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Unit 5 The power of plants
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写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write a short paragraph about tea and your family(写短文介绍茶与家人)
Unit 5 The Power of Plants
导作任务Write a short paragraph about tea and your family(写短文介绍茶与家人)
一、审题
①文体
介绍性短文(段落形式,非书信,无称呼、署名)
2话题
茶与家人的关系一一家人爱喝什么茶?喝茶的习惯?茶对家庭的意义?
③人称
以第一人称we/my family为主,也可用第三人称my father/mother/grandma
4时态
一般现在时(描述习惯、事实)
5要点
>家人与茶相关的基本信息(谁喝茶?喝什么茶?)
,喝茶的时间或场合(如饭后、晚上、聊天时)
,茶对家人或家庭的意义(如健康、温暖、团聚)
6字数
60~80词(短文段落,略少于书信)
二、文章结构一段式或两段式)
一段式写法(推荐,符合“短段落要求):
,总起主题→具体介绍家人喝茶的习惯→简单说明意义或感受
两段式写法(如需稍微扩展):
,第一段:总体介绍茶与家人的关系
,第二段:具体例子十个人感受
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
序号
中文
英文
1
茶
tea
2
绿茶
green tea
3
红茶
black tea
4
花茶
flower tea herbal tea
5
喝茶
drink tea
6
泡茶
make tea brew tea
茶壶
teapot
茶杯
teacup
9
家人
family members
10
习惯
habit
11
温暖
warm warmth
12
放松
relax
13
健康
healthy health
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
drink tea together
一起喝茶
2
have a cup of tea
喝一杯茶
3
like...best
最喜欢…
4
after dinner
晚饭后
5
chat with each other
互相聊天
6
feel warm and relaxed
感到温暖又放松
基础造句
1 My father likes to drink tea after dinner.
2 My grandma often makes green tea for us.
3Drinking tea together helps us relax and talk.
四、好词好句
高级好词
序号
好词
释义
1
be fond of...
喜欢.…
2
be full of
充满.…
bring...together
把.…聚在一起
4
strengthen family ties
增进家庭感情
5
a daily habit
日常习惯
加分句型
介绍习惯
In my family,everyone has a different taste for tea.
My mother always prepares a pot of hot tea after supper.
说明意义(含长句)
Drinking tea is not just a habit-it is a way for us to spend time together and share our daily
life,
The warm tea makes us feel comfortable and helps us forget the tiredness of the day.
结尾升华句
Tea is not just a drink-it represents the love and warmth of my family.
I believe tea is a special gift for our family because it keeps us close to each other.
五、写作模板
Tea plays a(n)important/special role in my family.
First For example,my
likes to drink
(种类)
(时间/场合)
Also,we often
(一起做的事,如drink tea together/chat while drinking).
Tea makes us feel
(感受)
In short,tea is not only a drink but also a symbol of
(意义,如love/warmth/
togetherness).
六、作文仿写
范文一(一段式,80词)
Tea plays an important role in my family.My father likes green tea best.He drinks it every
morning before work.My mother prefers flower tea,and she often makes a cup for us after
dinner.At weekends,my grandparents come to our home.We sit together,drink tea and talk
about interesting things.The warm tea makes us feel relaxed and happy.Tea is not just a
drink.It brings our family closer.
范文二司
(两段式,95词)
In my family,everyone loves drinking tea,but in different ways.My grandpa is fond of black
tea.He drinks it slowly while reading the newspaper.My sister and I like sweet flower tea.We
often prepare it for the whole family on weekends.
For us,tea is more than a drink.When we sit around the table with a teapot full of hot tea,we
share stories and laugh together.Tea helps us feel the warmth of family.I think tea is a
beautiful gift from nature to our family.
七、写作小贴士
√开头直接点题:Tea plays a special role in my family..
中间用具体例子:谁?喝什么茶?什么时间?
√结尾提升意义:茶让家人更亲近/代表家庭的温暖
√注意一般现在时的第三人称单数(如likes,.drinks,makes)
/字数控制在60~90词,
段落紧凑
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍家人饮茶习惯
约96词
Dear Mary,
You asked about tea in my family.Let me share with you how we enjoy it.
1 My grandpa loves green tea best.He drinks it every morning while reading newspapers
2 My mother prefers black tea with milk.She says it helps her relax after work.
3 As for me,I like herbal tea,especially chamomile,which is good for sleep.
On weekends,we often sit together,drink tea and talk about our day.Tea brings us closer.
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
讲述茶与家庭仪式
约95词
Dear Tom,
Tea plays an important role in my family.Let me tell you about our tea time.
Every evening after dinner,my father makes oolong tea for the whole family.
2 My sister and I help prepare the cups and pour the tea.
3 We also share stories or play chess while drinking.My grandmother often says tea is like
our family bond-warm and lasting.
I really value these peaceful moments together.
Yours,
Wang Fang