Unit 3 Travel 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（沪外版）

高中 沪外版（上海外语教育出版社）·必修第一册 Unit3 Travel写作精讲 Describing a travel destination(描述-个旅行目的地) Unit3 Travel写作精讲 单元：Unit3 Travel|写作任务：Describing a travel destination(描述-个旅行目的地) 审题 1话题：选择一个合你印象深刻的旅行目的地，描述其自然风光、文化特色、独特体验等， 展现该地的魅力并表达个人感受 2 体裁：描述性短文（可融入书信、游记或博客形式） 3人称：以第一人称|为主，描述所见所闻所感；介绍目的地时使用第三人称t 4 时态：以一般现在时为主（描述地点的常态特征），配合一般过去时（叙述旅行经历） 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6 核心要点： >引出目的地并交代背景 >描述2-3个特色方面（如自然景观、人文风情、美食体验等） ，表达个人感受与推荐 文章结构 1 开头段：引出旅行目的地，交代旅行时间或背景，用一句话概括对该地的总体印 象 2 主体段：分2-3个方面描述目的地的特色，每个方面搭配具体细节或个人经历， 使用过渡词衔接，生动呈现画面感 3 结尾段：总结旅行感受，表达推荐或再次造访的愿望，升华主题 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 destination n.目的地 landscape n.风景；景观 breathtaking adj.合人惊叹的；壮丽的 attraction n.景点；吸引力 diverse adj.多样化的；不同的 cuisine n.烹饪；美食 immerse V.沉浸；使深陷 capture v.捕获；赢得(attention/,heart) unique adj.独特的；独一无二的 unforgettable adj.难忘的 2.常用短语 短语 释义 be located in 位于… be famous for 以.…闻名 be known as 作为…而闻名 a feast for the eyes 视觉盛宴 leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象 be surrounded by 被…环绕 have a glimpse of 瞥见；领略 feel the charm of 感受…的魅力 rich in history/culture 历史悠久/文化丰富 短语 释义 a perfect getaway 完美的度假地 3.基础造句 1 My trip to...was an unforgettable experience. 我的..…之旅是一次难忘的经历。 2The destination is famous for its breathtaking natural scenery. 这个目的地以其壮丽的自然风光而闻名。 3You can immerse yourself in the local culture and enjoy the delicious cuisine. 你可以沉浸在当地文化中，享受美味佳肴。 4 This place is well worth visiting,as it offers a unique travel experience. 这个地方很值得一游，因为它提供了独特的旅行体验。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型 高级词汇替换 普通 bea utifulbreathtaking magnificent/picturesque 普通】 interestingfascinating captivating enchanting 普通 specialunique exceptional extraordinary 普通 like be deeply attracted by be captivated by 加分句型 1 Located in ...the destination is a perfect place to .. 位于…，这个目的地是.…的理想去处。（过去分词短语作状语） 2 Not only does it offer...,but it also provides visitors with .. 它不仅提供…，还为游客提供了…（部分倒装句型） 3What makes this place so special is that .. 让这个地方如此特别的是.…（主语从句句型） 4 It is highly recommended that you visit ...where you can experience... 强烈推荐你去参观…，在那里你可以体验.…（虚拟语气+定语从句） 5There is no denying that the trip has broadened my horizons and enriched my life. 不可否认，这次旅行开阔了我的眼界，丰富了我的生活。（固定句型） 五、写作模板 (100-120词) Title:[目的地名称] Have you ever dreamed of visiting a place that is both breathtaking and culturally rich?I was lucky enough to visit[]last summer,and it left a deep impression on me. When it comes to[方面一，如自然风光l,what strikes you most is[具体描述]. Another unforgettable experience is[方面二，如人文风情]，where you can[具体 体验l.What truly makes this place special is[方面三，如美食/话动l,which allows you to[具体感受I. In a word,I目的地]is a must-.visit destination.I hope one day you can go there and experience its charm for yourself.I am sure you will fall in love with it. Yours, [Your Name] 参考翻译： 标题：[目的地名称] 你是否會梦想过游览一个既壮丽又富有文化底蕴的地方？去年夏天，我有幸游览了[目的地]，它给我 留下了深刻的印象。 说到[方面一，如自然风光]，最打动你的是[具体描述]。另一段难忘的经历是[方面二，如人文风情]， 在那里你可以[具体体验]。真正让这个地方特别的是[方面三，如美食/活动]，它能让你[具体感受]。 总之，[目的地]是一个必游之地。希望你有一天能亲自去感受它的魅力。我相信你一定会爱上它。 此致， [你的名字] 六、作文仿写(120词左右) 仿写题目：描述你最喜欢的一个旅行目的地一一丽江古城(Old Town of Lijiang) A Fascinating Trip to Lijiang Have you ever dreamed of visiting a place that is both breathtaking and culturally rich?I was lucky enough to visit the Old Town of Lijiang last summer,and it left a deep impression on me. When it comes to the natural scenery,what strikes you most is the winding canals and ancient stone bridges that run through the whole town.Another unforgettable experience is the local Naxi culture,where you can listen to the ancient Naxi music and learn about their unique customs.What truly makes this place special is the local cuisine,which allows you to taste a variety of delicious snacks while wandering along the lantern-lit streets. In a word,Lijiang is a must-visit destination.I hope one day you can go there and experience its charm for yourself.I am sure you will fall in love with it. Yours, Tom 参考译文： 《难忘的丽江之旅》 你是否會梦想过游览一个既壮丽又富有文化底蕴的地方？去年夏天，我有幸游览了丽江古城，它给我留下了深 刻的印象。 说到自然风光，最打动你的是蜿蜒的水道和贯穿全城的古老石桥。另一段难忘的经历是当地的纳西文化，在那 里你可以聆听古老的纳西音乐，了解他们独特的习俗。真正让这个地方特别的是当地美食，它让你在挂着灯笼 的街港间漫步时，品尝到各式各样美味的小吃。 总之，丽江是一个必游之地。希望你有一天能亲自去感受它的魅力。我相信你一定会爱上它。 此致， 汤姆 教辅排版提示 〉以上内容建议按“审题→结构→词句→模板→仿写”五步布局 〉关键词句可加粗或使用彩色高亮 模板和范文可用不同底色区分，便于学生对比模仿 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：推荐好友游览杭州西湖 Dear Li Hua, I'm writing to recommend you a wonderful travel destination-the West Lake in Hangzhou.It's located in the heart of the city and is famous for its beautiful scenery and rich culture. 1.First,you can enjoy a relaxing boat ride on the lake,because the gentle breeze and clear water will make you feel peaceful. 2.Besides,it's a great idea to walk along the Su Causeway,where you can see weeping willows and ancient bridges. 3.Last but not least,don't miss the musical fountain show at night,as it is truly amazing. I'm sure you will fall in love with this place.Hope you can visit it soon! Yours, Xiao Ming 范文二：推荐好友游览北京故宫 Dear Zhang Wei, I'm glad to share with you a fantastic travel destination-the Forbidden City in Beijing.It lies in the center of the capital and is one of the most famous royal palaces in the world. 1.First,you should take a guided tour to learn about the history of the Ming and Qing dynasties,because the stories behind each hall are fascinating. 2.Besides,spending time in the Imperial Garden is a good choice,where you can admire ancient trees and exquisite rockeries. 3.Last but not least,remember to taste the special ice cream shaped like the palace,as it is both delicious and fun. I strongly recommend you go there.You will definitely have an unforgettable experience. Yours, Lin Tao