Unit 6 When disaster strikes 写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年八年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

外研新版 Unit 6 When disaster strikes 初二上 写作精讲精练 写作话题·Write a heart-warming story after a natural disaster (写一则灾后暖心小故事) 外研新版初二上Unit6 Vhen disaster strikes 写作任务Write a heart-warming story after a natural disaster(写一则灾后暖心小故事) 一、申题 1文体 暖心小故事（记叙文，需有故事要素：时间、地点、人物、事件经过、情感升华） 2话题 自然灾害（如earthq uake/food/storm等）后，人与人之间相互帮助、传递温暖的感人小事 3人称 以第一人称(I/we)或第三人称(he/she/they)为主 4时态 一般过去时（讲述已发生的故事） 5要点 ，交代故事背景：哪场灾难、发生在何时何地 ，描述灾难中的困境（如房屋倒塌、停电缺水、恐惧无助等） ,突出“暖心”行为：某人/某群人伸出援手（送食物、安慰、救援等） ，军出故事结局及自己的感受/感悟（结尾点题，传递温暖与希望） 6字数 80~100词（初中标准要求） 二、 文章结构（三段式） 段落 内容要点 开头 背景引入一一灾难发生的时间、地点，以及遭遇的困难或恐惧 中间 故事主体一一详细描写暖心事件（谁做了什么、怎么做的、双方的反应） 段落 内容要点 结尾 感悟升华一一这件事带来的感动、力量或后示 三、核心组词造句 核心词汇 词disaster灾难 词earthquake地震 词f1ood洪水 词storm暴风雨 词 homeless无家可归的 词rescue救援 词help帮助 词warm温暖的 词brave勇敢的 词kind善良的 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 make friends 交朋友 2 be interested in 对.…感兴趣 3 love doing /love to do 喜欢做..… 4 the same hobby 相同的爱好 5 in my free time 在我的空闲时间 6 look forward to 期待 7 never give up 永不放弃 8 feel the warmth of love 感受到爱的温暖 基础造句 1 Last week,a strong earthq uake hit our town.Many houses fell down. 2 Everyone was scared and didn't know what to do. 3 A kind neighbour shared his food and water with us. 4We helped each other and stayed together. 四、好词好句（更详细） 高级好词 序号 单词 释义 1 suddenly 突然地 2 shake 摇晃 destroy 摧毁 4 survivor 幸存者 5 shelter 避难所 o courage 勇气 7 warmth 温暖 8 grateful 感激的 9 touched 感动的 10 hope 希望 加分句型 描写灾难场景 The ground shook so hard that we could hardly stand. The strong wind blew away our roof,and everything was in a mess. It felt like the world was falling apart. 描写暖心行为 Without thinking twice,he rushed into the broken house to save the old woman. She took off her coat and put it around the little boy,saying "Don't be afraid,I'm here." They shared their only bottle of water with the strangers. 描写感受与升华 At that moment,I felt the true warmth of love and kindness. We may lose our homes,but we will never lose hope. The disaster brought us closer and made us stronger. This small act of kindness gave me the courage to face the future. 五、写作模板 模板一（第一人称） Last a terrible hit our Everything was destroyed.I was and didn't know what to do. Just then came and He/She I was deeply touched.His/Her kindness We together. This experience taught me that Even in the darkest moment,love and hope are always there. 模板二（第三人称） On a night,a big struck a small village.Many people became homeless.Among them was He/She felt But something warm happened.A neighbour/stranger He/She Soon, more people came to help.They Thanks to these kind people, survived and found new hope.True kindness shines brightest after disasters. 六、作文仿写 题目 请写一篇灾后暖心小故事，描述自然灾害中人与人之间相互帮助、传递温暖的感人经历。 范文一（第一人称） Last week,a terrible earthquake hit our town.Houses fell down and the ground shook hard.I was scared and alone. Just then,my neighbour Mr Li came and found me.He took me to his small tent and shared his only bread and water.He said,"Don't worry,we will get through this together."I felt safe and warm. This experience taught me that love and kindness are stronger than any disaster.We helped each other and never gave up. 范文二 (第三人称) On a stormy night,a big flood swept through a small village.Little Tom lost his home and was crying sadly. Suddenly,a kind woman named Mrs Wang came over.She held Tom's hand and said,"You are not alone."She took him to a shelter,gave him dry clothes and hot milk.Other villagers also came to help.They shared food and blankets. Thanks to these kind people,Tom stopped crying and began to smile.The disaster was terrible,but people's kindness made the world warm again. 导作小贴士 >故事一定要有具体的“暖心行动”，不要只写“大家互相帮助”这种笼统的话。 ,多用一些细节描写，比如对方说了什么话、做了什么动作、人物当时的表情。 ,结尾别忘了点题，写出“传递温暖/希望/勇气"等正能量主题。 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文1地震后送水的小女孩 约95词 A big earthquake hit our town.Many houses fell down and people were scared. I saw a little girl named Lily walking carefully with a bottle of water in her hands. She went to the rescue workers who were digging in the ruins. 2 "You must be very tired.Please drink some water,"she said softly. 3 The tired workers smiled and thanked her with tears in their eyes. That small act of kindness made everyone feel warm.Even in the darkest times,love can shine through. 拓展范文2洪灾后邻居分享食物 约93词 After the flood,our street was covered with mud and we had no food or power. My neighbor Mrs.Green came to my door with a hot pot of soup. "I only have a little,but we can share,she said gently. 2 We sat together in the candlelight,eating the warm soup. 3 Soon,other neighbors also brought bread,water,and blankets. We lost many things,but we gained a stronger community.That night,we were not alone.