Unit 5 Natural Disasters 写作精讲三-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（冀教版）

高中 冀教版·必修1 Unit5 Natural Disasters写作精讲三 Creating a Brochure of Survival Tips(制作生存技巧手册) Unit 5 Natural Disasters 写作任务：Creating a Brochure of Survival Tips(制作生存技巧手册) 审题 1话题：针对某类自然灾害（如地震、洪水、台风等），编写一份生存技巧手册，向公众提供 实用避险和自救建议。 2 体裁：应用文一一宣传手册(brochure/survival guide)。 3人称：以第二人称you为主，大量使用祈使句；可辅以第一人称we表示共同应对。 4 时态：以一般现在时为核心时态（说明客观事实与普逼建议）。 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词（手册正文，不含标题）。 6 核心要点： >明确灾害类型； >给出3-4条具体、可操作的生存技巧； >每条技巧搭配简要理由或注意事项； >结尾呼吁冷静、鼓励行动或表达祝愿。 二、文章结构 开头段(Introduction). 〉用醒目标题或一句引言点明灾害类型。 简要说明手册目的：帮助读者在灾害中保护自己。 2 主体段(Survival Tips) >分条列出技巧，每条一个独立段落或用序号/小标题。 >每条先写行动建议，再写原因或后果（例如：Drop,cover,and hold on.This position protects your head and neck.) >使用连接词或清单式表达使层次清晰(First,.Second,Finally等)。 3 结尾段(Conclusion) >总结核心原则（如保持冷静、提前准备）。 >表达对读者安全的祝愿，或提醒“记住这些技巧，关键时刻能救命”。 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 earthquake n.地震 disaster n.灾难 survive v.幸存；survival n.生存 shelter n.遮蔽处；v.躲避 protect v.保护；protection n.保护 evacuate v.疏散；evacuation n.疏散 emergency n.紧急情况 first aid 急救 remain /stay calm 保持冷静 2.常用短语 短语 释义 drop,cover and hold on 蹲下、遮挡、抓牢 stay away from... 远离… head to an open area 前往开阔地带 短语 释义 prepare an emergency kit 准备应急包 check for injuries 检查伤势 keep a flashlight handy 把手电筒放在手边 in case of an earthquake 万一发生地震 take cover 躲避 3.基础造句 1 In case of an earthquake,drop to your hands and knees 万一发生地震，立即手脚着地蹲下。 2 It is important to stay away from windows and heavy furniture. 远离窗户和重型家具很重要。 3Cover your head and neck with your arms until the shaking stops. 用手臂护住头颈，直到震动停止。 4 Always keep an emergency kit ready at home. 家里要始终备好应急包。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通important→vital/crucial/essential 普通 dangerous(life-threatening hazardous 普通 rememberkeep in mind that... 普通 protectshield safeguard 加分句型 1 It is crucial that you (should)drop,cover,and hold on immediately. 你立即诲下、护头、抓牢是至关重要的。（虚拟语气） 2 Only by staying calm can you think clearly and take proper action. 只有保持冷静，你扌能清晰思考并采取正确行动。（倒装句） 3 In the event of an earthquake,do not use the elevator,as it may get stuck. 若发生地震，不要使用电梯，因为它可能卡住。(as引导原因状语) Having an emergency plan in advance can make a huge difference between life and death. 提前制定应急计划可能带来生死之差。（动名词作主语） 五、 写作模板(100-120词) 标题：Survival Tips for [Disaster Type] Introduction [Disaster]can strike without warning.Follow these tips to protect yourself and your loved ones. Survival Tips 1.[Tip 1].[Reason Action]. 2.[Tip 2].[Reason Action]. 3.[Tip 3].[Reason /Action]. 4.[Tip 4].[Reason Action]. Conclusion Stay calm and act quickly.Remember:preparation saves lives. 参考翻译： 标题：生存技巧手册：[灾害类型] 引言：[灾害]可能毫无预兆地袭来。遵循以下建议，保护你自己和你所爱的人。 生存技巧 1.[建议1]。[理由/做法]。 2.[建议2]。[理由/做法]。 3.[建议3]。[理由/做法]。 4.[建议4]。[理由/做法]。 结论：保持冷静，迅速行动。记住：做好准备能挽救生命。 Example(以地震为例) Survival Tips for Earthquakes Earthquakes can happen anytime.Follow these tips to stay safe. First,drop,cover,and hold on until the shaking stops.This position protects your head and neck from falling objects. Second,stay away from windows,bookcases,and heavy furniture that might fall.Move to an inner wall or under a strong table. Third,if you are outdoors,move to an open area away from buildings,trees, and power lines. Finally,keep an emergency kit with water,food,and a flashlight in an easy-to- reach place. Stay calm and be prepared.Your quick action can save your life! 六、作文仿军(120词左右) 仿写题目：为学校安全教育月编写一份关于洪水(ood)的生存技巧手册。 Survival Tips for Floods Floods are dangerous and can rise quickly.Knowing what to do can keep you safe. First,move to higher ground immediately when a flood warning is issued.Do not wait until it's too late. Second,never walk or drive through floodwater.Just six inches of moving water can knock you down,and one foot can sweep away a car. Third,turn off electricity and gas if you are evacuating.This helps prevent fires and explosions. Finally,prepare a "go bag"with important documents,medicine,a flashlight,and drinking water.Keep it ready at all times. Stay alert and put safety first.Being prepared is the best protection. 参考译文： 洪水很危险，可能迅速上涨。知道该怎么做可以保护你的安全。 首先，当发布洪水预警时，立即转移到地势较高的地方。不要等到为时已晚。 其次，切勿步行或驾车穿过洪水。仅6英寸（约15厘米）的流水就能把你冲倒，1英尺（约30厘米）的洪 水就能冲走汽车。 第三，如果撤离，要关闭电源和燃气。这有助于防止火灾和爆炸。 最后，准备一个“应急包”，装上重要证件、药品、手电筒和饮用水。随时把它放在手边。 保持警惕，安全第一。做好准备是最好的保护。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议朋友提高英语写作 Dear Li Ming I heard that you are struggling with English writing.I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions. 1.First of all,it is a good idea to read model essays every day:they can help you learn sentence structures and useful expressions. 2.Besides,you should keep a vocabulary notebook:writing down new words and example sentences can improve your word bank. 3.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to practice writing short paragraphs on given topics:this is beneficial to building confidence and fluency. I hope my advice will be useful.I believe you will make great progress soon. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei (字数：108词) 范文二：建议同学克服考试焦虑 Dear Wang Fang, I'm sorry to learn that you feel anxious about the coming exam.Let me share some effective ways to deal with it. 1.First of all,it is a good idea to make a clear study plan:breaking down tasks into small parts can reduce pressure and increase efficiency. 2.Besides,you should take deep breaths for 3 minutes before the exam:it helps calm your mind and focus better. 3.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to get enough sleep the night before: adequate rest is beneficial to keeping a clear head during the test. I hope my tips will help you.I'm sure you will perform well. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (字数：110词)