Unit 2 Places 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第一册单元话题写作精讲（沪教版）

高中 沪教版（上海教育出版社）·必修第一册 Unit2 Places写作精讲 Writing a travel blog(写旅行博客) Unit2 Places写作精讲 单元：Unit2 Places写作任务：Writing a travel blog(写旅行博客) 审题 1 话题：记录一次旅行经历，描述景点特色、个人感受及旅行建议，吸引读者兴趣 2 体裁：博客类应用文（旅行博客）一一第一人称叙述，语言生动，可带个人化评论 3 人称：以第一人称I/We为主，偶尔用第二人称you与读者互动 4 时态： ,描述已发生的旅行经历→一般过去时 〉介绍景点特色、自然现象或客观事实→一般现在时 ,表达对未来的计划或建议→一般将来时 字数要求：高考标准100-120词 6 核心要点： >交代旅行的时间、地点和背景 >描述2-3个印象深刻的景点、活动或美食 >表达个人感受与评价 〉给出实用建议或推荐（如最佳游览时间、注意事项） 二、 文章结构 1 开头段：吸引读者→介绍旅行目的地、出行时间及整体印象（可用感叹句或设 问) Have you ever dreamed of visiting a place where history meets modern life?Last month,I finally set foot on... 2主体段：按时间或空间顺序描述2-3个亮点，每点搭配个人体验和细节描写， 用连接词过渡 例：The first stop was..(描述所见+感受) What impressed me most was..(结合感官描写) Besides,we also tried..(特色美食/活动) 3 结尾段：总结感受+推荐给读者+表达希望（可加一句实用小贴士） All in all,this trip was an unforgettable experience.If you ever get a chance,don't miss it!Tip:go early in the morning to avoid the crowds 三、 核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 destination n.目的地 scenery n.风景；景色 attraction n.景点；吸引力 journey n.旅行；行程 explore V.探索；考察 admire v.欣赏；赞美 unforgettable adj,难忘的 recommend V.推荐 2.常用短语 短语 释义 set off set out 出发 be located in /lie in 位于 be famous for be known for 以…闻名 短语 释义 take a deep breath 深呼吸（感受） be impressed by with 对…印象深刻 in addition/what's more 此外 be well worth a visit 值得一游 make a reservation 预订（内票/酒店） 3.基础造句 We set off early in the morning and arrived at the foot of the mountain two hours later. 我们一大早就出发，两小时后到达山脚下。 2 The scenery along the way was absolutely breathtaking. 沿途的风景合人叹为观止。 3 I was deeply impressed by the ancient architecture and the peaceful atmosphere. 古老的建筑和宁静的氛围给我留下了深刻印象。 4I would strongly recommend this place to anyone who loves nature and history. 我强烈推荐这个地方给所有热爱自然和历史的人。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通】 bea utifulbreathtaking stunning 普通big→vast/magnificent 普通】 like very muchbe captivated by be amazed at 普通 give advice offer several practical tips 加分句型 1非谓语结构作状语 Walking along the ancient street,I felt as if I had traveled back in time. 走在古街上，我仿佛穿越了时空。 2强调句 It was the local food that made this trip even more special. 正是当地的美食让这次旅行更加特别。 3倒装句 Not only did I enjoy the beautiful view,but I also learned a lot about the local culture. 我不仅欣赏了美景，还学到了很多当地文化。 4虚拟语气 Without the travel app,we would have got lost in the narrow alleys. 如果没有旅行App,我们会在狭窄的小巷里迷路。 五、写作模板（100-120词) Title:A Trip to(目的地) Paragraph 1 (目的地)is a perfect place for a short getaway.Last(时间)，I(同行人)visited this amazing place. Paragraph 2 The first thing we did was(话动1或景点1).（个人感受，如The view was stunning").Next,we(话动2/景点2).Vhat impressed me most was(细节).In addition,we tried(特色美食/话动)，which was absolutely delicious/interesting. Paragraph 3 All in all,this trip was an unforgettable experience.I strongly recommend visiting(地点)if you want to(推荐理由).Tip:(实用建议). 参考翻译： 标题：一次去（目的地）的旅行 第一段：（目的地）是一个适合短途旅行的地方。上（时间），我和（同行人）游览了这个神奇的地 方。 第二段：我们做的第一件事是（活动1或景点1）。（个人感受，如“景色合人惊叹"）。接着，我们（活 动2/景点2)。最合我印象深刻的是（细节）。此外，我们还品尝了（特色美食/活动），味道非常棒/很 有意思。 第三段：总之，这次旅行是一次难忘的经历。我强烈推荐去（地点），如果你想（推荐理由）。小贴 士：（实用建议）。 六、作文仿写(120词左右) 仿写题目：假设你暑假和父母一起去云南丽江古城旅行，请你写一篇旅行博客，分 享这次经历。 A Trip to Lijiang Ancient Town Lijiang Ancient Town is a fantastic place to experience traditional Chinese culture. Last summer,I visited it with my parents. The first thing we did was wander along the Old Town Alley.The narrow streets were lined with wooden houses and small canals.I was amazed by the peaceful atmosphere.Next,we climbed to the top of the Wangu Tower,where we enjoyed a stunning panoramic view of the town.What impressed me most was the local food -we tried the famous "Naxi Grilled Fish",which was both tasty and spicy. All in all,this trip was an unforgettable experience.I highly recommend visiting Lijiang if you want to escape the noise of big cities.Tip:bring comfortable walking shoes because there are many stone steps! 参考译文： 《丽江古城之旅》 丽江古城是体验中国传统文化的好地方。去年夏天，我和父母一起游览了丽江古城。 我们做的第一件事就是漫步在古城的小巷里。狭窄的街道两旁是木屋和小水渠。我被宁静的氛围深深吸引。接 着，我们登上万古楼，在那里欣赏到了合人惊叹的古镇全景。最合我印象深刻的是当地美食一一我们品尝了著 名的“纳西烤鱼”，又香又辣。 总之，这次旅行是一次难忘的经历。我强烈推荐你游览丽江，如果你想远离大城市的喧嚣。小贴士：一定要穿 舒适的步行鞋，因为有很多石板台阶！ 写作提示：仿写时注意使用第一人称、一般过去时，并插入个人感受和具体细节， 让博客更有画面感。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：上海外滩之行 Topic:A Night Tour on the Bund Last summer holiday,I visited the Bund in Shanghai with my family.It was an unforgettable experience. First,we walked along the Huangpu River at sunset:the golden light made the old buildings look even more charming./Then,we took a night cruise on the river. The cool wind and the bright city lights created a relaxing atmosphere.What impressed me most was the contrast between the historic buildings on one side and the modern skyscrapers on the other.Finally,we tried local snacks near Nanjing Road,which added a tasty touch to the trip. I strongly recommend this night tour to all travelers.It's a perfect way to enjoy Shanghai's beauty and culture. -by a travel lover 范文二：杭州西湖骑行 Topic:Cycling Around West Lake During the National Day holiday,I went to Hangzhou and explored West Lake by bike.It was a fantastic way to see the scenery. I started early in the morning:the mist over the lake created a fairy-tale scene. 2 Then,I cycled along the Su Causeway,where willows and peach trees lined the path.The fresh air and quiet environment helped me relax completely.3 Around noon,I stopped at a tea house to taste Longjing tea and admire the famous "Three Pools Mirroring the Moon"from a distance.A perfect day! This eco-friendly trip gave me both exercise and joy.If you love nature,don't miss cycling around West Lake! -by a happy traveler