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高中
北师大版·必修1
Unit1 Life Choices写作精讲
A Personal Email(非正式个人邮件)
Unit 1 Life Choices
单元:Unit 1 Life Choices写作任务:A Personal Email(非正式个人邮件)
审题
1话题:以一个高中生的身份,给朋友或笔友写一封非正式邮件,分享自己在高中阶段的生
活选择(如课程选择、课外活动、时间管理、交友等),并询问对方近况。
2体裁:书信类应用文(非正式个人邮件)
3人称:以第一人称I为主,穿插第二人称you(表达对收信人的关心与询问)
4时态:一般现在时(描述现状、习惯)为主,一般过去时(回忆过去经历)和一般将来时
(期待未来活动)为辅
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字数要求:100-120词(符合高考书面表达基本要求)
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核心要点:
>亲切问候,引出写信目的(如分享近况或表达想念)
>分享2-3个具体的生活选择或经历(如参加的社团、调整的学习计划)
>询问对方近况,表达期待回信或再次见面的愿望
文章结构
1
开头段(1-2句)
〉
问候语(Dear./How is everything going?)
>直接说明写信背景(如“好久没联系了,想和你分享我的高中生活”")
2
主体段(3-4句)
,分条或自然过渡,讲述自己的生活选择
〉每条选择可以搭配简短的感受或原因,使内容生动
,用First of all/Besides/Also/What's more等连接词体现层次
3
结尾段(1-2句)
>询问对方近况(How about you?/What are you up to these days?)
>表达期待回信或下次联系
>使用非正式落款:Best wishes/All the best/Yours,[Name]
三、核心词句
1.核心词汇
词汇
释义
choice
n.选择
experience
n.经历v.体验
schedule
n.日程安排
activity
n.活动
adjust
v.调整;适应
enjoy
v.享受
share
v.分享
miss
V.想念
2.常用短语
短语
释义
make a choice about...
作出关于.…的选择
take part in join
参加(活动、社团)
get used to
习惯
keep in to uch
保持联系
短语
释义
look forward to
期待
hear from you
收到你的来信
have a great time
过得愉快
3.基础造句
1I am writing to share with you my new life in senior high school.
我写信是想和你分享我在高中的新生活。
2
First of all,I chose to join the school basketball club,which is really exciting.
首先,我选择了加入学校篮球社,这真的很命人兴奋。
Besides,I have made a study plan to balance my lessons and hobbies.
此外,我制定了一个学习计划来平衡学业和爱好。
4How is everything going with you?I really miss you.
你最近怎么样?我真的很想你。
四、好词好句(高级加分句型)
高级词汇替换
普通Ithink→
From my point of view In my opinion
普通
very happyextremely delighted
普通
importantsignificant/meaningful
普通
a lota great deal quite a lot
加分句型
1Having been busy with my new school life,I haven't contacted you for ages.
How are you?
因为一直忙于新学校的生活,我好久没联系你了。你还好吗?(现在分词完成式作原因状语)
2 Not only do I enjoy the colorful club activities,but also I manage to keep up
with my studies.
我不仅享受丰富多彩的社团活动,还能跟上学习。(部分倒装)
3It is really a meaningful experience that I have never had before.
这真是一次我从未有过的有意义经历。(that引导定语从句)
Only by trying new things can we discover our real interests.
只有尝试新事物,我们中能发现真正的兴趣。(倒装句型)
五、写作模板(100-120词)
Dear [Namel,
How is everything going?I'm writing to share my new life at senior high
school.
First of all,,I chose to[具体选择-l,which is really[感受].Besides,I also[具体
选择二],because[理由].What's more,I have[具体选择三],and it helps me好
处1
How about you?What new things have you tried?I'm really looking forward
to your reply.
Best wishes,
[Your Namel
范文(填词版)
Dear Jack,
How is everything going?I'm writing to share my new life at senior high school.
First of all,I chose to join the English Drama Club,which is really fun and helps me
improve my speaking.Besides,I also made a new study schedule,because I need
to keep a balance between lessons and rest.What's more,I have started running
every morning,and it helps me feel energetic.
How about you?What new things have you tried?I'm really looking forward to
your reply.
Best wishes,
Tom
六、作文仿写(120词左右)
仿写题目:给好友Mik写一封非正式邮件,分享你进入高中后在“"生活选择"方面
的两个主要决定(如选科、社团、时间安排等),并询问他的近况。
Dear Mike,
How are you these days?I haven't heard from you for a long time.Now I'd like to
tell you about my life choices in senior high.
First of all,I chose to take biology as my optional course,because I'm really
interested in medical science.Besides,I joined the school volunteer team.We help
at the local library every weekend-a meaningful experience indeed.Also,I try to
get up earlier to make time for reading,which has become a good habit.
What about you?Have you made any interesting choices?Write back and let me
know!
Looking forward to your reply.
All the best,
Li Hua
拓展范文背诵积累
范文一:建议同学克服考试焦虑
Dear Li Hua,
I am sorry to hear that you feel nervous before the coming exam.I am writing to
offer you some useful advice.
First of all,it is a good idea to make a review schedule,because it helps you
organize your time and reduce anxiety.Besides,you should take deep breaths
when you feel stressed,which can calm you down quickly.Last but not least,I
strongly advise you to have enough sleep,as it is beneficial to keeping your brain
active and memory sharp.
I hope my advice will be helpful.I'm sure you will do well in the exam.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
(字数:112词)
范文二:建议朋友培养阅读习惯
Dear Mike,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to form a good habit of
reading.I'd like to share some practical tips.
First of all,choosing books you are interested in is important,because it makes
reading enjoyable.Besides,you should read for 15 minutes before bed every day,
which helps you stick to the habit.Last but not least,I strongly advise you to take
notes while reading,as it is beneficial to improving your understanding and
vocabulary.
I hope my advice will work for you.I'm looking forward to your progress.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Fang
(字数:106词)