Unit 4写作与听力专项提优2025-2026学年译林版七年级英语上册

Unit 4 School days

写作

佳作赏析

[经典例题]

为展现丰富多彩的校园生活，学校将举办以 “My favourite day at school” 为题的征文活动。请根据问题提示，结合当天的课程和课外活动的安排，用英语写一篇70词左右的作文投稿。

问题：

1.  What day do you like best?

2.  What is your favourite subject?

3.  What activities do you have after class?

 

[高分范文]

My favourite day at school

Friday is my favourite day. It is a really busy day.

On Friday morning, I have four different classes. ① Of all the subjects, I like English best because my English teacher is great. He always makes his classes interesting. In the afternoon, there are different activities in the school. I am in the basketball team. We often have basketball games with students from other schools. ② The games are always exciting because everyone tries their best to win.

③ I have a good time every Friday at school.

[名师点评]

文章结构完整，叙述具体，细节真实，描写生动，通过描述周五的课程和活动，表达对学校生活的喜爱，有真情实感。

① 运用 “like ... best” “make ... interesting” 表达对英语学科和老师的喜爱之情。

② 运用 try one's best to do sth. 表明球类活动富有对抗性，令人兴奋。

③ 总结全文，突出主题，表明作者周五在学校有美好快乐的体验。

 

素材积累

[开头句]

1.  My school day starts at 8:00.

2.  I go to school from Monday to Friday.

3.  I would like to tell you about my school life.

 

[中间句]

1.  He goes to school at about 7:10 a. m.

2.  I have lunch at school.

3.  We have a field trip each term.

 

[结尾句]

1.  I like my school life.

2.  We always have great fun!

3.  What a happy day it is!

 

[名言警句]

1.  Study hard and play hard.

    努力学习，尽情玩耍。

2.  Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.

    今日事今日毕。

 

写作演练

[小试身手]

假设你是汤姆（Tom），你作为交流生来到中国某中学。请根据提示给你家乡的朋友琳达（Linda）写一封邮件，向她介绍你现在的学校生活。70词左右，已给出部分不计入总词数。

提示：

1.  学习情况。

2.  课外活动。

3.  同学关系。

 

[思路点拨]

① 时态：一般现在时。

② 人称：以第一人称为主。

③ 按提示顺序对学校生活进行介绍。

 

[写作提纲]

[妙笔生花]

Dear Linda,

I'd like to tell you something about my new school life.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I like my new school.

Yours,

Tom