Unit 6 Seasons（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材译林版八年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语“人与自然”主题下的季节写作，以“话题解读—词汇句式积累—佳句仿写—范例赏析—实战演练”为学习支架，系统梳理季节描写核心知识点。通过思维导图呈现话题脉络，提供天气、景色、活动等精准词汇（如pleasant、colourful），分模块构建开头（点明主题）、中间（气候景色活动）、结尾（总结感受）句式，并结合教材原句仿写训练，辅以典例分析与多样化实战任务（书信、演讲稿等），形成从输入到输出的完整写作能力培养路径。 该资料特色在于以核心素养为导向，语言能力方面通过“neither too hot nor too cold”等高级短语及非谓语句型（如“Brown leaves fall... making the world beautiful”）提升表达精准性与丰富性，文化意识上渗透人与自然和谐共处理念（如结尾升华自然之美）。教学方法注重思维品质培养，引导学生观察自然、分层描述，课中助力教师系统授课，课后通过仿写与实战任务帮助学生自主巩固，查漏补缺，夯实写景类短文写作基础。

Unit 6 Seasons单元同步写作讲义 单元写作要求：写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的季节 本单元的主题属于“人与自然”范畴，围绕天气与四季展开，聚焦四季景色、气候特征、季节性活动与自然之美，贴合初中英语核心素养中人与自然和谐共处的育人目标。 本单元旨在培养学生观察自然、感知四季之美的能力，帮助学生熟练掌握描述天气、季节的词汇和句型，学会有条理地描写景色、阐述个人喜好。通过结合教材诗歌、对话、阅读文本的学习与仿写训练，夯实学生写景类英语短文的写作基础。这有助于学生提升自然主题书面表达能力，学会用英语表达个人情感与观点，同时加深对自然魅力与力量的理解。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. pleasant adj. 宜人的，舒适的 2. colourful adj. 五颜六色的，色彩缤纷的 3. windy adj. 有风的；bright adj. 晴朗明亮的 4. shower n. 阵雨；stream n. 小溪 5. shade n. 树荫，阴凉处 6. lazy adj. 慵懒的；perfect adj. 完美的 7. harvest v. & n. 收割，收获；crop n. 庄稼 8. temperature n. 温度；drop v. 下降 9. memory n. 回忆，记忆 10. snowy adj. 下雪的；quiet adj. 安静的 11. outdoors adv. 在户外；picnic n. 野餐 12. fly kites 放风筝；go swimming 游泳 13. make snowmen 堆雪人；snowball fights 打雪仗 14. turn brown 变黄/变红；fall down 落下 句式积累 开头句（点明主题，引出最喜欢的季节） 1. There are four beautiful seasons in a year, and I like ... best. 一年有四个美丽的季节，我最喜欢…… 2. My favourite season is ... It is always full of beauty and fun. 我最喜欢的季节是……它总是充满美好与乐趣。 3. Among all the seasons, ... is my favourite one. 在所有季节中，……是我的最爱。 中间句（描写气候、景色、日常活动，核心主体段） 1. The weather is very pleasant in this season. 这个季节的天气十分宜人。 2. It is windy and bright, which is a perfect time to fly kites. 天气晴朗多风，是放风筝的绝佳时节。 3. I can enjoy lots of interesting outdoor activities with my friends. 我可以和朋友们一起体验很多有趣的户外活动。 4. The leaves turn brown and fall into piles on the ground. 树叶变黄，纷纷飘落堆积在地面。 5. Farmers work hard to harvest crops when autumn comes. 秋天来临，农民们忙着收割庄稼。 结尾句（总结感受，升华主题） 1. It is a beautiful season and it always brings me sweet memories. 这是一个美丽的季节，总能带给我甜蜜的回忆。 2. I love this season because it shows the great beauty of nature. 我喜欢这个季节，因为它展现了大自然的绝美风光。 3. This wonderful season makes my life more colourful. 这个美好的季节让我的生活更加丰富多彩。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：The weather is very pleasant in autumn. It’s the best time to play football outside. 仿写：春天气候温暖、阳光明媚。这是外出徒步、户外放风筝的最佳时节。 ________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 教材原句：Those sweet memories of summer days are about quiet streams and trees and shade. 仿写：冬日里美好的回忆，是皑皑白雪，还有和朋友们开心地打雪仗。 ________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 教材原句：As the days get shorter and the temperature drops, autumn brings us new beauty. 仿写：白昼渐长，气温回升，春天为我们带来新生与活力。 ________________________________________________________________________________ 典例 一年四季各有特色，有人喜欢繁花似锦的春天，有人偏爱热烈明媚的夏天，有人钟情硕果累累的秋天，有人热爱白雪皑皑的冬天。请以 My Favourite Season 为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。 内容要点：1. 点明你最喜欢的季节；2. 描写该季节的天气和景色；3. 介绍你在该季节的活动；4. 说明喜欢它的原因。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：写景抒情类记叙文（单元核心写作题型） ② 人称：第一人称（I/My） ③ 时态：一般现在时（描述季节常态、个人喜好） ④ 核心要求：内容完整、语句通顺、句式多样，贴合季节主题，表达真情实感 谋篇布局 开头 开门见山，直接点明自己最喜欢的季节，简洁点题。 中间 分层描写，先写季节的天气、自然景色，再写自己和家人、朋友的季节性活动，内容充实具体。 结尾 总结个人感受，点明喜欢该季节的核心原因，简单升华主题。 佳作展示 My Favourite Season There are four wonderful seasons in a year, and autumn is my favourite one. Autumn is a season with pleasant weather. It is neither too hot nor too cold. The sky is clear and bright, and all the trees turn colourful. Brown leaves fall gently on the ground, making the world beautiful. It is also a harvest season. Farmers are busy picking crops and fruits. I love walking in the park and having picnics with my family in autumn. The season brings me lots of sweet memories. I truly love autumn because it shows the most gentle beauty of nature. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 ① pleasant 宜人的（单元核心词汇，替换普通nice/good） ② neither too hot nor too cold 不冷不热（高级短语，精准描述气候） ③ gentle beauty of nature 大自然的温柔之美（升华主题，提升文采） 高分句型 ① 并列结构：It is neither too hot nor too cold. （巧用并列否定结构，句式简洁高级，精准描写季节气候） ② 分词作状语：Brown leaves fall gently on the ground, making the world beautiful. （非谓语动词句型，突破简单句局限，画面感十足） （一） 假如你是Joan，就读于阳光中学，Sandy是你的笔友，下面是她给你的来信，请你根据她的来信，用英语给她写一封回信。 Dear Joan,     The other day, I saw some pictures of your school in different seasons online. How beautiful! I believe your school life must be colourful. So I’m writing to ask for more information about you and your school life. Would you please tell me:     What is your favourite season and why?     How is the weather in your favourite season?     What’s your school like in your favourite season?     What do you and your classmates often do in your favourite season?       Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Sandy 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．条理清楚，要点全面，书写规范； 3．词数100左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sandy, I’m very glad to get your letter. ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Joan （二） 假设你是Daniel，请你根据思维导图中提供的信息，给你英国的笔友Jude写一封关于四季的信。 要求：1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯; 2)必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥; 3)词数100左右。 Dear Jude, I’m writing to tell you something about the four seasons in Nantong. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Daniel （三） 请根据以下提示，以“My favourite season”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。注意要点完整、语法正确、上下文连贯，可适当发挥。 季节 春季 特点 天气很暖和，可以穿舒适的衣服。 理由 1. 气温不高不低，是欣赏大自然的最佳时节。 2. 到处都有绿树鲜花、美丽的蝴蝶…… 3. 有风，和朋友们一起去户外放风筝。 4. 有时和家人一起露营…… （至少写一点） 感想 春天的一切都是新的，带来快乐和希望。 My favourite season _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 回忆你曾身处某一季节的午后，请以“A/An ________ Afternoon”为题，用生动的语言描绘你看到、听到、感受到的一切。内容需包括： What was the season like? ●Weather, temperature... ●Scenery (风景) What were people’s activities? ●What did they wear or take? (scarf/jacket/umbrella...) ●What did they do? What were your feelings? How did you feel? 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按照要求适当发挥； 3.词数在100词左右； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 你所在的英语俱乐部正在举办主题为“Seasonal Changes and Animal Friends”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文，内容包括： 1. 描述你最喜欢的季节 (如：天气特点、自然景象、你在这个季节喜欢做的事情等)； 2. 谈谈在这个季节里，你观察到或了解到的一种动物的生存状况 (如：它们面临哪些困难？天气变化、人类活动等对它们有什么影响？)； 3. 作为中学生，在这个季节里我们可以如何帮助和保护它们？ (请提出1-2条具体可行的建议) 要求：·词数：80-90词；·语句通顺，连贯自然 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 春之繁华，夏之碧叶，秋之硕果，冬之静雪，四季更迭，每一季都有它独特的韵味。你校将开展以“My favourite season in my hometown”为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是Peter，请你根据以下问题提示并适当发挥想象，写一篇英语演讲稿。 提示： 1. What is the weather like? 2. What does your city look like? 3. Why do you like this season? (at least two points) 4. What activities do people enjoy doing in this season? (at least two points) 5. What do you think of your hometown in this season? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 为传播环保理念，探索自然生灵奥秘，大自然生活节将在森林动物园精彩绽放，现面向全体同学招募志愿者(volunteer)。假设你是李华，请根据招募要求用英语写一封自荐信。 A Volunteer of the Natural Life Festival WantedDear all, Nature is amazing. Our festival needs you to help more people to learn about it. Would you like to join us? If you want to be one of us, please let us know: 1. What kind of person are you? Do you have any hobbies? 2. Which is your favourite season and why? What outdoor (户外的) activities do you like in this season? 3. Do you know how to protect wild animals? If you’re interested, please email us at naturallifefestival@126.com. 要求： (1) 信件须包括招募要求的要点，可适当发挥； (2) 信件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3) 词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I am interested in nature, so I want to be one of you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I can be a volunteer of this festival. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （八） 现在，我们时不时地能在街上或小区里看到流浪猫(stray cats)，时至冬日，这些小动物的生存状况更为艰难。Kitty作为学校动物保护俱乐部(the Animal Protection Club)的一名成员，想要动员全校学生行动起来，为可怜的流浪猫献上一点爱心。请以Kitty的身份，写一篇题为《冬日暖阳》的英语晨会演讲稿。 演讲内容包括：1、在冬季，流浪猫正面临的生存难题。 2、作为学生，可以为流浪猫做的事情。 3、这么做的意义或对未来的期许。 作文要求：必须包含上述三方面内容；字迹工整；文章结构明确；语言表达通顺；字数150字。 可参考使用的生词：兽医vet；动物收容所the animal shelter；给动物绝育get ... fixed （以上生词可选用，不使用也不扣分） Sunshine in Winter Good morning, everyone. I am Kitty from the Animal Protection Club. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 6 Seasons单元同步写作讲义 单元写作要求：写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的季节 本单元的主题属于“人与自然”范畴，围绕天气与四季展开，聚焦四季景色、气候特征、季节性活动与自然之美，贴合初中英语核心素养中人与自然和谐共处的育人目标。 本单元旨在培养学生观察自然、感知四季之美的能力，帮助学生熟练掌握描述天气、季节的词汇和句型，学会有条理地描写景色、阐述个人喜好。通过结合教材诗歌、对话、阅读文本的学习与仿写训练，夯实学生写景类英语短文的写作基础。这有助于学生提升自然主题书面表达能力，学会用英语表达个人情感与观点，同时加深对自然魅力与力量的理解。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. pleasant adj. 宜人的，舒适的 2. colourful adj. 五颜六色的，色彩缤纷的 3. windy adj. 有风的；bright adj. 晴朗明亮的 4. shower n. 阵雨；stream n. 小溪 5. shade n. 树荫，阴凉处 6. lazy adj. 慵懒的；perfect adj. 完美的 7. harvest v. & n. 收割，收获；crop n. 庄稼 8. temperature n. 温度；drop v. 下降 9. memory n. 回忆，记忆 10. snowy adj. 下雪的；quiet adj. 安静的 11. outdoors adv. 在户外；picnic n. 野餐 12. fly kites 放风筝；go swimming 游泳 13. make snowmen 堆雪人；snowball fights 打雪仗 14. turn brown 变黄/变红；fall down 落下 句式积累 开头句（点明主题，引出最喜欢的季节） 1. There are four beautiful seasons in a year, and I like ... best. 一年有四个美丽的季节，我最喜欢…… 2. My favourite season is ... It is always full of beauty and fun. 我最喜欢的季节是……它总是充满美好与乐趣。 3. Among all the seasons, ... is my favourite one. 在所有季节中，……是我的最爱。 中间句（描写气候、景色、日常活动，核心主体段） 1. The weather is very pleasant in this season. 这个季节的天气十分宜人。 2. It is windy and bright, which is a perfect time to fly kites. 天气晴朗多风，是放风筝的绝佳时节。 3. I can enjoy lots of interesting outdoor activities with my friends. 我可以和朋友们一起体验很多有趣的户外活动。 4. The leaves turn brown and fall into piles on the ground. 树叶变黄，纷纷飘落堆积在地面。 5. Farmers work hard to harvest crops when autumn comes. 秋天来临，农民们忙着收割庄稼。 结尾句（总结感受，升华主题） 1. It is a beautiful season and it always brings me sweet memories. 这是一个美丽的季节，总能带给我甜蜜的回忆。 2. I love this season because it shows the great beauty of nature. 我喜欢这个季节，因为它展现了大自然的绝美风光。 3. This wonderful season makes my life more colourful. 这个美好的季节让我的生活更加丰富多彩。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句：The weather is very pleasant in autumn. It’s the best time to play football outside. 仿写：春天气候温暖、阳光明媚。这是外出徒步、户外放风筝的最佳时节。 ________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】The weather is warm and sunny in spring. It’s the best time to go hiking and fly kites outdoors. 2. 教材原句：Those sweet memories of summer days are about quiet streams and trees and shade. 仿写：冬日里美好的回忆，是皑皑白雪，还有和朋友们开心地打雪仗。 ________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】My sweet memories of winter days are about white snow and happy snowball fights with friends. 3. 教材原句：As the days get shorter and the temperature drops, autumn brings us new beauty. 仿写：白昼渐长，气温回升，春天为我们带来新生与活力。 ________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】As the days get longer and the temperature rises, spring brings us new life and energy. 典例 一年四季各有特色，有人喜欢繁花似锦的春天，有人偏爱热烈明媚的夏天，有人钟情硕果累累的秋天，有人热爱白雪皑皑的冬天。请以 My Favourite Season 为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。 内容要点：1. 点明你最喜欢的季节；2. 描写该季节的天气和景色；3. 介绍你在该季节的活动；4. 说明喜欢它的原因。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ① 题材：写景抒情类记叙文（单元核心写作题型） ② 人称：第一人称（I/My） ③ 时态：一般现在时（描述季节常态、个人喜好） ④ 核心要求：内容完整、语句通顺、句式多样，贴合季节主题，表达真情实感 谋篇布局 开头 开门见山，直接点明自己最喜欢的季节，简洁点题。 中间 分层描写，先写季节的天气、自然景色，再写自己和家人、朋友的季节性活动，内容充实具体。 结尾 总结个人感受，点明喜欢该季节的核心原因，简单升华主题。 佳作展示 My Favourite Season There are four wonderful seasons in a year, and autumn is my favourite one. Autumn is a season with pleasant weather. It is neither too hot nor too cold. The sky is clear and bright, and all the trees turn colourful. Brown leaves fall gently on the ground, making the world beautiful. It is also a harvest season. Farmers are busy picking crops and fruits. I love walking in the park and having picnics with my family in autumn. The season brings me lots of sweet memories. I truly love autumn because it shows the most gentle beauty of nature. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 ① pleasant 宜人的（单元核心词汇，替换普通nice/good） ② neither too hot nor too cold 不冷不热（高级短语，精准描述气候） ③ gentle beauty of nature 大自然的温柔之美（升华主题，提升文采） 高分句型 ① 并列结构：It is neither too hot nor too cold. （巧用并列否定结构，句式简洁高级，精准描写季节气候） ② 分词作状语：Brown leaves fall gently on the ground, making the world beautiful. （非谓语动词句型，突破简单句局限，画面感十足） （一） 假如你是Joan，就读于阳光中学，Sandy是你的笔友，下面是她给你的来信，请你根据她的来信，用英语给她写一封回信。 Dear Joan,     The other day, I saw some pictures of your school in different seasons online. How beautiful! I believe your school life must be colourful. So I’m writing to ask for more information about you and your school life. Would you please tell me:     What is your favourite season and why?     How is the weather in your favourite season?     What’s your school like in your favourite season?     What do you and your classmates often do in your favourite season?       Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Sandy 注意： 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．条理清楚，要点全面，书写规范； 3．词数100左右，文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Sandy, I’m very glad to get your letter. ————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— Hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Joan 【参考范文】 Dear Sandy, I’m very glad to get your letter. My favourite season is autumn. I like it because Mid-Autumn Festival is in this season. My family and I eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon at the festival. It is cool and sunny in autumn and the sky is blue. If you walk around my school, you can see leaves on the trees turn brown or yellow and fall into piles upon the ground. At this time of year, our school looks so beautiful. During this season, I can go for different activities with my classmates. Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn. My classmates and I always take an active part in it. We have fun chatting with each other and cheering for our friends. Sometimes, we go cycling in the park. How happy we are! Hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Joan 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据信件内容作出相应回答，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达自己收到来信的心情（已给出）； 第二步，根据信件内容做出回应，具体介绍自己喜欢的季节，喜欢这个季节的理由，天气情况，在这个季节学校的样子以及这个季节经常和同学们做的事情； 第三步，表达期待收到回信（已给出）。 [亮点词汇] ①turn brown or yellow变成棕色或者黄色 ②look so beautiful看起来如此美丽 ③take an active part in积极参与 [高分句型] ①If you walk around my school, you can see leaves on the trees turn brown or yellow and fall into piles upon the ground.（if引导的条件状语从句） ②How happy we are!（感叹句） （二） 假设你是Daniel，请你根据思维导图中提供的信息，给你英国的笔友Jude写一封关于四季的信。 要求：1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯; 2)必须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥; 3)词数100左右。 Dear Jude, I’m writing to tell you something about the four seasons in Nantong. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Daniel 【参考范文】 Dear Jude,   I’m writing to tell you something about the four seasons in Nantong.   In spring, I love watching bees and butterflies flying among flowers. To enjoy nature’s beauty, I went to Zhalong Nature Reserve and helped the Birdwatching Association save injured birds. Summer here is hot, with temperatures above 30℃, which often makes people feel sleepy. I usually play by the stream and rest under trees.   When autumn comes, fallen leaves pile up on the ground. It’s a busy farming season and also perfect for flying kites. Winter brings several snowstorms. We build snowmen, have snow fights, and laugh happily together.   Each season here has its own beauty and fun.   Yours, Daniel 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主； ③提示：需包含四季特点及相关活动，适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体引入； 第二步，依次描述春、夏、秋、冬的景象与活动； 第三步，总结四季特点。 [亮点词汇] ①Nature Reserve自然保护区 ②temperatures above 30℃ 30多度的气温 ③fallen leaves pile up落叶堆积 [高分句型] ①Summer here is hot, with temperatures above 30℃, which often makes people feel sleepy. (“with+复合结构”及which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②We build snowmen, have snow fights, and laugh happily together. (并列动词结构) （三） 请根据以下提示，以“My favourite season”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。注意要点完整、语法正确、上下文连贯，可适当发挥。 季节 春季 特点 天气很暖和，可以穿舒适的衣服。 理由 1. 气温不高不低，是欣赏大自然的最佳时节。 2. 到处都有绿树鲜花、美丽的蝴蝶…… 3. 有风，和朋友们一起去户外放风筝。 4. 有时和家人一起露营…… （至少写一点） 感想 春天的一切都是新的，带来快乐和希望。 My favourite season _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My favourite season My favourite season is spring. It is very warm and I can wear comfortable clothes. The temperature is not too high or too low. It’s the best time for me to enjoy the natural world. I can see green trees, fresh flowers, beautiful butterflies and busy bees everywhere. It is windy and I can go outside to fly kites with my friends. Sometimes I can also go camping with my family. And I can catch butterflies in the field. Everything in spring is new, and it brings me joy and hope. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：记叙文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题：说明最爱春天，提及其温暖、穿着舒适的优势； 第二步：细节展开：从温度、景物、户外活动三方面补充理由； 第三步：升华主旨：强调春天万物更新，表达其带来的快乐与希望。 [亮点词汇] ①comfortable舒适的 ②fresh新鲜的 ③hope希望 [高分句型] ①It is the best time for me to enjoy the natural world.（运用it is+名词短语+for sb. to do sth.句型） ②Everything in spring is new, and it brings me joy and hope.（运用了and连接的并列句） （四） 回忆你曾身处某一季节的午后，请以“A/An ________ Afternoon”为题，用生动的语言描绘你看到、听到、感受到的一切。内容需包括： What was the season like? ●Weather, temperature... ●Scenery (风景) What were people’s activities? ●What did they wear or take? (scarf/jacket/umbrella...) ●What did they do? What were your feelings? How did you feel? 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按照要求适当发挥； 3.词数在100词左右； 4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 A Peaceful Afternoon    It was a sunny afternoon in May. The bright sun shone in the clear blue sky. Fresh green leaves covered the trees, and colorful flowers bloomed everywhere.     People enjoyed the lovely weather. Some wore jackets, and others carried hats to shade themselves from the sun. In the park, some children chased each other, and a few families sat on the grass, sharing snacks and laughing together.     I sat quietly under a tall tree. The gentle sunlight, the sound of laughter, and the beauty of nature filled me with peace and happiness. I felt thankful for such a perfect, peaceful afternoon. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时； ③提示：材料所给的提示内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：描写季节场景； 第二步：分人群描写活动； 第三步：结合自身感受升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①bright明亮的 ②bloom开花 ③fill…with…用……充满…… ④peaceful宁静的 [高分句型] ①In the park, some children chased each other, and a few families sat on the grass, sharing snacks and laughing together. (现在分词作伴随状语) ②The gentle sunlight, the sound of laughter, and the beauty of nature filled me with peace and happiness. (名词短语排比作主语) （五） 你所在的英语俱乐部正在举办主题为“Seasonal Changes and Animal Friends”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文，内容包括： 1. 描述你最喜欢的季节 (如：天气特点、自然景象、你在这个季节喜欢做的事情等)； 2. 谈谈在这个季节里，你观察到或了解到的一种动物的生存状况 (如：它们面临哪些困难？天气变化、人类活动等对它们有什么影响？)； 3. 作为中学生，在这个季节里我们可以如何帮助和保护它们？ (请提出1-2条具体可行的建议) 要求：·词数：80-90词；·语句通顺，连贯自然 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My favorite season is autumn. The air is cool and fresh, with golden leaves dancing in the wind. I love hiking mountains and picking wild fruits with friends. In autumn, I often see little sparrows struggling to find food. Cold winds take away their food, and some people even drive them from parks. As students, we can help. First, put some grains in yard bird feeders. Second, tell people not to harm these lovely creatures. Autumn is beautiful, with our animal friends around. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖“喜欢的季节描述、对应季节动物的生存状况、保护建议”，适当添加细节，突出主题关联。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍自己最喜欢的季节（秋天），描述其天气、景象及个人活动； 第二步：阐述秋天里麻雀的生存困难（食物短缺、人类驱赶）； 第三步：给出中学生的保护建议，呼吁与动物友好共处。 [亮点词汇] ①struggle to do sth努力做某事 ②drive...from...把……从……赶走 ③harm伤害 [高分句型] ①Second, tell people not to harm these lovely creatures.（祈使句） ②Autumn is beautiful, with our animal friends around.（with复合结构，表伴随状态） （六） 春之繁华，夏之碧叶，秋之硕果，冬之静雪，四季更迭，每一季都有它独特的韵味。你校将开展以“My favourite season in my hometown”为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是Peter，请你根据以下问题提示并适当发挥想象，写一篇英语演讲稿。 提示： 1. What is the weather like? 2. What does your city look like? 3. Why do you like this season? (at least two points) 4. What activities do people enjoy doing in this season? (at least two points) 5. What do you think of your hometown in this season? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My Favourite Season in My Hometown Hello everyone! I’m Peter. My favourite season in my hometown is autumn. The weather is cool and sunny. The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they’re wearing yellow coats. I love autumn because the air is fresh, and there are lots of delicious fruits like apples and grapes. Also, it’s not too hot or cold. People enjoy picking fruits on farms and having picnics in parks. Some also fly kites in the open air. In autumn, my hometown is beautiful and lively. It’s the most wonderful time of the year! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇英语演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，符合演讲类文本的常用时态； ③提示：覆盖了“天气、城市样貌、喜欢的原因、季节活动、对家乡的看法”所有要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍自己及最喜欢的季节； 第二步：描述天气与城市样貌；说明喜欢的原因；介绍季节活动； 第三步：评价家乡的秋天，升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①be covered with被……覆盖 ②delicious fruits美味的水果 ③open air户外 [高分句型] ① The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they’re wearing yellow coats. (破折号补充说明) （七） 为传播环保理念，探索自然生灵奥秘，大自然生活节将在森林动物园精彩绽放，现面向全体同学招募志愿者(volunteer)。假设你是李华，请根据招募要求用英语写一封自荐信。 A Volunteer of the Natural Life Festival WantedDear all, Nature is amazing. Our festival needs you to help more people to learn about it. Would you like to join us? If you want to be one of us, please let us know: 1. What kind of person are you? Do you have any hobbies? 2. Which is your favourite season and why? What outdoor (户外的) activities do you like in this season? 3. Do you know how to protect wild animals? If you’re interested, please email us at naturallifefestival@126.com. 要求： (1) 信件须包括招募要求的要点，可适当发挥； (2) 信件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3) 词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I am interested in nature, so I want to be one of you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I can be a volunteer of this festival. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I am interested in nature, so I want to be one of you. I am a curious and outgoing boy who is always eager to learn and share knowledge. I have a passion for photography and enjoy capturing the beauty of nature. My favorite season is spring because everything comes back to life. I often go hiking and take photos of flowers. As for protecting wild animals, I am well-informed about their habitats and the threats that they face. I advocate for their preservation and am committed to raising awareness about the importance of wildlife conservation. I hope I can be a volunteer of this festival. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇自荐信； ②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步：引出话题，表明自己对自然的兴趣以及想要成为志愿者的意愿； 第二步：根据招募要求详细介绍自己的性格、爱好、最喜欢的季节及原因、该季节喜欢的户外活动，以及自己保护野生动物的知识； 第三步：书写结语，表达希望成为志愿者的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①be eager to渴望做某事 ②have a passion for对……有热情 ③be well-informed about对……了解透彻 ④be committed to致力于 [高分句型] ①I am a curious and outgoing boy who is always eager to learn and share knowledge.（who引导的定语从句） ②As for protecting wild animals, I am well-informed about their habitats and the threats that they face.（that引导的定语从句） （八） 现在，我们时不时地能在街上或小区里看到流浪猫(stray cats)，时至冬日，这些小动物的生存状况更为艰难。Kitty作为学校动物保护俱乐部(the Animal Protection Club)的一名成员，想要动员全校学生行动起来，为可怜的流浪猫献上一点爱心。请以Kitty的身份，写一篇题为《冬日暖阳》的英语晨会演讲稿。 演讲内容包括：1、在冬季，流浪猫正面临的生存难题。 2、作为学生，可以为流浪猫做的事情。 3、这么做的意义或对未来的期许。 作文要求：必须包含上述三方面内容；字迹工整；文章结构明确；语言表达通顺；字数150字。 可参考使用的生词：兽医vet；动物收容所the animal shelter；给动物绝育get ... fixed （以上生词可选用，不使用也不扣分） Sunshine in Winter Good morning, everyone. I am Kitty from the Animal Protection Club. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Sunshine in Winter Good morning, everyone. I am Kitty from the Animal Protection Club. As winter comes, stray cats are living a hard life. The weather is cold and freezing. They have no warm places. Also, it is difficult for them to find enough food and clean water. Some sick stray cats even have no chance to see a vet. They are weak and lonely in the cold street. We students can do something kind for them. First, we can leave some clean food and warm water in safe corners. Second, never hurt or frighten these little animals. We can also show love and send them to the animal shelter. If possible, we can help know more about getting animals fixed. A small kindness is like warm sunshine in winter. Our help can let stray cats live through cold days safely. Let’s love and protect their lives together. The world will become warmer and more beautiful with our care. 【写作解析】 写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿，主要使用一般现在时 明确要点：必须包含三个要点：1.流浪猫在冬季面临的生存难题；2.学生可以采取的具体行动；3.行动的意义及对未来的期许。 确定人称：以第一人称为主 注意事项：语言需有感染力和号召力，符合演讲场景 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：问候并自我介绍，引出主题——冬季流浪猫的生存状况 主体段：分为两部分，第一部分描述流浪猫在冬季面临的生存难题，第二部分提出学生可以为流浪猫做的事情 结尾段：总结这么做的意义，表达对未来的期许 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：流浪猫面临的生存难题 生存难题：cold and freezing / no warm places / difficult to find enough food / no clean water / sick stray cats / no chance to see a vet / weak and lonely 要点二：学生可以做的事情 行动内容：leave clean food and warm water / never hurt or frighten / raise love / send them to the animal shelter 要点三：行动的意义或期许 意义与期许：small kindness is like warm sunshine / let stray cats live through cold days / love and protect their lives $