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高中
北师大版·必修2
Unit5 Humans and Nature写作精讲
A Brochure(宣传册I手册写作)
Unit 5 Humans and Nature
单元:Unit5 Humans and Nature写作任务:A Brochure(宣传册/手册写作)
审题
1
话题:围绕“人类与自然”的关系,撰写一份宣传册,旨在呼吁人们关注环境问题、倡导可
持续生活方式或介绍某项环保行动。
2体裁:应用文一一宣传册(brochure)。内容通常包括标题、引言、分点说明、号召行动
等,
语言简洁有力,具有感染力。
3人称:以第一人称复数We或第二人称You为主,增强号召力。
4
时疮:以一般现在时为主(描述现状、事实、做法);必要时可用一般将来时(展望效
果)。
5
字数要求:高考标准100-150词。
6
核心要点:
>明确主题和目的(吸引读者注意)
,介绍现状或问题(引起共鸣)
>提出2-3条具体可行的行动建议
>发出号召,鼓舞行动(简洁有力)
文章结构
1
标题+开头段:用醒目标题点明主题;简短引言介绍背景或问题,引起读者兴
趣。
2主体段:分点(或分栏)介绍建议,每条建议搭配理由或好处;使用连接词
(First,.Besides,Also,Finally等)保持逻辑清晰。
3
结尾段:发出号召,鼓励行动;可用口号、愿景或期待式语句收尾。
三、
核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
nature environment
自然/环境
protect/preservation
保护/保护(名词)
sustainable
adj.可持续的
reduce reuse/recycle
减少/再利用/回收
action
n.行动
impact
n.影响
responsibility
n.责任
2.常用短语
短语
释义
live in harmony with nature
与自然和谐共处
take action to do sth
采取行动做某事
make a difference
有所作为
cut down on
减少(使用)
raise awareness of
提高…意识
be responsible for
对…负责
join us in doing sth
加入我们一起做某事
3.基础造句
1
It is our responsibility to protect the environment.
保护环境是我们的责任。
2 First,try to reduce the use of plastic bags.
首先,尽量少用塑料袋。
3
Besides,planting more trees is a simple way to help.
此外,多种树是一种简单有效的帮助方式。
4
Let's take action now to create a greener future.
让我们立即行动,创造更绿色的未来。
5
Only by working together can we make a real difference.
只有共同努力,我们中能取得真正的改变。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通important→significant/essential/crucial
普通help→contribute to/play a role in
普通
dotake action/make efforts
普通
goodbeneficial/rewarding meaningful
加分句型
1 It is high time that we should take action to protect our planet.
我们早该采取行动保护我们的星球了。(虚拟语气)
2 Not only does saving energy reduce costs,but it also protects the
environment.
节约能源不仅能降低成本,还能保护环境。(部分倒装)
3 If every one of us makes small changes,the world will become a better place.
如果我们每个人都做出小小的改变,世界将变得更加美好。(条件状语从句)
4Let's start from small things,such as turning off lights when leaving a room.
让我们从小事做起,比如离开房间时关灯。(举例结构)
五、写作模板(120-150词)
Protect Nature,Protect Our Home
Our planet is facing serious environmental problems.It is time for us to
take action and live in harmony with nature.
First,we should reduce the use of plastic.For example,bring your own bag
when shopping.
Second,planting more trees helps clean the air and create a better living
environment.
Finally save energy by turning off lights and water when not in use.Every
small step counts.
Remember,the future of our planet is in our hands.Join us in making a
difference today!
参考翻译:
标题:保护自然,保护我们的家园。
开头段:我们的星球正面临严重的环境问题。是时候采取行动,与自然和谐共处了。
主体段:首先,我们应该减少塑料的使用。例如,购物时自带袋子。
其次,多种树有助于净化空气,创造更好的居住环境。
最后,不使用时关灯关水来节约能源。每个小步骤都很重要。
结尾段:请记住,地球的未来掌握在我们手中。今天加入我们,一起做出改变!
六、作文仿写(120-150词)
仿写题目:为学校环保社团(Green Earth Club)写一份宣传册,号召全校师生参
与“低碳校园行动”(Low-carbon Campus Action)。
Low-carbon Campus,Green Future
Our school is facing increasing energy use and waste.It's time for every one of us
to take part in the Low-carbon Campus Action!
First,turn off lights,fans,and computers when not in use.This simple habit can
save a lot of energy.
Second,reduce paper waste by printing on both sides and using digital notes.
Also,bring your own water bottle instead of buying plastic ones.It's a small
change with a big impact.
Let's work together to make our school greener and cleaner.Every action counts.
Join us now!
Green Earth Club
参考译文:
低碳校园,绿色未来。
我们学校正面临能源消耗和浪费日益增加的问题。是时候让我们每个人都参与到低碳校园行动中来了」
首先,不使用时关掉灯、风扇和电脑。这个简单的习惯可以节省大量能源。
其次,通过双面打印和使用电子笔记减少纸张浪费。
此外,自带水杯而不是购买塑料瓶装水。这是一个小改变,却有大影响。
让我们共同努力,让校园更加绿色、更加整洁。每一个行动都很重要。现在加入我们吧!
一绿色地球社团
拓展范文背诵积累
范文三:建议同学提高英语阅读理解能力
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty in English reading comprehension.I'm
writing to offer you some helpful suggestions.
First of all,it is a good idea to read English newspapers every day,because it can
expand your vocabulary and improve your reading speed.Besides,you should
guess the meaning of new words from the context,which helps you understand the
passage better without stopping.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to make a
reading plan,as it is beneficial to developing a regular habit and tracking your
progress.
I hope my advice will be useful.I'm sure you will make progress soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jack
范文四:建议朋友养成健康饮食习惯
Dear Mike,
I am sorry to hear that you often feel tired and weak.I am writing to give you some
practical advice on healthy eating.
First of all,it is a good idea to have three meals on time every day,because it can
provide you with enough energy and keep your body strong.Besides,you should
eat more fruits and vegetables instead of junk food,which can help you get
necessary vitamins.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to drink at least eight
glasses of water daily,as it is beneficial to clearing your mind and staying healthy.
I hope my advice will work for you.I'm sure you will feel better soon.
Yours sincerely,
Tom