内容正文:
译林新版
Unit 3 Welcome to our school!
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Introduce your favourite school places(介绍喜爱的校园场所)
译林新版初一上Unit3 Welcome to our school!
导作任务Introduce your favourite school places(介绍喜爱的校园场所)
一、审题
①文体
介绍文(说明文/描述文,可用书信或直接描述,重点在于介绍喜欢的场所及其特点)
2话题
介绍校园里你最喜欢的一个或几个地方(如图书馆、操场、音乐教室、花园等)
3人称
以第一人称I或we为主(介绍自己喜爱的场所时用I;若介绍班级共享场所可用We)
4时态
一般现在时(描述场所的常态功能和你的感受)
5要点
,点明最喜欢的学校场所是什么
,描述该场所的位置、外观或特点(可用there be句型)
,说明喜欢的原因(可以做什么事情,有什么感受)
,结尾表达对该场所的喜爱或邀请同学一起去
6字数
6080词(初一标准,可适当扩展至100词)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
直接点明你最喜欢的场所是哪一处
中间
描述场所的具体情况(位置、环境、设施)以及你在此处喜欢做的事情
段落
内容要点
结尾
再次表达喜爱之情,或邀请他人一起来体验
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词favourite最喜欢的
place地方
library图书馆
词playground操场
classroom教室
music room音乐教室
词garden花园
clean干净的
bright明亮的
词big大的
quiet安静的
beautiful美丽的
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
my favourite place
我最喜欢的地方
2
next to beside
在旁边
3
in front of
在..前面
there be...
有…
5
read books
读书
6
play with friends
和朋友们一起玩
7
have fun
玩得开心
8
enjoy doing sth
喜欢做某事
基础造句
1My favourite place is the school library.
2 It is next to the teaching building.
3 There are many books and desks in it.
4 I like to read books there because it is very quiet.
5We can also borrow books from the library.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
y
modern
现代化的
2
spacious
宽做的
3
colourful
色彩丰富的
序号
单词
释义
4
comfortable
舒适的
5
convenient
方便的
6
wonderful
极好的
7
peaceful
安静的;平和的
加分句型
介绍场所位置
It is located between the office building and the sports field.
There is a beautiful garden in front of our classroom.
描述环境感受
,The library is so quiet that I can read attentively(专心地),
The playground is big and bright,and it makes me feel relaxed.
说明喜欢的原因
I can not only read many interesting books but also do my homework there.
Every time I go to the music room,I feel happy because I love singing.
结尾升华句
I really enjoy staying in this place,and it makes my school life colourful.
If you come to our school,you must visit this place-you will love it too.
五、写作模板
My Favourite School Place
My favourite place in our school is
It is
(位置).There
(描述环境/设施).I like to
(做什么)there
because
(原因).
I think
is a wonderful place.I hope you can come and enjoy it with me.
六、作文仿写
范文一
(图书馆)
My Favourite School Place
My favourite place in our school is the school library.
It is next to the classroom building.There are many bookshelves and a lot of interesting books
in it.I like to read books and do my homework there because it is very quiet and clean.I can
also borrow my favourite storybooks.
I think the library is a wonderful place.I hope you can come and read with me.
范文二
(操场)
My Favourite School Place
My favourite place is the playground.
It is behind the teaching building.It is very big and bright.There is a nice football field and
some basketball courts.I like to play basketball with my friends there after class.We always
have a lot of fun.
I really enjoy staying on the playground.It makes my school life colourful and happy.
范文三
(音乐教室)
My Favourite School Place
My favourite place in school is the music room.
It is on the second floor of the art building.The room is bright and full of colourful pictures.
There is a piano and many chairs in it.I like to sing songs and play musical instruments there
because music makes me feel happy.
I hope you can visit the music room with me one day.We can sing together!
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍图书馆
约95词
Dear classmates,
Let me introd uce my favourite school place-the library.
It is quiet and clean,so I can read and study there without any noise.
2 The library has many books,from science to history,which help me learn more.
3 There are also computers for us to search for information when needed.
I love spending my free time there.It is not only a place to study,but also a place to explore
the world.I hope you will enjoy it too!
Yours,
Li Ming
拓展范文2介绍操场
约98词
Dear friends,
I want to share my favourite school place with you-the playground.
1 It is wide and open,so we can run,play ball games and have fun together.
2 The playground is also where we have PE class and do morning exercises.
3 After class,I often go there to relax and chat with friends.
It makes me feel energetic and happy.I think everyone needs a place like this.Come and join
me on the playground!
Yours,
Zhang Wei