Unit 6 The Admirable 写作精讲-2026-2027学年高中英语必修第二册单元话题写作精讲（北师大版）

高中 北师大版·必修2 Unit6 The Admirable写作精讲 A Summary(1)(摘要/总结写作) Unit6 The Admirable导作精讲一一A Summary(1) 单元：Unit6 The Admirable写作在务：A Summary(1)(摘要/总结写作)一一根据一篇关于“合人 钦佩的人物"的短文，写一篇内容完整、语言简练的摘要(summary),概括其事迹、品质及影响。 审题 1 话题：概括某位命人钦佩的人物（如科学家、志愿者、历史人物等）的主要事迹、优秀品 质及其意义或影响。 2 体裁：摘要(summary),即对原文核心信息的客观浓缩，不加入个人观点或评价。 3人称：以第三人称为主(he/she/they),避免使用I/you。 4时态：以一般现在时为主（描述人物事迹、品质等客观事实）；若原文明确使用过去时， 可保持与原文一致。 5 字数要求：高考标准80-100词(summary通常比原文字数少1/3到1/2)。 6 核心要点： >准确提取原文核心信息（人物身份、主要事迹、突出品质) >删除细节、例子、重复内容 >保持逻辑连贯，不遗漏重要因果 >不添加原文未提及的内容 二、文章结构 开头句：一句话点明人物身份和主要成就（人物+做了什么/为何命人钦佩)。 2 主体部分：概括2-3个关键事迹，并说明体现的品质（可用简单因果关系连 接)。 3 结尾句：简要总结该人物的影响或意义（如激励他人、贡献社会等）。 注意：summary不分段，通常为一段连贯的文字(80-100词)。若原文篇幅较长，也可分两段，但高中阶段 建议写一段。 三、核心词句 1.核心词汇 词汇 释义 admirable adj.令人钦佩的 quality n.品质；特质 achievement n.成就 contribution n.贡献 inspire V.鼓舞；激励 dedicate V.奉献；致力于 overcome V.克服（困难） perseverance n.毅力；坚持 impact n.影响 2.常用短语 短语 释义 be admired for... 因..…而受钦佩 make great contributions to... 对.…做出巨大贡献 set an example for... 为.…树立榜样 face challenges 面对挑战 never give up 永不放弃 devote oneself to... 献身于… 短语 释义 be known as... 作为…而闻名 leave a deep impression on... 给…留下深刻印象 3.基础造句 1The passage mainly tells about a great scientist who devoted his life to medical research. 这篇文章主要讲述了一位致力于医学研究的伟大科学家。 2 Despite many difficulties,he never gave up and finally succeeded. 尽管遇到重重困难，他从未放弃，最终成功了。 3Her courage and perseverance inspired thousands of people. 她的勇气和毅力鼓舞了成千上万的人。 4In summary,the person is not only talented but also hard-working. 总之，这个人不仅有天赋，而且勤奋努力。 四、好词好句（高级加分句型） 高级词汇替换 普通great→remarkable/outstanding 普通 famous(renowned well-known 普通 help assist contribute 普通 hard-workingdiligent/industrious 加分句型 1 What makes sb,admirable is that+句子 使某人合人钦佩的是…（主语从句） What makes Lin Qiaozhi admirable is that she dedicated her whole life to women's health. 2 Not only did he/she...,but also... 他/她不仅…，而且.…（部分倒装） Not only did he overcome many difficulties,but also he set a good example for young people. 3 It is his/her perseverance that enables him/her to achieve success. 正是他/她的毅力使他她取得了成功。（强调句型） 4Through his/her efforts,he/she has made a significant impact on... 通过他/她的努力，他/她已对.产生了重大影响。 五、军作模板(80-100词) The passage introduces(人物身份)named(姓名)： He/She is admired for(主要成就/品质). First,he/she(事迹一)，which shows his/her(品质一). Besides,he/she(事迹二)，demonstrating(品质二). Thanks to his/her(精神/行动)，（影响/意义）. In a word,(is truly admirable and serves as an inspiration to us all. 参考翻译： 本文介绍了一位名叫（姓名）的（人物身份）。 他/她因（主要成就/品质）而受人钦佩。 首先，他/她（事迹一），这体现了他/她的（品质一）。 此外，他/她（事迹二），展现了（品质二）。 多亏了他/她的（精神/行动），（影响/意义）。 总之，（人物）确实令人钦佩，是我们所有人的榜样。 六、作文仿得(90词左右) 仿写题目：根据下面短文内容，写一篇摘要(80-100词)。 原文 Dr.Zhang,a doctor from a small village,spent 20 years treating patients in poor areas.He often walked for hours to reach mountain villages.He never charged poor patients fully.Many people called him"the walking doctor".His selflessness and kindness moved everyone.He believed that a doctor's duty is to save lives,not to make money. 范文 The passage introduces Dr.Zhang,a kind doctor from a small village.He is admired for his selfless service to poor patients.For 20 years,he walked long distances to treat people in mountain villages and often reduced fees for poor families.His actions show his great kindness and sense of duty.In a word,he is a truly admirable person who inspires us to care for others. (93词) 参考译文： 这段文字介绍了一位来自小村庄的善良医生张医生。他因对贫困患者无私的服务而受到钦佩。20年来，他长途 跋涉为山村居民治病，并经常减免贫困家庭的费用。他的行为展现了他的善良和责任感。总之，他是一位真正 分人钦佩的人，激励我们去关爱他人。 拓展范文背诵积累 范文一：建议朋友改善睡眠质」 Dear Mike, I am sorry to hear that you often stay up late studying.I am writing to offer you some practical suggestions. First of all,it is a good idea to set a fixed bedtime,because a regular sleep schedule can help you fall asleep easily.Besides,you should avoid using electronic devices before bed,which can calm your brain and improve sleep quality.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to drink a glass of warm milk before sleeping,as it is beneficial to relaxing your body and mind. I hope my advice will work for you.I'm sure you will feel more energetic soon. Yours sincerely, Li Ming (115 words) 范文二：建议同学克服考试焦虑 Dear Sarah, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on dealing with test anxiety.I'd like to share some useful tips with you. First of all,it is a good idea to make a clear study plan,because it helps you organize your review and avoid last-minute panic.Besides,you should practice deep breathing before exams,which can calm your nerves and improve focus.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to get enough sleep the night before the test,as it is beneficial to keeping your brain fresh and active. I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm looking forward to hearing your good news. Yours sincerely, Zhang Wei (113 words)