Unit 4 Achievements 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册单元话题写作精讲（沪教版）

高中京教版上海教育出版社)·必修第二册 Unit4 Achievements导作精讲 Writing an opinion essay on PE classes(写一篇关于体育课的观点议论文) Unit4 Achievements写作精讲 写作任务：Writing an opinion essay on PE classes(写一篇关于体育课的观点议论文) 审题 1话题：就“体育课是否应该成为高中必修课程”或“体育课的重要性”等议题，发表个人观点 并进行论证 2 体裁：观点议论文(opinion essay) 3人称：以第一人称为主，辅以第三人称(students,teachers等) 4 时态：以一般现在时为核心时态，表达普逼观点和事实 5 字数要求：高考标准100-120词/高中议论文120-150词 6核心要点：明确表达个人观点（同意/反对/中立）→给出2-3个理由（分论点）→每个理 由配以具体论据（举例、因果、对比等）→结尾重申观点并升华 文章结构 1开头段：引出话题+表明自己的立场(1 strongly believe that./nmy opinion,...) 2主体段：分2-3段阐述理由，每段一个中心论点，用连接词衔接(First of all,, Moreover,Furthermore,In addition,Last but not least) 3 结尾段：总结观点，呼应开头，可适当提出建议或展望 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 beneficial adj.有益的 essential adj.必不可少的 physical health 身体健康 mental health 心理健康 teamwork n.团队合作 stress relief 压力缓解 academic performance 学业表现 well-rounded adj.全面发展的 obesity n.肥胖 sedentary lifestyle 久坐的生活方式 2.常用短语 短语 释义 attach great importance to 非常重视 play a vital role in 在..中起关键作用 contrib ute to 有助于 not only...but also... 不仅…而且.… there is no doubt that 毫无疑问 from my perspective 从我的角度来看 on the one hand...on the other hand... 一方面…另一方面… in short/in a word 简而言之 3.基础造句 1I strongly believe that PE classes should be kept as a compulsory subject in high school. 我强烈认为体育课应该作为高中必修课程保留。 2 First of all,regular physical exercise is beneficial to students'physical health. 首先，规律的体育锻炼有益于学生的身体健康。 3Moreover,playing sports helps students relieve stress and improve their mental well-being. 此外，运动有助于学生缓解压力、改善心理健康。 4Last but not least,team sports teach students the value of cooperation and communication. 最后但同样重要的是，团队运动教会学生合作与沟通的价值。 5 In conclusion,PE classes are of great significance for students'all-round development. 总之，体育课对学生的全面发展意义重大。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通 important of great importance significance 普通good for→beneficial to/contribute to 普通help→enable sb,todo/assist in 普通} manya variety of /a wide range of 普通 s04 therefore consequently as a result 加分句型 1 There is no denying that PE classes play an indispensable role in students' growth. 不可否认，体育课在学生成长中扮演着不可或缺的角色。(there is no denying that..) 2 Not only do PE classes strengthen our bodies,but they also refresh our minds. 体育课不仅强健我们的体魄，还让我们精神焕发。（部分倒装） It is widely acknowledged that a healthy body serves as the foundation for academic success. 人们普逼认为，健康的身体是学业成功的基础。(it is widely acknowledged that..) 4Only when students engage in regular physical activities can they maintain a balanced lifestyle. 只有当学生进行规律的体育活动时，他们序能保持平衡的生活方式。(oly引导的倒装句) 5Without PE classes,students would be more likely to suffer from health problems caused by long hours of sitting. 如果没有体育课，学生更可能因长时间久坐而出现健康问题。(without虚拟语气) 五、写作模板(120-150词) 观点：体育课应该成为高中必修课 Opinion essay on PE classes There is a heated debate about whether PE classes are necessary in high school. From my perspective,students should be required to take PE classes because they bring numerous benefits. First of all,regular physical exercise greatly contributes to students'physical health.In an age of sedentary lifestyle,PE classes help prevent obesity and strengthen the immune system.Moreover,playing sports is an effective way to relieve stress.After studying hard,doing exercise can refresh students'minds and improve their concentration in class.Last but not least,team sports such as basketball and volleyball teach students the importance of teamwork and communication,which are essential skills for their future life. In short,PE classes are of great significance for students'overall development. Therefore,I firmly believe that schools should continue to attach importance to physical education. 六、作文仿得(120-150词) 仿写题目：有些人认为高中应减少体育课时间以增加学科学习时间，你对此有何看 法？请写一篇观点议论文。 范文 Should we reduce PE class time in high school? Some people argue that reducing PE class time can give students more time to study subjects like math and English.However,I strongly disagree with this view.In my opinion,PE classes are as important as academic subjects. First of all,physical exercise is essential for students'health.Without enough exercise,students may suffer from back pain,eye strain,and even obesity. Secondly,taking a break from academic work helps students concentrate better. After a PE class,students often feel more energetic and ready to learn. Furthermore,sports activities teach valuable life lessons such as teamwork, perseverance,and fair play-qualities that cannot be learned from textbooks alone. In conclusion,reducing PE class time would be a mistake.Schools should ensure that students have a balanced schedule that includes both academic study and physical activity.Only in this way can students grow into healthy and well-rounded individuals. 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：主张体育课不可或缺 Dear Editor, I am writing to express my opinion on PE classes.In my view,they play a vital role in students'growth. First of all,doing sports in PE class strengthens our bodies and helps relieve the pressure from heavy homework.Besides,team activities like relay races teach us to cooperate with others.Last but not least,physical exercise refreshes the brain, making us more focused in other classes. Therefore,I firmly believe PE classes are necessary.They should be taken seriously by both students and schools. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei (词数：约110词) 范文二：建议体育课增加趣味与选择 Dear School Newspaper, I am a student who wants to share my thoughts on PE classes.Although they are useful,I think improvements are needed. Firstly,schools could offer more sports choices such as dance or swimming,so everyone can find something they like.Secondly,teachers should design more interesting games instead of focusing only on running or exams.Lastly,explaining the health benefits of each activity helps us understand why we exercise. In short,with these changes,PE classes would become more enjoyable and meaningful for all. Yours sincerely, Li Min (词数：约110词)