Unit 5 Natural Disasters 写作精讲一-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（冀教版）

高中 冀教版·必修1 Unit5 Natural Disasters写作精讲一 Designing a Bug-out Bag(设计应急包) Unit5 Natural Disasters写作精讲一：Designing a Bug-out Bag (设计应急包) 写作任务：根据自然灾害应急准备的主题，设计一个“紧急撤离包”(Bug-outBāg),并写一篇短文说明包 里应准备的物品及其用途，向他人提出建议。 申题 1话题：针对自然灾害（如地震、洪水、台风等）可能发生的紧急情况，设计一个随身携带 的应急包，列出必要物品并解释原因。 2体裁：说明建议类短文（何视为一种带有建议性质的说明文或建议信变体） 3人称：以第一人称|和第三人称you为主（向读者提出建议时用you) 4 时态：以一般现在时、一般将来时为核心时态（描述物品用途和应急场景） 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6 核心要点： >点明设计应急包的目的（应对自然灾害） >列出3-4种必备物品并说明理由 >表达对安全防范的重视和建议 二、文章结构 开头段：引出话题一一自然灾害频发，强调准备应急包的重要性，点明写作目 的。 2主体段：分条列举应急包中的关键物品，每件物品搭配具体用途或理由，使用连 接词使逻辑清晰。 3 结尾段：总结建议，呼吁读者做好准备，表达对安全的祝福。 三、 核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 disaster n.灾难 emergency n.紧急情况 survival n.生存 supply n.补给品；供应 essential adj.必要的 prepare V.准备；preparation n,准备 equipment n.设备；装备 flashlight n.手电筒 first-aid kit n.急救包 battery n.电池 rescue n.w.救援 2.常用短语 短语 释义 be prepared for... 为…做好准备 in case of .. 以防万一 survive a disaster 在灾难中幸存 pack a bag 打包一个包 keep...handy 把.…放在手边 短语 释义 meet basic needs 满足基本需求 be of great use 有很大用处 stay safe 保持安全 3.基础造句 1It is important to prepare a bug-out bag in case of natural disasters. 准备应急包以防自然灾害是很重要的。 2 A flashlight is necessary because electricity may be cut off. 手电筒是必需的，因为电力可能中断。 3 You should include enough food and water to last at least three days. 你应该准备至少三天的食物和水。 4 With a well-prepared bag,you can deal with emergencies more confidently. 有了准备充分的应急包，你可以更自信地应对紧急情况。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通 important essential of great significance 普通need→require/be in need of (普通helpful→beneficial/practical 普通 put→pack/store 普通 badsevere disastrous 加分句型 1Given that natural disasters can strike without warning,a bug-out bag is an absolute necessity. 考虑到自然灾害可能毫无预警地发生，应急包是绝对必要的。(Given that..鉴于) 2 Not only should you pack food and water,but you also need a first-aid kit. 你不仅应该准备食物和水，还需要一个急救包。（部分倒装句型） It is highly recommended that you keep a flashlight with extra batteries,as it can guide you in the dark. 强烈建议你带一个手电筒和备用电池，因为它能在黑暗中指引方向。（虚拟语气） 4Only when you are well-prepared can you ensure your safety during a disaster. 只有当你准备充分时，亨能在灾难中确保安全。（倒装句型） 五、写作模板(100-120词) Title A Bug-out Bag for Natural Disasters Natural disasters like earthquakes and floods can happen anytime.To stay safe, everyone should prepare a bug-out bag.Here are some essential items to pack. First of all,it is a good idea to include enough bottled water and non- perishable food,because they can keep you alive when supplies are cut off. Besides,you should pack a flashlight and extra batteries,which can help you see in the dark and signal for help.Last but not least,a first-aid kit is necessary, as it allows you to treat minor injuries immediately. In short,a well-planned bug-out bag can make a big difference in an emergency.I strongly suggest you prepare one right now.Stay safe and be prepared! 参考翻译： 标题：自然灾害应急包 像地震和洪水这样的自然灾害随时可能发生。为了保持安全，每个人都应该准备一个应急包。以下是 一些需要携带的必备物品。 首先，最好带上足够的瓶装水和不易腐烂的食物，因为当供应中断时它们能让你活下去。此外，你应 该带上手电筒和备用电池，这可以帮助你在黑暗中看清并发出求救信号。最后但同样重要的是，急救 包是必需的，因为它能让你立即处理轻微创伤。 总之，一个规划完善的应急包在紧急情况下能发挥很大作用。我强烈建议你现在就准备一个。保持安 全，做好准备！ 六、作文仿军(120词左右) 仿写题目：假设你所在地区容易发生地震，请写一篇短文向同学们介绍一个地震应 急包(earthquake bug-out bag)应包含的物品及理由。 范文 Earthquake Bug-out Bag Earthquakes can strike without warning,so it is wise to have a bug-out bag ready. Here is my advice on what to pack. First,you should store enough water and food that can last at least three days. They are essential for survival if you are trapped or unable to leave home.Second, a flashlight with spare batteries is a must-electricity often fails during quakes,and you need light to find your way or send a signal.Third,a first-aid kit and a whistle are also important.The kit helps treat injuries,while the whistle can help rescuers locate you. To sum up,preparing such a bag can greatly increase your chances of staying safe. Don't wait-start packing today! 参考译文： 地震可能毫无预警地发生，因此准备好一个应急包是明智的。以下是我关于应携带物品的建议。 首先，你应该储存至少可以维持三天的充足水和食物。如果你被困或无法离开家，它们对生存至关重要。其 次，带备用手电筒是必需的一一地震时电力常常中断，你需要光亮来找到路或发出信号。第三，急救包和哨子 也很重要。急救包有助于处理伤口，而哨子能帮助救援人员找到你。 总之，准备这样一个包能大大增加你保持安全的机会。不要再等待 一今天就开始打包吧！ 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议朋友如何准备应急包 Dear Mike, I heard you are planning to prepare a bug-out bag.I'm writing to offer some advice on how to organize it properly. First of all,it is a good idea to choose a strong and waterproof backpack,because it can protect your items in bad weather.Besides,you should pack items in small pouches by category,which can help you find things quickly during an emergency. Last but not least,I strongly advise you to check and update your bag every three months,as it is beneficial to keeping food and medicine fresh. I hope my suggestions help you build a reliable bug-out bag.Stay safe! Yours sincerely, Tom 范文二：建议朋友应急包中必备物品 Dear Sarah, I'm glad to receive your letter asking about essential items for a bug-out bag.Here are my recommendations. First of all,it is important to carry enough water and high-energy food,because they keep you alive for at least 72 hours.Besides,you should include a first-aid kit and a multi-tool,which can handle injuries and basic repairs.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to add a flashlight and a whistle,as they are beneficial for signaling for help in the dark. I hope my advice will be helpful.Best wishes for your preparation. Yours sincerely, Jack