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Unit 6 Seasons
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题
Write about seasonal features in different places
(描写各地季节特点)
Unit 6 Seasons
导作任务Write about seasonal features in different places(描写各地季节特点)
申题
包文体
描写文(描述性短文,无需书信格式)
2话题
不同地方的季节特点(如北方与南方、城市与乡村)
3人称
以第三人称(it,they,people)为主,可适当用第一人称(we,I)表达感受
4时态
一般现在时
5要点
〉引出话题:不同地方的季节各有特点
,描述至少两个地方(或同一地方不同季节)的天气、景色、活动
>突出差异或共同点
,结尾表达个人感受或总结
6字数
80~100词
二、文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
开内见山,点明“不同地方的季节不同”
中间
选取两个有代表性的地方(如北方城市和南方城市),分别描写其季节特征
段落
内容要点
结尾
简单总结或抒发感受(如“每个季节都有独特的美”)
三、核心组词造句
★核心词汇
词season季节;spring春天;summer夏天;autumn秋天;winter冬天;weather天气;
snowy下雪的;rainy多雨的;windy有风的;sunny晴朗的;warm温暖的;cool凉爽的;freezing
寒洽的;mild温和的;scenery风景;activity活动
★常用短语
序号
短语
释义
in spring/summer/autumn
在春天/夏天/秋天/冬天
1
winter
2
the weather is...
天气是..…
3
enjoy doing sth.
喜欢做某事
4
go swimming skiing /skating
去游泳/滑雪/滑冰
5
be different from.…
与不同
6
have a great time
玩得开心
★基础造句
Spring is warm and flowers start to bloom.
2 In summer,people often go swimming because it's hot.
3 Winter in the north is very cold,and it often snows.
4Autumn in the countryside is beautiful with golden leaves.
四、好词好句
√高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
pleasant
宜人的
2
colourful
多彩的
3
brilliant
灿烂的
4
gentle
温和的
5
scenery
风景(不可数)
6
harvest
收获(名词)
√加分句型
对比句
Winter in the north is very cold,while winter in the south is mild and rainy.
Summer in Beijing is hot and dry,but summer in Guangzhou is hot and humid.
描述句
Spring is a season of new life and colours.
Autumn is the season of harvest and golden leaves.
感受句
I love winter because I can make snowmen and go skating.
People enjoy taking a walk in the park in the gentle spring wind.
结尾升华句
2
Different places have different seasons,but each season has its own beauty.
Seasons make our life colourful and full of fun.
五、写作模板
There are four seasons in a year:spring,summer,autumn and winter.Different places
have different seasonal features.
In the north,winter is [cold snowy freezing].People like to [go skating make
snowmen].But in the south,winter is [mild rainy].People seldom see snow.In summer,
the north is [hot dry],while the south is [hot humid].Many people enjoy [swimming
eating ice cream].
I think each season is special.I love them all.
六、作文仿写
题目
Describe seasonal features in Beijing and Guangzhou
范文
There are four seasons in a year.Different places have different seasonal features.
In Beijing,winter is very cold and snowy.People can go skating and make snowmen.But in
Guangzhou,winter is mild and rainy.People rarely see snow.Summer in Beijing is hot and dry,
while summer in Guangzhou is hot and humid.Many people like to go swimming or stay in air-
conditioned rooms.
I think both places have their own beauty.Seasons make life colourful and exciting.
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拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍哈尔滨的季节特点
约95词
Dear Li Wei,
You asked about seasonal features in my hometown Harbin.Let me share with you.
1Winter is long and cold,from November to March.Snow covers everything and the famous
Ice and Snow Festival attracts many tourists.
2 Spring is short and windy,with temperatures rising slowly.Trees begin to turn green in late
April.
Summer is warm and pleasant,with cool evenings.It's the best time to visit Sun Island.
4 Autumn is colorful but brief,with golden leaves falling in October.
I hope you can come and experience these seasons yourself!
Yours,
Zhang Lei
拓展范文2
介绍昆明的季节特点
约93词
Dear Sam,
Now I live in Kunming,known as the "Spring City".Its seasonal features are quite special.
Spring is warm and flowers bloom everywhere.The air is fresh and comfortable.
Summer is not too hot,with freq uent rains that cool down the city.You rarely need air
conditioners.
Autumn is mild and sunny,perfect for outdoor activities like hiking in the Stone Forest.
Winter is short and gentle,with temperatures rarely below 5C.Sunshine is abundant even
in December.
In short,Kunming has spring-like weather all year round.I really enjoy living here!
Yours,
Liu Ming