Unit 8 Safe and sound 写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年八年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（译林版）

译林新版 Unit 8 Safe and sound 初二上 写作精讲精练 写作话题·Write tips on how to keep safe in emergencies (撰写突发灾害避险小贴士) 译林新版初二上Unit8 Safe and sound 导作任务Write tips on how to keep safe in emergencies(撰写突发灾害避险小贴士) 一、审题 包文体 建议类短文（非正式说明文，可用标题加编号分条呈现，也可写成连贯段落） 2话题 遇到突发灾害（如地震、火灾、台风等）时如何自我保护 3人称 以第二人称you为主（给读者建议），也可用第一人称we表示共同行动 4时态 一般现在时（给出通用避险建议） 5要点 ，点明写作目的：介绍防灾避险小贴士 ,列出3~4条具体、可行的避险建议 ，对每条建议简单说明理由 〉结尾总结或提醒 6字数 80~100词（初中标准要求） 二、 文章结构（何选用“总分总“或“标题+分条”） 段落 内容要点 开头 一句话引出话题（如“遇到突发灾害时，我们该怎么做？”） 中间 分条列出建议（每条建议+理由） 段落 内容要点 结尾 总结提醒(“牢记这些方法，就能更好地保护自己”) 推荐分条结构示例 ,标题：How to Keep Safe in Emergencies ,1.第一条建议+理由 >2.第二条建议+理由 >3.第三条建议+理由 ,结尾：一句话总结 三、核心组词造句 核心词汇 词earthquake地震；fire火灾；typhoon台风；emergency紧急情况 词protect保护；stay calm保持洽静；cover遮盖 词exit出口；hide躲藏；danger危险 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 stay calm 保持冷静 2 hide under a table 躲在桌子下 3 cover your mouth and nose 捂住口鼻 4 follow the exit sign 跟随出口标志 call119/120 拨打119/120 6 wait for help 等待救援 7 stay away from windows 远离窗户 8 drop,cover,and hold on 趴下、遮蔽、抓稳（地震避险口诀） 基础造句 When an earthquake comes,you should stay calm and hide under a strong table. 2 In a fire,cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel and go out quickly. 3 It is important to follow the escape plan and not use the lift. 四、好词好句 (更详细) 高级好词 序号 单词 释义 1 immediately 立即地 序号 单词 释义 2 safely 安全地 powerful 强大的（如powerful earthquake) 4 necessary 必要的 5 protect yourself 保护你自己 6 keep away from 远离 加分句型 建议句型 (与Unit2一脉相承) You should shouldn't... You'd better... It's important necessary for you to... Remember to...Don't forget to... 说明理由（含原因从句或不定式） Because it can help you stay safe and avoid danger. This will give you more time to find help. Doing so can protect you from being hurt. 结尾升华句 If you follow these tips,you will be much safer in an emergency. Knowing these life-saving skills can make a big difference. Remember:stay calm,take action,and you can get through the danger. 五、写作模板（两版可选） 版本一：连贯段落式（适合正文共4~5句） How to Keep Safe in Emergencies Emergencies can happen anytime.Here are some useful tips to help you stay safe First,you should stay calm when something dangerous happens.Because being calm helps you think clearly. Second,if you are inside a building during an earthquake,you'd better hide under a strong table and hold on to its legs.This can protect you from falling objects. Third,in a fire,remember to cover your mouth and nose with a wet cloth and stay low to avoid smoke. Finally,always follow the escape route and never use the lift. If you keep these tips in mind,you will be able to protect yourself and others. 版本二：分条列表式（更清晰，适合“小贴士”文体） Tips on How to Keep Safe in Emergencies 1 Stay calm.Panic only makes things worse.Take a deep breath and think what to do. 2Drop,cover and hold on during an earthquake.If you are inside,get under a strong desk or table and stay there until the shaking stops. 3 In a fire,get out quickly.Cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel,crawl low under the smoke,and use the stairs,not the lift. 4 Call for help if you can.Dial 119 for fire or 120 for medical emergencies. These simple actions can save your life.Learn them and stay safe! 六、作文仿写 题目 假设你是李华，要写一篇关于“突发灾害避险小贴士"的短文，给校刊投稿。请根据提示写作。 参考范文 How to Keep Safe in Emergencies Emergencies like earthquakes or fires are dangerous,but we can protect ourselves with the rig ht actions. 1 Stay calm first.A clear mind helps you make good decisions. 2 During an earthquake,drop,cover and hold on.Hide under a strong table and stay away from windows. 3 In a fire,leave the building at once.Cover your mouth and nose with a wet towel,and crawl low to avoid smoke.Never use the lift. 4 Call 119 or 120 when you are safe.Tell them your exact location. Remember these tips.They can help you stay safe when danger comes. (字数约100词，符合初中写作要求) 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文1 给新邻居的地震避险建议 约95词 Dear Li, I heard you just moved to this earthquake-prone area.Here are some tips to keep safe during an earthquake. 1 Drop,Cover,and Hold On:Drop to your hands and knees,cover your head and neck under a sturdy table,and hold on until shaking stops. 2 Stay indoors if you are inside;avoid windows,heavy furniture,and doorways.If outside, move away from buildings and power lines. 3 Prepare an emergency kit with water,food,flashlight,and first-aid supplies. Stay calm and remember these steps.You will be safer! Yours, Wei 拓展范文2 给朋友的洪水避险建议 约93词 Dear Tom, Flood season is coming.I'd like to share some survival tips with you. 1 Move to higher ground immediately if flood warnings are issued.Never walk or drive through moving water. 2 Turn off electricity and gas at the main switches before leaving home.Grab your emergency bag. 3 If trapped,go to the highest floor or roof.Signal for help with a flashlight or bright cloth. Avoid touching electrical equipment. Follow these tips and stay alert.I hope you stay safe! Yours, Ming