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Unit 1 Being a Teenager导作精讲三
Making a Speech on How Teenagers Face Their Challenges(发表关于青少年如何面对挑战的演讲)
Unit 1 Being a Teenager写作精讲三
写作任务:Making a Speech on How Teenagers Face Their Challenges(发表关于青少年如何面对挑
战的演讲)
审题
1
话题:以“青少年如何面对挑战”为主题,发表一篇演讲,鼓励同龄人正视成长中的困难,
积极应对压力、困惑、失败等挑战。
2
体裁:演讲稿(speech).一一属于应用文,具备开场问候、正文论述、结束致辞三部分结
构。
3人称:以第一人称1和第一人称复数w为主,体现演讲者与听众的共鸣;适当使用第二
人称you增强号召力。
4时态:以一般现在时为核心时态(陈述事实、观点、建议);适当使用一般将来时(表达决
心与愿景)。
5
字数要求:高考标准100-120词(演讲词可略长,控制在120-150词)。
6
核心要点:
>开场问候与引入主题
>指出青少年面临的常见挑战(学习压力、人际交往、自我怀疑等)
>提出2-3条具体、可操作的应对建议
,强调积极心态与行动的重要性
>以鼓舞性语言收尾,致谢
文章结构
1开头段(问候+引入主题):向听众问好((Good morning,.dear friends/
fellow students/teachers and classmates);简要点明演讲主题;引起听众
共鸣:承认挑战的存在与普逼性。
例句:Good morning,everyone!Today,,I'd like to share my thoughts on
how we teenagers can face the challenges in our lives.
2
主体段(论点+论据+建议):指出1-2种常见挑战(如学业压力、自我怀
疑、人际关系);针对每种挑战,提出具体应对策略;每条建议搭配理由或亲身经
历,增强说服力;使用连接词使层次分明:First of all,Besides,Moreo ver,
Lastlyo
建议结构:①指出挑战;②提出建议;③解释原因/举例
3结尾段(号召+鼓励+致谢):重申挑战并不可怕,关键在于态度与行动;鼓
励听众勇敢面对、积极成长;以一句励志话语或呼吁结束;致谢(Thank you for
listening.That's all.Thank you!)
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
词性
释义
challenge
n..
挑战;向挑战
pressure
n.
压力
overcome
V.
克服
struggle
n./N.
挣扎;奋斗
confidence
0:
信心
strength
力量;优势
growth
n.
成长
attitude
n.
态度
failure
n.
失败
determination
n.
决心
2.常用短语
短语
释义
face a challenge
面对挑战
deal with stress
应对压力
build up confidence
建立自信
keep a positive attitude
保持积极态度
learn from failure
从失败中学习
step out of one's comfort zone
走出舒适区
never give up
永不放弃
turn to sb.for help
向某人寻求帮助
3.基础造句
1
As teenagers,we face many challenges in our daily life.
作为青少年,我们在日常生活中面临许多挑战。
2First of all,we should keep a positive attitude toward difficulties.
首先,我们应该对困难保持积极态度。
3It is important to learn from failure instead of being afraid of it.
从失败中学习比害怕失败更重要。
4If we take action bravely,we will grow stronger and wiser.
如果我们勇敢采取行动,会变得更坚强、更明智。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通many→numerous./a variety of
普通important→essential/ital/crucial
普通
difficulttough/demanding
普通
brave→courageous
普通
help→assist/support
普通
try hard make every effort/spare no effort
加分句型
l强调句:It is not the challenge itself,but our attitude towards it,,that really
matters.
重要的不是挑战本身,而是我们面对它的态度。
2定语从句(非限制性):We should learn from failure,,which is actually the mother
of success.
我们应该从失败中学习,而失败实际上是成功之母。
3倒装句型:Only by facing challenges bravely can we grow into better ourselves,
只有勇敢面对挑战,我们中能成长为更好的自己。
4析使句+and/or结构:Keep trying,,and you will see the light at the end of the
tunnel.
继续努力,你就会看到隧道尽头的光。
5宾语从句:I believe that every challenge is a chance for us to become stronger.
我相信每一个挑战都是我们变得更强大的机会。
五、写作模板(120-150词)
Good morning,dear friends!
Today,I'd like to talk about how we teenagers can face the challenges in our lives.
As we grow up,we all meet difficulties,such as pressure from studies or doubts
about ourselves.But challenges are not enemies-they are chances for us to grow.
First of all,we should keep a positive attitude.When we face a problem,
instead of running away,try to think about what we can learn from it.
Besides,it is important to ask for help.We can talk to our parents,teachers,or
friends.Sharing our worries makes them easier to deal with.
Most importantly never give up.Even if we fail,we should try again.Only in
this way can we improve ourselves step by step.
In a word,challenges make us stronger.Let's face them bravely and grow
together!
Thank you for listening!
六、范文展示(120词左右)
题目:假设你是李华,将在班级英语演讲比赛中发表题为How to Face
Challenges as a Teenager的演讲。请写一篇演讲稿。
Good morning,dear classmates!
Today,I'd like to share my opinion on how teenagers can face challenges.As we all
know,we meet numerous challenges in our daily life,such as heavy study pressure
and feelings of self-doubt.
First of all,we should keep a positive attitude.A positive mind helps us see
hope instead of trouble.
Besides,it is crucial to build up confidence.We can set small goals and achieve
them step by step.Every small success adds to our courage.
What's more,don't be afraid to ask for help.Our teachers,parents,and friends
are always there to support us when we need them.
In short,challenges are part of growth.If we face them bravely,we will become
stronger and better.
Thank you!
范文点评
评价维度
具体表现
开场问候;提出挑战;三条建议(态度、信心、求
结构完整
助);呼吁收尾;致谢
内容充实
每条建议搭配理由或方法,语言有号召力
非限制性定语从句which helps us..;倒装句
语法亮点
Only in this way can we...
numerous,crucial,build up confidence,
词汇丰富
step by step,support
字数控制
约130词,符合演讲类要求
演讲写作小贴士
1.开场要响亮一一用Good morning,dear.,吸引注意,快速点题。
2.多用第一人称复数we一一拉近距离,营造“我们一起面对"的氖围。
3.每条建议后给出简短理由或例子一一避免空谈,增强说服力。
4.结尾要有力量一一用号召性语句(如“Lt's.…”)让听众产生行动意愿。
5,控制句长一一演讲需要朗朗上口,短句效果更佳。
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议朋友应对考试失败挫折
Dear Li Hua,
I am sorry to hear that you feel upset about your exam failure.I am writing to
share some ideas on facing this challenge.
First of all,it is a good idea to treat failure as a learning opportunity,because it
helps you find your weak points and improve.Besides,you should make a realistic
study plan and stick to it,which can build your confidence step by step.Last but
not least,I strongly advise you to talk to your teachers,as it is beneficial to getting
professional guidance and encouragement.
I hope my advice will help you move forward.I believe you can turn the challenge
into growth.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
范文二:建议同学克服演讲紧张
Dear Wang Ming,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for tips on overcoming stage fright.Here are
some suggestions for you.
First of all,it is a good idea to practice your speech in front of a mirror,because it
helps you get used to your own voice and gestures.Besides,you should breathe
deeply before speaking,which can calm your nerves and keep you focused.Last
but not least,I strongly advise you to prepare key points on small cards,as it is
beneficial to recalling content smoothly.
I hope my advice will be useful.I'm looking forward to hearing your successful
speech.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Ying