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Unit 1 Friendship
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Make a class booklet about best friends
(制作好友主题班级小册子文稿)
Unit 1 Friendship
导作任务Make a class booklet about best friends(制作好友主题班级小册子文稿)
申题
口文体
班级小册子文稿(非正式介绍/分享型文体,可包含多段内容,无需书信格式)
2话题
介绍自己的最好朋友,描述朋友的性格、品质、一起做的事,分享友谊的意义
③人称
以第一人称I/we和第三人称he/she为主
4时态
一般现在时(描述朋友品格、日常相处);可适当用一般过去时(讲述具体故事)
5要点
〉开头:点明主题,介绍自己最好的朋友
>中间:描述朋友的外貌/性格/特长/一个感人的瞬间或共同回忆
,结尾:表达对友谊的看法或祝愿
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
引出话题,介绍自己的best friend
例如:My best friend is Tom.We have been friends for two years.
中间
具体描写
朋友的外表或性格(2~3个形容词)
段落
内容要点
你们一起做的事、共同的爱好
一件小事体现友谊(帮助、分享、鼓励)
结尾
总结友谊的重要性,表达珍惜之情
三、
核心组词造句
核心词汇
词friend朋友
honest诚实的
helpful乐于助人的
词kind友善的
share分享
trust信任
词together一起
smile微笑
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
be good at
擅长
2
help each other
互相帮助
share secrets
分享秘密
4
have fun together
一起玩得开心
5
in need
有需要时
6
keep a secret
保守秘密
基础造句
1He is honest and always tells the truth.
2 We often help each other with homework.
3 A true friend is someone you can trust.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
supportive
支持的
2
patient
耐心的
3
generous
慷慨的
4
understa nding
理解的
5
similar interests
相似的爱好
加分句型
描述人物
She is a hard-working girl with a warm smile.
He has a sense of humor and always makes me laugh.
讲述故事(含时间状语从句)
When I felt down,he was always there for me.
Once I failed the exam,she encouraged me to try again.
表达友谊意义
A good friend is like a bright star in your life.
Friendship makes our school days more colourful and meaningful.
结尾升华句
>I hope our friendship will last forever.
The best thing in life is having a true friend by your side.
五、写作模板
My Best Friend
My best friend is
He/She is
years old
He /She is
and
(性格).We have the same hobby一
One thing I will never forget is that
(具体事件)·
I think a true friend is someone who
I am very lucky to have him her as my best friend.I hope our friendship can last forever.
六、作文仿写
范文
My Best Friend
My best friend is Lisa.She is 13 years old and has long black hair.She is kind and always
ready to help others.We both love reading books,so we often go to the library together.
One thing I will never forget is that when I was sick and missed classes,she came to my
house every day to share her notes and explain the lessons.She is very patient.
I think a true friend is someone who stays with you when you are in need.I am really lucky to
have Lisa as my best friend.I hope our friendship never ends.
(约100词)
提示:本讲稿可直接用于课堂写作讲解,也适合学生仿写练习。小册子文稿可多篇组合,每个学生写一篇,班级
汇总成册。
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文3给同学的交友建议
约96词
Dear Li Hua,
You told me you want to make more good friends.Here is my advice for you.
First,be friendly and smile often-it makes others feel warm.Second,you'd better listen
carefully when others talk and show interest in them.Third,please remember to help your
classmates when they need you.Helping others is a great way to build friendship.
I believe you will make lots of true friends soon.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
拓展范文4网致最好的朋友
约98词
Dear Wang Fang,
You are my best friend,and I want to thank you for always being there.Friendship is like
sunshine in life.
First,we should share joys and sadness together-that makes us closer.Second,you'd better
keep in touch even when we are busy.Third,please remember to forgive each other's
mistakes because no one is perfect.
I hope our friendship lasts forever.You are truly special to me.
Yours,
Chen Yue