中的“结构美”应用到日常书写中(文化关联点)
>每条建议搭配合理理由,用连接词衔接,逻辑清晰
3
结尾段:表达鼓励与信心,祝愿对方书写水平提升,收尾符合书信格式
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
词性
释义
calligraphy
n.
书法
handwriting
n.
笔迹;书写
practice
n./v.
练习;实践
stroke
n.
(书法)笔画
copybook
n.
字帖
neat
adj.
整洁的;工整的
improve
提高;改善
structure
n.
结构;(汉字)间架
appreciate
女
欣赏;感激
culture
n.
文化
2.常用短语
短语
释义
take up calligraphy
开始学习书法
短语
释义
practice basic strokes
练习基本笔画
copy from famous copybooks
临摹名家字帖
pay attention to the structure
注意汉字结构
develop good writing habits
培养良好的书写习惯
improve your handwriting
改善书写
combine beauty with practicality
将美观与实用结合
benefit from...
从中受益
3.基础造句
1I am writing to offer you some advice on how to improve your handwriting.
我写信是为了给你一些关于改善书写的建议。
2
First,you can start by practicing the basic strokes of Chinese calligraphy.
首先,你可以从练习中国书法的基本笔画开始。
3It is a good idea to copy from famous copybooks every day.
每天临摹名家字帖是一个好主意。
4If you pay more attention to the structure of Chinese characters,your
handwriting will become neater.
如果你更注意汉字的结构,你的书写会变得更工整。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通help→benefit
Practicing calligraphy will benefit you a lot.
普通important→of great significance
Structure is of great significance in handwriting.
普通good→beneficial/rewarding
例:It is rewarding to learn calligraphy.
普通try to do+make every effort to do
You should make every effort to practice writing.
加分句型
1Knowing that you are troubled by your messy handwriting,I am writing to give
you some practical suggestions.
(得知你因字迹潦草而烦恼,我写信给你一些实用建议。一一现在分词作原因状语)
2 Not only will calligraphy improve the appearance of your writing,but also it will
help you appreciate Chinese culture.
(书法不仅能改善你的书写外观,还能帮你欣赏中国文化。一一部分倒装)
3 It is highly recommended that you (should)practice for at least 15 minutes a
day.
(强烈建议你每天至少练习15分钟。一一虚拟语气)
4Only by combining art with daily writing can you achieve beautiful
handwriting.
(只有将艺术与日常书写结合,你亨能写出漂亮的字。一一倒装句)
五、
导作模板(100-120词)
Dear Li Ming,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your handwriting.I am writing
to offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to start practicing Chinese calligraphy from basic
strokes,because it helps you build a solid foundation.Besides,you should copy
from famous copybooks every day,which can train your hand and eye coordination.
Last but not least,I strongly advise you to pay attention to the structure of each
character,as it is of great significance for neat writing-calligraphy teaches you
exactly that.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.I am confident that with practice,
your handwriting will improve a lot.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
六、作文仿军(120词左右)
仿写题目:你的朋友王芳觉得自己的汉字书写不好看,想通过练习书法提高。请给
她写一封建议信,重点说明书法与日常书写的关联。
Dear Wang Fang,
I am sorry to hear that you are not satisfied with your handwriting.I am writing to
offer you some practical advice.
First,it is a good idea to practice calligraphy by copying simple characters,
because it helps you understand the beauty of strokes.Besides,you should pay
attention to the balance and structure of Chinese characters while writing-
calligraphy focuses on these aspects.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to
keep a daily practice diary for 15 minutes,which can gradually improve your
handwriting.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I am sure that you will write beautifully if you
keep practicing.
Yours sincerely,
Tom
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议同学通过书法改善汉字书写
Dear Xiaoming,
I'm glad to hear that you want to improve your Chinese handwriting.I'd like to
share some practical suggestions with you.
First of all,it is a good idea to practice Chinese calligraphy regularly,because it
helps you master the strokes and structure of each character.Besides,you should
pay attention to the balance and spacing of your writing,which can make your
handwriting more beautiful.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to imitate
famous calligraphers'works,as it is beneficial to developing your own style and
improving your control of the brush.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I believe you will make great progress soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(约115词)
范文二:建议同学提高英语听力
Dear Wang Lei,
I'm sorry to hear that you find it difficult to understand English movies.Don't
worry.I'm writing to give you some practical advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to listen to simple English songs every day,because
they have clear pronunciation and catchy rhythms that help train your ear.Besides,
you should watch English news with subtitles,which can help you connect sounds
with words.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to practice listening for at
least 15 minutes daily,as it is beneficial to building up your listening ability step by
step.
I hope my suggestions will work for you.I'm sure you will make progress soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(约118词)