Unit 2 Friendship 写作精讲一-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（冀教版）

高中 冀教版·必修1 Unit2 Friendship写作精讲一 Telling Stories of Friendship(讲述友谊故事) Unit2 Friendship写作精讲 写作任务：Telling Stories of Friendship(讲述友谊故事)一一讲述一段亲身经历或身边发生的友谊故 事，突出朋友之间的支持、理解或共同成长，表达对友谊的感悟。 审题 1 话题：围绕“友谊”主题，讲述一个真实或虚构的故事，体现朋友之间的帮助、信任或陪 伴。 2 体裁：记叙文（故事叙述） 3人称：以第一人称I为主，也可用第三人称he/she讲述他人的故事。 41 时态：以一般过去时为核心时态，结尾感悟部分可用一般现在时。 5字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6 核心要点： >交代故事背景（时间、人物、起因） >描述具体事件（冲突、困难或关键时刻） 〉体现朋友的行动与自己的感受 〉结尾总结友谊的意义或感悟 文章结构 1开头段(1-2句)：引出故事背景，点明时间、人物和起因。 Last semester,I failed an important exam and felt very upset.It was my best friend Li Ming who helped me get through that dark time. 2主体段(3-5句)：详细描述事件，突出朋友的帮助或陪伴，可用对话、动作等 细节。 He noticed my sadness and asked me to go for a walk.Then he shared his own experience of failure and encouraged me to keep trying.Every day after school,he studied with me and explained difficult problems. 3结尾段(1-2句)：总结感悟，表达对友谊的珍惜或友谊带给自己的改变。 Thanks to his support,I not only improved my grades but also learned the true value of friendship.I will always cherish this precious bond. 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 friendship n.友谊 trust n./N.信任 support n.N.支持 encourage encouragement v.鼓励；n.鼓励 grateful adj.感激的 unforgettable adj.难忘的 companion n.同伴 bond n.纽带；联系 2.常用短语 短语 释义 a true friend 真正的朋友 stand by me 支持我/站在我这边 cheer me up 使我振作起来 短语 释义 go through difficulties together 一起度过困难 share joys and sorrows 分享快乐与悲伤 be grateful for 感谢 make a difference 有影响；起作用 in time of need 在需要的时候 3.基础造句 1I will never forget the day when my best friend helped me. 我永远不会忘记我最好的朋友帮助我的那一天。 2 He not only gave me useful advice but also stayed with me when I was sad. 他不仅给了我有用的建议，而且在我难过时陪着我。 3Thanks to her support,I finally overcame the difficulty. 多亏了她的支持，我终于克服了困难。 4Friendship is like a light that guides us through dark times. 友谊就像一盏灯，指引我们度过黑暗时光。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通 important>significant/meaningful 普通help→support/assist 普通 happydelighted cheerful 普通 sad→depressed/upset 加分句型 1 It was my best friend who encouraged me to move on. 正是我最好的朋友鼓励我继续前行。（强调句型） 2 Without his help,I would not have succeeded in the end. 没有他的帮助，我最后不会成功。（虚拟语气） 3Whenever I felt discouraged,he would always be there for me. 每当我感到气馁时，他总是在我身边。（状语从句） 4Not only did she comfort me,but she also offered practical advice. 她不仅安慰我，还提供了实用的建议。（部分倒装） 5 What touched me most was that he gave up his own time to help me. 最让我感动的是他放弃了自己的时间来帮助我。（主语从句） 五、写作模板(100-120词) Title:Title】(可加题目，也可不加) 开头段 I still remember the story that happened between my best friend and me.It was[时间/背景].I was facing[困难/问题]. 主体段 At that time,my friend【做了什么].He/SheI细节描述l.Because of his/.her help, I[结果/变化].Ve spent a lot of time together,,and gradually I感受/收获]. 结尾段 This experience taught me that true friendship means [I am really grateful to have such a friend. 示例模板 I still remember the story that happened between my best friend Wang Lei and me. It was last term when I got seriously ill and had to stay home for two weeks. At that time,my friend came to visit me every day.He brought me class notes and explained what I missed.Because of his help,I didn't fall behind in my studies.We studied together,and gradually I felt less worried. This experience taught me that true friendship means being there for each other in times of need.I am really grateful to have such a friend. 六、作文仿得(120词左右) 仿写题目：讲述一个关于你和朋友共同克服困难的友谊故事。 范文 A true friend is always there when you need them.I still remember the story between my friend Li Mei and me. Last year,I was too shy to speak in public and failed the class speech contest. Feeling disappointed,I wanted to give up.However,Li Mei encouraged me and practiced with me every day after school.She taught me how to control my voice and stay calm.With her patience and support,I gradually built up confidence. Finally,in the next contest,I won second prize.I was so grateful that I cried.This experience made me realize that friendship gives us strength to overcome difficulties.I will treasure our friendship forever. (120 words) 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议好友改善睡眠质量 Dear Tom, I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired and sleepy in class.I am writing to offer you some helpful advice. First of all,it is a good idea to set a fixed bedtime every night,because it helps your body form a regular sleep cycle.Besides,you should avoid using your phone or computer before sleeping,which can make it easier to fall asleep.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to do some light exercise like stretching,as it is beneficial to relaxing your mind and body. I hope my advice will help you sleep better.I'm sure you will feel energetic soon. Yours sincerely, Jack (字数：115词) 范文二：建议朋友如何结交新同学 Dear Anna I'm glad to hear that you want to make more friends in the new school.I'd like to share some practical ideas. First of all,it is a good idea to join a club or a sports team,because it gives you chances to meet people with similar interests.Besides,you should start conversations with a smile and ask simple questions,which can break the ice easily.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to be a good listener,as it is beneficial to building trust and showing kindness. I hope my advice will be useful.I'm looking forward to hearing about your new friends Yours sincerely, Cindy (字数：119词)