Unit 1 Our world 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（沪教版）

高中 教版上海教育出版社)·必修第一册 Unit1 Our world写作精讲 Writing an inform al letter about your new school life(写一封关于新校园生活的非正式信件) Unit1 Our world写作精讲 单元：Unit 1 Our world写作任务：Writing an informal letter about your new school life(写- 封关于新校园生活的非正式信件) 审题 1 话题：向朋友或家人描述自己在新学校的校园生活，分享感受、经历、见闻，表达对新的 学习环境的适应情况和心情。 2体裁：书信类应用文（非正式信件，语气亲切、口语化） 3人称：以第一人称1为主，第二人称you为辅（收信人为朋友/家人） 4时态：以一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时为主（描述现状、分享已发生的事、表达 感受) 5字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6 核心要点：问候与写信目的（分享新校园生话）、描述2-3个具体方面（如课程、老师、 同学、社团活动、校园环境等)、表达心情（开心适应/挑战等）、期待回信或邀请对方来访 二、文章结构 1开头段：亲切问候+点明写信目的（告诉对方你在新学校的情况），可简单询问 对方近况 2 主体段：分条（或分段）介绍新校园生活的具体内容，例如： >课程和老师（有趣/有挑战） >同学和社团（交朋友/参加活动） 〉校园环境（图书馆、操场、食堂等） 每一条可搭配个人感受或小故事，语言轻松自然，可加入感叹句、反问句等口语化表达 3 结尾段：总结心情（喜爱/适应中/期待更多），希望对方来玩或回信，再次问候 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 campus n.校园 course n.课程 subject n.科目 activity n.活动 club n,社团 classmate n.同学 teacher n.老师 library n.图书馆 canteen n.食堂 experience n.经历；体验 feel V.感觉；觉得 excited adj.兴奋的 challenging adj.有挑战性的 enjoyable adj.合人愉快的 adapt v.适应(adapt to) 2.常用短语 短语 释义 get used to 习惯于 短语 释义 make new friends 交新朋友 join a club 加入社团 take part in 参加 have a great time 玩得开心 look forward to 期待 keep in touch 保持联系 be different from 与…不同 share sth with sb 与某人分享某物 3.基础造句 1I'm writing to tell you about my new school life. 我写信是想告诉你我的新校园生活。 2 The teachers here are kind and the lessons are interesting. 这里的老师很和蔼，课程也很有趣。 3 I've joined the basketball club and made some good friends. 我加入了篮球社，还交到了一些好朋友。 4 It's a bit challenging at first,but I'm getting used to it. 刚开始有点挑战，但我正在适应。 5I really enjoy the campus-it's big and beautiful! 我真的很喜欢校园一一又大又漂亮！ 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通very happy→overjoyed/thrilled 普通bea utiful→picturesque/splendid 普通interesting→fascinating/absorbing 普通 a little difficultsomewhat demanding 加分句型 1It is adj.for me to do sth It is really exciting for me to start a new chapter here. 在这里开后新篇章让我非常兴奋。 2 What impresses me most is that... What impresses me most is that the teachers are all devoted to their work. 最合我印象深刻的是所有老师都很投入工作。 3 Not only ..but also .. Not only do I learn a lot in class,but also I have fun after school. 我不仅在课上学到很多，而且课后也玩得很开心。 4Ving作主语 Making new friends has become the best part of my school life. 交新朋友已经成了我校园生活中最棒的一部分。 5倒装句型（用于强调） So wonderful is the school life that I can't wait to share it with you! 校园生活如此美妙，我迫不及待想和你分享！ 五、写作模板(100-120词) Dear [Namel, How is everything going with you?I'm writing to share my new school life with you. To begin with,the courses here are challenging but fascinating.I especially enjoy because the teacher makes it lively.Besides,I have joined(某个杜团/活动)，where I met a lot of friendly classmates.Ve often(话 together after class.What's more,the campus is beautiful-there is a large library and a modern gym. In a word,I am gradually adapting to the new life and I'm having a great time.I really hope you can come and visit me someday.Looking forward to your reply. Yours, [Your Name] 参考翻译： 亲爱的[姓名]： 你最近怎么样？我写信是想和你分享我的新校园生活。 首先，这里的课程很有挑战性但也很吸引人。我特别喜欢（某科目），因为老师讲得生动有趣。此外， 我加入了（某个社团/活动），在那里遇到了很多友好的同学。课后我们经常一起（活动内容）。更重要的 是，校园很美一一有一个大图书馆和一个现代化的体育馆。 总之，我正在逐渐适应新生活，并且玩得很开心。我真的希望有一天你能来看我。期待你的回信。 此致， [你的名字] 六、作文仿写(120词左右) 仿写题目：给你的笔友To写一封非正式信件，介绍你刚进入高中一个月的校园生 活。 Dear Tom, How are you doing?I hope everything is fine with you.I'm writing to tell you about my exciting new school life! First,my classes are more difficult than before,but they are also more interesting. My favourite subject is physics -the experiments are really cool!Besides,I joined the school's photography club and have already taken lots of pictures of the beautiful campus.I even made two close friends there.They are very helpful and we often study together in the library. To be honest,I felt a little nervous at first,but now I love every day at school.I think I'm really lucky.Would you like to come and have a look?Write back soon! Yours, Li Hua 参考译文： 亲爱的汤姆： 你好吗？希望你一切都好。我写信是想告诉你我合人兴奋的新校园生活！ 首先，我的课程比以前更难了，但也更有趣。我最喜欢的科目是物理一一实验真的超酷！此外，我加入了学校 摄影社，已经拍了很多美丽校园的照片。我还在那里交到了两个好朋友。他们非常热心，我们经常一起在图书 馆学习。 说实话，一开始我有点紧张，但现在我爱上学校的每一天。我觉得自己真的很幸运。你想来看看吗？尽快回 信！ 此致， 李华 拓展范文背诵积累 以下两篇范文紧扣“新校园生活"主题，字数105-120词，采用三段式结构：开头问候/背 景→中间具体分享（用1.2.3.编号）→结尾期待回复。 范文一：向好友描述新学校的环境与第一印象 Dear Lucy, How are you doing?I'm now studying in a new school and I'd like to share my first impressions with you. 1.The campus is really beautiful:there is a large garden near the teaching building,where we can read or chat after class. 2.My new classmates are friendly and helpful.They showed me around and invited me to join their club. 3.Besides,the teachers are kind and patient.They often encourage us to ask questions in class,which makes me feel less nervous. I'm getting used to the new life gradually.What about your school?Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Mike 词数：118 范文二：向好友分享新学校里的活动与交友 Dear Tom, I'm writing to tell you about my exciting new school life.Everything here is fresh and enjoyable. The school offers many interesting after-school activities,such as basketball, painting and a reading club.I joined the basketball team and already made several good friends. Also,the lunch break is longer than my old school,so we often play games or talk together.It's a great time to relax. Last but not least,I find my new English teacher really funny.She uses English songs to teach new words,and I've learned a lot. I hope you can come and visit my new school someday.Write back soon! Best wishes, Jack 词数：116 说明： >两篇均为非正式信件，语气亲切，符合朋友间分享新生活的场景。 >使用“1.2.3."“y”“★"等轻量标识组织内容，层次清晰。