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高中
北师大版·必修3
Unit7Art写作精讲
A Formal Email(征式邮件写作)
Unit 7 Art
单元:At(艺术)」写作在务:A Formal Email(正式邮件写作)
审题
1话题:就某一具体事项(如艺术活动申请、活动安排建议、信息咨询等)撰写正式邮件,
内容需体现正式、礼貌、逻辑清晰。
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体裁:书信类应用文(正式邮件)。
3人称:以第一人称I为主,称呼对方用you或you「,语气尊重但不过分亲密。
4
时态:以一般现在时(陈述事实、观点)和一般将来时(表达期待、承诺)为核心时态。
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字数要求:高考标准100-120词。
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核心要点:
,明确写信人的身份与写信目的
>提出2-3条具体建议(或请求、询问)
>表达感谢或期待回复
>符合正式邮件的结尾格式
二、文章结构
开头段:
自我介绍(如:I am a student from Class2.)
写明写信背景与目的(如:I am writing to offer some suggestions regarding.)
2
主体段:
>分条阐述建议(或请求),每条搭配合理理由或好处
>使用First of all∥,Besides,,Last but not least等连接词,逻辑层层递进
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结尾段:
,表达感谢与希望(如:I would appreciate it if you could consider my
suggestions.)
>礼貌收尾:Looking forward to your reply.
>署名:Yours sincerely/Yours faithfully(视称呼而定)
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
formal
adj.正式的
suggestion
n.建议(可数);recommend v.推荐
appreciate
V.感激
regarding
prep.关于(=about,.更正式)
proposal
n.提议
event
n.活动
exhibition
n.展览
volunteer
n./N.志愿者
application
n.申请
2.常用短语
短语
释义
in reference to
关于…
offer some suggestions
提供一些建议
be beneficial to
对.有益
短语
释义
take...into consideration
考虑…
look forward to
期待
do not hesitate to
不要犹豫(常用于正式邮件)
make a proposal
提出建议
3.基础造句
1I am writing to offer some suggestions regarding the arrangement of the
school art festival.
我写信就学校艺术节活动的安排提供一些建议。
2 First of all,it would be a good idea to include more interactive art workshops
for students.
首先,最好为学生增加更多互动式艺术工作坊。
3Besides,inviting a local artist to give a talk could make the event more
attractive.
此外,邀请一位当地艺术家做讲座能使活动更有吸引力。
4I would greatly appreciate it if you could consider my proposals.
如果您能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通important→
of great significance
普通
good(beneficial/rewarding
普通
help→contribute to
普通
think hold the view that from my perspective
加分句型
1Seeing that the art festival aims to inspire creativity,I strongly recommend
setting up a student artwork display area.
作为学校艺术节旨在激发创造力,我强烈建议设立一个学生作品展示区。(Seeing that表示原因,更正
式)
2 Not only should we invite professional artists,but also we need to encourage
students to participate actively.
我们不仅应邀请专业艺术家,还应鼓励学生积极参与。(部分倒装句型)
3 It is highly recommended that the committee organize a pre-festival workshop
to help students prepare their works.
强烈建议组委会在节前组织一次工作坊,帮助学生准备作品。(虚拟语气句型)
4Should you have any questions,please feel free to contact me.
如有任何问题,请随时与我联系。(虚拟倒装省略f)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Subject:Suggestions for the School Art Festival
Dear [Name Sir or Madaml,
I am [Your Identity]from [Class /School].I am writing to offer some
suggestions regarding the coming school art festival.
First of all,it would be beneficial to include more hands-on workshops,
because this allows students to experience art creatively.Besides,I suggest
inviting a local artist to share his or her experience,which can inspire
many students.Last but not least,it is highly recommended that we set up
a student gallery to display their works.
I hope my suggestions will be of some help.Thank you for your time,and I
look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
[Your Name]
参考翻译:
主题:关于学校艺术节活动的建议
尊敬的[姓名/先生或女士]:
我是来自[班级/学校]的[身份]。我写信就即将到来的学校艺术节活动提出一些建议。
首先,增加更多动手实践的工作坊将是有益的,因为这能让学生富有创意地体验艺术。此外,我建议
邀请一位当地艺术家分享经验,这能激励许多学生。最后但同样重要的是,强烈建议我们设立一个学
生作品画廊来展示他们的作品。
希望我的建议能有所帮助。感谢您的时间,期待您的回复。
此致敬礼
[您的姓名]
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:假设你是李华,给学校艺术节组委会写一封正式邮件,就活动安排提出
至少两条具体建议。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua,a student from Class 3.I am writing to offer some suggestions
regarding the school art festival to be held next month.
First of all,it would be a good idea to organize a painting competition with a theme
like "Nature and Life",because it encourages students to observe and express
beauty.Besides,I suggest inviting a professional photographer to give a lecture on
art photography.This can broaden students'horizons and arouse their interest in
visual arts
I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration.Thank you for your
attention.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
参考译文:
尊敬的先生/女士:
我是三年级的学生李华。我写信就下个月即将举行的学校艺术节活动提出一些建议。
首先,组织一场以“自然与生活”为主题的绘画比赛将是一个好主意,因为它鼓励学生观察美、表达美。此外,
我建议邀请一位专业摄影师举办一场关于艺术摄影的讲座。这可以开阔学生的视野,激发他们对视觉艺术的兴
趣。
希望我的建议能得到考虑。感谢您的关注。期待您的回复。
此致敬礼
李华
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议提高英语阅读能力
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to hear that you want to improve your English reading skills.Here are
some practical suggestions for you.
First of all,it is a good idea to read English newspapers every day,because it helps
you enlarge vocabulary and learn authentic expressions.Besides,you should
choose materials that interest you,such as short stories or science articles,which
can keep you motivated.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to take notes
while reading,as it is beneficial to reviewing key words and sentence structures.
I hope these tips will be useful.You will make great progress if you keep on trying.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二:建议合理管理时间
Dear Lucy,
I understand that you are feeling overwhelmed by all the homework and activities.
I'm writing to offer you some advice on time management.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a daily to-do list,because it helps you
prioritize tasks and avoid wasting time.Besides,you should set aside a fixed time
for study and rest,which can keep a healthy balance.Last but not least,I strongly
advise you to break big tasks into smaller parts,as it is beneficial to reducing
anxiety and achieving goals step by step.
I hope my suggestions will help you.I believe you can handle everything well.
Yours sincerely,
Tom