Unit 2 The things around us 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第三册单元话题写作精讲（沪教版）

高中示教版上海教育出版社)·必修第三册 Unit2 The things around us写作精讲 Writing an article describing a process(写描述流程的文章) Unit 2 The things around us 单元：Unit2 The things around us写作在务：Writing an article describing a process(写描述 流程的文章) 审题 1 话题：描述某个物品的制作、某项活动的完成步骤，或某个自然生活过程的顺序。内容应 清晰、连贯，突出各步骤的逻辑关系。 2体裁：说明文(article)。非书信，无称呼与落款。一般带有标题。 3人称：以第二人称you(通用读者)或祈使句为主；也可用第三人称one或被动语态。 4时态：以一般现在时为核心时态（表示普逼步骤），也可用析使句（动词原形）。 5字数要求：高考标准100-120词。 6 核心要点： 〉明确要描述的过程或目的 >按时间/操作顺序列出3-5个步骤 >使用恰当的连接词(frst,next,then,after that,finally) 〉结尾可补充注意事项或成果说明 文章结构 1开头段：引出话题，说明要描述的过程及其意义或目的。例如：“Making a paper pinwheel is a fun and simple craft.Here is how to do it." 2主体段：分步说明。每步用连接词引导，必要时补充关键细节（如工具、材料、 操作要领)。一般3-5步。 3结尾段：总结成果或效果，或者给出温馨提示。例如：“Now you have a beautiful pinwheel that spins in the wind.Enjoy!" 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 step n.步骤 process n.过程；流程 procedure n.程序；步骤 material n.材料 tool n.工具 prepare v.准备；preparation n.准备 cut V.剪；切 fold V.折叠 attach v.固定；附上 secure V.使牢固 decorate V.装饰 remove V.移除 gently adv.轻轻地 carefully adv.仔细地 2.常用短语 短语 释义 first of all to begin with 首先 短语 释义 after that next /then 然后 once you have done... 一旦你完成了… make sure that... 确保… be careful not to... 注意不要… in order to... 为了… at this point 此时 the final step is to.… 最后一步是 3.基础造句 1 The first step is to prepare all the materials. 第一步是准备好所有材料。 2 Next,cut the paper into a square shape. 接下来，把纸剪成正方形。 3 Then,fold the paper along the diagonal line. 然后，沿着对角线折叠纸张。 4 After that,attach the pin to the center of the paper. 之后，把图钉固定在纸张中心。 5Finally,your paper pinwheel is ready to spin. 最后，你的纸风车就可以转动了。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通use→employ/make use of 普通need→require 普通important→crucial/essential 普通 do→carry out/perform 普通】 finish→complete 加分句型 Having prepared all the materials,you can start the following steps. 准备好所有材料后，你就可以开始以下步骤了。（现在分词完成式作状语） 2 It is essential that you cut the paper carefully,or the pinwheel may not spin well. 你必须仔细裁剪纸张，否则风车可能转不好。（虚拟语气表建议） 3Only by following these steps in order can you create a perfect pinwheel. 只有按顺序遵循这些步骤，你中能做出一个完美的风车。（倒装句） A square piece of paper,a pin,and a straw are all that is needed. 你只需要一张方纸、一枚图钉和一根吸管。（定语从句+省略） 五、 写作模板(100-120词) 标题：How to Make a Paper Pinwheel 开头段 Making a paper pinwheel is a simple but interesting craft.With just a few materials,you can create a toy that spins in the wind.Here are the steps. 主体段 First,prepare a square piece of paper,a pin,and a straw.Next,fold the paper along both diagonals to make creases.Then,cut along each crease from the corner toward the center,stopping about 2 cm from the middle.After that,gently fold every other corner to the center and push the pin through all four corners and the center.Finally,attach the pin to the top of the straw. 结尾段 Now you have a colorful pinwheel.Hold it up and watch it spin!Be careful with the pin,though-it is sharp. 六、作文仿军(120词左右) 仿写题目：你是一名环保爱好者，请写一篇短文介绍如何利用废弃塑料瓶制作一个 简单的喂鸟器(bird feeder)。步骤包括： 1.清洗塑料瓶 2.在瓶身两侧切出小内 3.插入木棍作为栖木 4.在瓶底钻几个小孔（排水） 5.装入鸟食，悬挂在树枝上 参考范文 How to Make a Simple Bird Feeder from a Plastic Bottle Recycling a plastic bottle into a bird feeder is both eco-friendly and fun.Here is the process. First of all,clean the bottle thoroughly and remove the label.Next,use scissors to cut two small doors on opposite sides of the bottle-about 5 cm above the bottom. Then,make a small hole just below each door and push a wooden stick through both holes to serve as a perch.After that,drill a few tiny holes in the bottom to let rainwater drain out.Finally,fill the bottle with birdseed,close the cap,and hang it upside down from a tree branch. Your homemade bird feeder is ready!In just a few days,you will see birds visiting. Enjoy watching them! 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议提高英语听力 Dear Mike I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in English listening.I'm writing to offer you some practical tips. First of all,it is a good idea to listen to BBC or VOA news every morning,because it helps you get used to natural speech and different accents.Besides,you should watch English movies with subtitles at first,which can improve your understanding of spoken English.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to take dictation of short passages,as it is beneficial to sharpening your listening skills and spelling. I hope my advice will be useful.I'm sure you'll make great progress soon. Yours sincerely, Li Hua (供118词) 范文二：建议高效管理学习时间 Dear Lucy, I'm glad to hear that you want to improve your time management.I'd like to share some useful methods with you. First of all,it is a good idea to make a daily to-do list every evening,because it helps you prioritize tasks and stay organized.Besides,you should break large tasks into small parts and set a timer for each,which can reduce procrastination and increase focus.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to review what you've learned every weekend,as it is beneficial to strengthening memory and avoiding last-minute cramming. I hope my advice will work for you.Looking forward to your good news. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei (共122词)