内容正文:
外研新版
Unit 1 A new start
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Com pleting Mia's reply to her parents(完成Mia给父母的回信)
外研新版初一上Unit1 A new start
写作任务Completing Mia's reply to her parents(完成Mia给父母的回信)
一、审题
口文体
回信(书信格式,必须有称呼、正文、祝福语、署名)
2话题
Mia给父母回信,分享新学校生活,让父母放心
③人称
以第一人称I为主,提及父母用you
4时态
一般现在时(描述现状)+一般将来时(表达计划)
5要点
,开头感谢父母的来信/关心
,介绍新学校的2~3个积极方面(如老师、同学、课程、活动)
,表达适应良好,请父母放心
,结尾表达想念与祝福
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
礼貌回应,感谢父母的来信/关心
中间
分条介绍新学校生活的亮点(每条1~2句)
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结感受,表达思念与祝福,署名
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词stat开始;new新的;school学校;classmate同学;teacher老师;friendly友善的;
interesting有趣的;lesson课;homework家庭作业;fee感觉;happy快乐的;wory担心
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
y
write to you
给你写信
2
thank you for your letter /email
感谢你的来信
3
have a new start
有一个新开始
4
get on well with
与..…相处融洽
be friendly to
对..…友善
6
make new friends
交新朋友
>
worry a bout
担心
8
feel at home
感到自在
基础造句
1 I am happy to get your letter.
(我很高兴收到你们的来信。)
2 My new school is big and beautiful.
(我的新学校又大又漂亮。)
3 My teachers are very kind and my classmates are friendly.
(我的老师们很和蔼,同学们很友好。)
4I have made some new friends here.
(我在这里交了一些新朋友。)
5Please don't worry about me.I feel good.
(请不要担心我,我感觉很好。)
四、
好词好句(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
wonderful
精彩的
序号
单词
释义
2
patient
耐心的
3
helpful
有帮助的
4
colourful
丰富多彩的
5
confident
自信的
6
smoothly
顺利地
加分句型
描述感受
I feel very happy and excited about my new school life.
(我对新学校生活感到非常开心和兴奋。)】
Everything goes well,and I am getting used to it quickly.
(一切顺利,我很快就适应了。)
说明具体内容(含从句)
The teachers here are so patient that they always answer my questions.
(这里的老师们很有耐心,总是回答我的问题。)】
I have a new friend who sits next to me,and we play together after class.
(我有一位新朋友坐在我旁边,我们课后一起玩。)
Our English class is interesting because the teacher tells us many stories.
(我们的英语课很有趣,因为老师给我们讲很多故事。)
让父母放心的句子
So please don't worry-I am doing well and enjoying my days
(所以请不要担心一一我过得很好,很享受每一天。)
I will work hard and make you proud.
(我会努力学习,让你们骄傲。)
You don't need to worry about me;I can take care of myself.
(你们不必担心我,我能照顾好自己。)
结尾升华句
I miss you so much,but I know this new start is good for me.
(我非常想念你们,但我知道这个新开始对我有好处。)】
I hope everything is fine at home.Take care.
(希望家里一切都好。保重。)
Thank you for always supporting me.I love you.
(谢谢你们一直支持我。我爱你们。)
五、写作模板
Dear Mum and Dad,
How are you?Thank you for your letter email.I am writing to tell you about my new
school life.
First,my new school is very nice.The teachers are
and the classes are
Second,I have made some new friends.They are
and we often
together.
Third,I feel
here.Please don't worry about me
I miss you very much.Take care and give my love to everyone
Yours,
Mia
六、作文仿写
范文
Dear Mum and Dad,
How are you?Thank you for your email.I am writing to tell you about my new school life.
First,my new school is big and beautiful.The teachers are kind and always ready to help.The
lessons are interesting,especially English and Science.Second,I have made some new
friends.They are friendly and we often play basketball after class.I feel very happy here.
Please don't worry about me.
I miss you so much.Take care and say hello to Grandma for me.
Yours,
Mia
(词数:约100词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1Ma向父母汇报新学校生活
约96词
Dear Mom and Dad,
Thank you for your letter.I'm writing to tell you about my new school life.
First,I have made some good friends here.We often have lunch together and help each other
with homework.Second,I enjoy my classes,especially English and art.The teachers are kind
and patient.Third,I try to follow the school rules and finish my homework on time every day.
I feel happy and get used to everything little by little.Don't worry about me!
Love,
Mia
拓展范文2
Mia请求父母同意参加杜团活动
约95词
Dear Mom and Dad,
I hope you are both well.I want to ask for your permission to join the school's reading club.
1 I love reading,and the club meets every Friday afternoon after class.
2 The teacher says we can share books and discuss stories.It will help improve my English.
3 I promise to finish all my homework before the club and keep my grades up.
Please let me join.I'll be careful and responsible.Thank you!
Your daughter,
Mia