Unit 1 No limits 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册单元话题写作精讲（沪教版）

高中 沪教版（上海教育出版社）·必修第二册 Unit1 No limits写作精讲 Writing an article to describe a person you admire(写一篇描述你敬佩的人的文章) Unit1 No limits写作精讲 单元：Unit 1 No limits写作任务：Writing an article to describe a person you admire(写-篇 描述你敬佩的人的文章) 审题 1 话题：描写一位你敬佩的人，可以是家人、老师、朋友、名人或历史人物等，突出其优秀 品质、成就或对你产生的影响 2 体裁：记叙文或议论文（文章类），非书信 3人称：以第三人称(he/she)描述对象为主，可适当使用第一人称表达个人感受 4时态：一般现在时（描述人物品质、现状）+一般过去时（描述过去事迹、经历） 5字数要求：高考标准100-120词 >明确点出敬佩的人物是谁 〉描述其突出的品质、行为或成就 >解释为何敬佩（结合具体事例） ,表达个人感悟或影响 二 文章结构 开头段：引出所敬佩的人物+简要说明敬佩的原因（一至两句话) The person I admire most is my English teacher,Mr.Wang,whose passion for teaching has greatly inspired me. 2 主体段：描述人物的品质、具体事例或成就 ,可先概括品质（如kind,hardworking,courageo us) ,再举一个具体事例（如帮助他人、克服困难、取得成就） > 使用连接词(First,Besides,,Moreover)使逻辑清晰 3 结尾段：总结人物对自己的影响或后示，升华主题 From him her,I have learned that with determination,nothing is impossible. 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 admire V.钦佩；赞赏 admire sb.for sth. 因..钦佩某人 admirable adj.合人钦佩的 inspiration n.鼓舞；灵感 influence n/N.影响 quality n.品质；特质 determination n.决心 overcome v.克服 contribution n.贡献 ordinary adj.extraordinary adj. 平凡的分非凡的 2.常用短语 短语 释义 look up to sb. 敬佩某人 set an example 树立榜样 never give up 永不放弃 make a difference 产生影响；有所作为 be faced with challenges 面临挑战 短语 释义 be devoted to 致力于 in the face of difficulties 面对困难时 have a deep impacton 对…有深远影响 3.基础造句 1The person I admire most is my mother,who always encourages me to be brave. 我最敬佩的人是我妈妈，她总是鼓励我要勇敢。 2 She has a strong sense of responsibility and always helps others in need. 她有很强的责任感，总是帮助有需要的人。 What impresses me most is his determination to pursue his dream. 最合我印象深刻的是他追求梦想的决心。 4 He never gives up,even when facing great difficulties. 即使面对巨大困难，他也从不放弃。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通 goodadmirable remarkable outstanding 普通 importantsignificant/vital/crucial 普通 help me a lothas a profound impact on me 加分句型 1非谓语作状语 Born into a poor family,he managed to become a successful scientist. 他出身贫寒，却最终成为了一位成功的科学家。 2定语从句 The person whom I admire most is my father,who taught me the value of honesty. 我最敬佩的人是我的父亲，他教会了我诚实的价值。 3强调句型 It is his perseverance that makes him so admirable. 正是他的毅力让他如此合人敬佩。 4倒装句型 Only through hard work can one achieve great success. 只有通过努力中能取得巨大成功。 5感叹句 How admirable it is that she always puts others before herself! 她总是把别人放在自己前面，多么合人敬佩啊！ 五、写作模板(100-120词) Title:The Person I Admire Most The person I admire most is【人物姓名/身份].I简写为何敬佩]. First of all,,I品质或特点1].For example,[具体事例1].Besides,I品质或特点2. What's more,[品质或特点3]. From【人物l,I have learned后示或感悟.I hope I can become a person like 人物]one day. 六、作文仿得(120词左右) 仿写题目：写一篇描述你敬佩的人（如老师、家人、科学家等）的文章 范文：The Person I Admire Most The person I admire most is my father,an ordinary but extraordinary man.He is a teacher who has been devoted to education for over 20 years. First of all,he is always patient with his students.He never gives up on anyone,no matter how difficult they are.Besides,he sets a good example by working hard and reading every day.What's more,he often tells me that failure is not the end,but a chance to grow.His words have deeply influenced me. From my father,I have learned the importance of perseverance and responsibility.I hope I can become a person who makes a difference like him one day. 拓展范文背诵积累 以下是根据您提供的写作模板及教辅排版要求生成的两篇描述敬佩人物的范文，每篇105-120 词，难度对应高中泸教版必修第二册或高考英语写作水平。内容与您提供的范例不同，且独立 成篇。 范文一：我最敬佩的人一一我的父亲 The person I admire most is my father,a hardworking construction worker. 1.He always gets up at 5 a.m.and works until late evening,never complaining about the tiredness. 2.What makes me admire him is his honesty:once he found a wallet with a lot of money and returned it to the owner immediately. 3.He also teaches me to be persistent.Whenever I meet difficulties in study,he says,"Keep trying,and you will succeed." His words and deeds have shaped my character deeply.I hope to become a person like him-responsible,kind,and strong-willed.That is why I admire him from the bottom of my heart. (词数：115) 范文二：我最敬佩的人一一我的英语老师 I truly admire my English teacher,Miss Li,who is both knowledgeable and patient. She always explains difficult grammar points with vivid examples,making the class lively and easy to understand. 2 More importantly,she encourages us to think independently.Instead of giving direct answers,she guides us to find solutions by ourselves. Besides,she cares about each student's feelings.When I failed an exam,she comforted me and helped me make a study plan,which lit up my hope again. In my eyes,Miss Li is not only a teacher but also a friend and role model.Her kindness and wisdom inspire me to be a better person every day. (词数：116) 说明： ,两篇范文均采用第一人称叙述，结构清晰（人物引入→分点描述品质事例→总结敬佩之情）。 >使用轻量标识(1.2.3.①2日√等)，便于教辅排版。 ,词汇与句式符合高中英语水平，包含定语从句、主语从句、非谓语等结构。