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高中
沪外版(上海外语教育出版社)·必修第一册
Unit1 School Life写作精讲
Describing the first week experiences(描述高中第一周的经历)
Unit 1 School Life
单元:Unit 1 School Life」写作精讲:Describing the first week experiences(描述高中第一周的经
历)
审题
1
话题:描述自己升入高中第一周的经历,包括新环境、新老师、新同学、课程安排、社团
活动及个人感受。
2
体裁:记叙类短文(日记/随笔/书信均可),重点在于“叙述+感受”。
3人称:以第一人称1为主,可适当使用w表示集体经历。
4时态:以一般过去时为核心时态,描述已发生的经历;结尾可转至一般现在时表达当前
感受或未来期待。
5字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
6核心要点:交代时间背景((first week.)、描述2-3个典型事件或场景、表达真实的情感
变化(紧张→适应→期待)。
二、文章结构
1开头段:交代背景(升入高中第一周),总述总体印象(兴奋/紧张/新奇)。
2
主体段:分述具体经历,如:
〉①结识新朋友或遇见友善的老师
〉②课程难度或有趣的课堂活动
〉③参加社团或适应校园环境
每个经历搭配1-2句个人感受。
3
结尾段:总结第一周带来的成长,表达对接下来高中生活的期待与信心。
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
freshman newcomer
高一新生
campus
n.校园
atmosphere
n.氛围
course
n.课程
club
n.社团
impressed
adj.印象深刻的
nervous
adj.紧张不安的
excited
adj.兴奋的
adapt
v.适应;adaptation n.适应
confident
adj.自信的
2.常用短语
短语
释义
on the first day
在第一天
get to know
逐渐了解
make new friends
结交新朋友
take part in
参加
get used to
习惯于
feel at home
感觉自在
get along with
与.相处
短语
释义
look forward to
期待
3.基础造句
1I felt a little nervous on the first day of senior high school.
高中第一天我有点紧张。
2 Our head teacher impressed me with her warm smile.
班主任温暖的笑容给我留下了深刻印象。
3I joined the English club,which helped me make new friends.
我加入了英语俱乐部,这帮我交到了新朋友。
4
Now I feel more confident and look forward to the coming years.
现在我更加自信,并期待未来的几年。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型
高级词汇替换
普通very happy→delighted/overjoyed
普通hard→challenging/demanding
普通Iike→be fond of/be keen on
普通
beginset out /start off
加分句型
1 Surrounded by friendly classmates,I quickly felt at home.
被友好的同学包围着,我很快就感到自在。(过去分词短语作状语)
2 Not only did I learn new subjects,but I also discovered the joy of teamwork.
我不仅学习了新科目,还发现了团队合作的乐趣。(部分倒装)
3 It was the first time that I had experienced such a lively class.
那是我第一次经历如此活跃的课堂。(It was the first time that...句型)
4What impressed me most was the beautiful campus with a large library.
最合我印象深刻的是那个拥有大图书馆的美丽校园。(主语从句)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
模板
My First Week in Senior High School
The first week of my senior high school life was both challenging and exciting.
On the first day,I felt a little nervous when I entered the classroom.However,my
new classmates were friendly,and our head teacher gave us a warm welcome.
During the week,I attended interesting classes and joined the basketball club.Not
only did I learn a lot,but I also made several good friends.Adapting to the new
schedule was not easy,but I gradually got used to it.
By the end of the week,I felt confident and happy.I am looking forward to the
colorful school life ahead.
参考翻译:
我在高中的第一周既充满挑战又命人兴奋。
第一天,我走进教室时有点紧张。然而,新同学们很友好,班主任热情地欢迎了我们。这一周里,我
上了有趣的课,并加入了篮球社。我不仅学到了很多,还交了几个好朋友。适应新的作息并不容易,
但我渐渐习惯了。
到了周末,我感到自信而快乐。我期待着丰富多彩的校园生活。
六、
作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你是李华,刚刚结束高中第一周的学习生活。请用英语写一篇短
文,描述你的第一周经历。
范文
My First Week in Senior High School
The first week of senior high school has come to an end.It was truly an
unforgettable experience.
On Monday morning,I walked into the campus with a mix of nervousness and
excitement.The classrooms were bright and modern,and my teachers were kind
and passionate.What impressed me most was the chemistry class,where we did a
fascinating experiment.During the break,I met a boy named Tom,and we quickly
became friends.We even signed up for the school's debate club together.
Although the courses were more challenging than before,I enjoyed every lesson.
Now I feel more confident about my new life.I can't wait to explore more in the
coming years!
参考译文:
高中第一周已经结束。这真是一次难忘的经历。
星期一早上,我怀着紧张又兴奋的心情走进校园。教室明亮而现代,老师们和蔼而热情。最合我印象深刻的是
化学课,我们做了一个有趣的实验。课间,我遇到了一个叫汤姆的男孩,我们很快成了朋友。我们还一起报名
参加了学校的辩论社。
虽然课程比以前更具挑战性,但我喜欢每一节课。现在我对新生活更加自信了。我迫不及待地想在未来的日子
里探索更多!
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:描述高中第一周的新鲜体验
Dear Li Ming
How are you doing?I'm writing to share my exciting first week at senior high
school.
First of all,the campus is much larger than my junior school,and I was amazed by
the modern library and labs.Besides,I made new friends from different places
during the orientation activities,which made me feel less lonely.Last but not least,
the teachers are very kind and inspiring.They encouraged us to be independent
and explore our interests.
I really enjoy my new school life.I'm looking forward to the coming days.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
(112 words)
范文二:描述高中第一周的挑战与成长
Dear Wang Fang,
I hope this letter finds you well.I'd like to tell you about my first week in senior
high.
To be honest,I felt a bit nervous at first.The courses are more difficult and the
schedule is tighter.However,I soon got used to it.Besides,I joined the school
basketball club,which helped me relax and make friends.Last but not least,I
learned to manage my time better by using a notebook to plan homework and
activities.
Though challenging,this week taught me a lot.I believe I will become stronger.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Hao
(113 words)