内容正文:
外研新版
Unit 2 More than fun
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write a sum mary of the story
(写故事梗概)
外研新版初一上Unit2 More than fun
写作任务Write a summary of the story(写故事梗概)
一、申题
口文体
故事梗概(summary)一一用简练的语言概括故事的主要人物、起因、经过、结果
2话题
本单元围绕“爱好、兴趣与乐趣”展开,故事通常涉及:
,一个人通过兴趣爱好发现更多乐趣
,或与朋友一起分享爱好,收获友谊
3人称
根据故事主人公确定(通常用第三人称he/she/they)
4时态
一般过去时(讲已经发生的故事)
5要点
,点明故事的主人公和核心事件(谁+做了什么)
,简述情节发展(遇到了什么困难/变化?)
,说明结局或收获(明白了什么?感受到了什么?)
,语言简洁,不写细节和对话
6字数
60~90词(初中故事梗概标准要求)
二、文章结构(三段式或一段式均可,推荐三段式)
段落
内容
提示
开头(1心
引出故事的主人公和背景
This story is about.../The main character
2句)
is...
段落
内容
提示
中间(3~
简述主要情节:起因→经过→转折
First,he...Then,he...Finally,he...
4句)
结尾(1~
点明结局或主题(故事告诉我们什么)
In the end,he learned.../The story shows
2句)
that...
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词hobby爱好
词fun乐趣
词share分享
词join加入
词ty尝试
词enjoy享受
词learn学会
词friend朋友
词happy快乐的
词together一起
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
have a hobby
有一个爱好
J
do sth.for fun
为了好玩而做某事
share...with...
与.…分享…
4
join a club
加入一个俱乐部
5
try something new
尝试新事物
6
become good friends
成为好朋友
7
have a great time
玩得很开心
8
learn a lot from...
从.学到很多
基础造句(一般过去时)
1He liked playing the guitar in his free time.
2 She joined the school music club and made new friends.
3 They tried together and finally had a lot of fun.
4 The story tells us that hobbies can bring more than fun.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
meaningful
有意义的
2
discover
发现
3
encourage
鼓励
4
experience
经历
5
friendship
友谊
6
unforgettable
难忘的
加分句型
介绍人物和开头
The story is about a boy/girl who loved/liked...
One day,he/she decided to...
叙述情节(含连接词)
First,he...Then,he met...After that,they...
Although it was difficult at first,he didn't give up.
With the help of his friend,he finally...
结尾升华
In the end,he learned that hobbies can bring us more than fun -they also bring friendship.
This experience made him realize that sharing fun makes it double.
The story shows that doing what we love together is the best kind of fun.
五、写作模板
Title:A Summary of“
This story is about
At first,
Then,
In the end,
The story tells us that
(如要求写完整梗概,可扩展为三个段落)
六、作文仿写
题目
Write a summary of the story“More than Fun'(假设课文故事大意:Tom喜欢画画,但总是一个人
画。后来他参加美术社团,和同学们一起创作了一幅大画,收获了快乐和友谊。)
参考范文
This story is about a boy named Tom who loved drawing.At first,he always drew alone at
home and felt a little bored.Then,he joined the school art club and met some students who
shared the same hobby.They decided to paint a big picture together.Although they had
different ideas,they talked and worked together.In the end,they finished the painting and
had a great time.The story tells us that hobbies can bring more than fun-they can also
bring friendship and happiness.
(字数:约80词)
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导作小贴士
口不要照抄原文大段对话或细节,只提取主干事件。
2一定要使用一般过去时,注意动词过去式变化(Iike→liked,join→joined,feel→felt)。
了结尾最好点出故事主题/道理,让梗概更完整。
马如果故事中有人物对话,用间接叙述表达(He said that../He asked.…)。
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍《小王子》故事梗概
约98词
Dear Tom,
I'd like to share a wonderful story with you-The Little Prince.
First,a pilot meets a little prince from a tiny asteroid.Second,the prince tells the pilot his
journey:he visits different planets and meets a vain man,a king,and a geographer.Third,he
learns the secret of friendship from a wise fox and a special rose.
The story teaches us to see with our hearts.It is simple but moving.I hope you enjoy it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
介绍《夏洛的网》故事梗概
约96词
Dear Sarah,
Let me tell you about a touching story-Charlotte's Web.
First,a pig named Wilbur is saved by a kind girl,Fern.Second,Wilbur meets a clever spider,
Charlotte,who weaves words in her web to make him famous and protect him from being
killed.Third,Charlotte dies after laying eggs,but her love and friendship live on.
This story shows the power of true friendship and kindness.I think you will love it too.
Yours,
Chen Wei