Unit 6 Fantastic friends 写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年七年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（外研版）

外研新版 Unit 6 Fantastic friends 初一上 写作精讲精练 写作话题·Write a short paragraph about dodos(写短文介绍渡渡鸟) Unit6 Fantastic Friends写作精讲精练 导作狂务Write a short paragraph about dodos(写一篇介绍渡渡鸟的短文) 一、 申题 1文体 说明性短文（段落形式，非书信，不需要称呼和署名） 2话题 介绍一种已经灭绝的鸟类一一渡渡鸟(dodo) 3人称 以第三人称it/they为主（介绍动物） 4时态 一般现在时（描述事实）+一般过去时（描述渡渡鸟已经灭绝的事实） 5要点 ，渡渡鸟是什么（名称、外貌、生活地点） >渡渡鸟的特点（不会飞、体型等） ，渡渡鸟的现状（已灭绝及原因） ，对人类的后示或感慨 6字数 60~90词（初中段落标准） 二、文章结构（一段式或两段式） 推荐一段式(5八6句话) 句子 内容要点 第1句 引出渡渡鸟（它是哪种鸟，生活在哪） 句子 内容要点 第2句 外貌或习性特点（不会飞、体型大等） 第3句 它们會经的生活状态（吃水果、筑巢等） 第4句 现状一一已灭绝，原因（人类捕杀、外来动物入侵） 第5句 总结或感受（我们要保护动物） 三、核心组词造句 核心词汇 词dodo渡渡鸟 bird鸟 island岛屿 词 Mauritius毛里求斯 large大的 flightless不会飞的 词extinct灭绝的 human人类 ki杀死 词protect保护 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 live on an island 生活在岛上 2 can't fly 不会飞 3 in the past 在过去 4 die out 灭绝 5 because of 由于 6 in the world 在世界上 基础造句 The dodo was a large bird that lived on Mauritius. 2 Dodos could not fly,so they were easy to catch. 3 Humans killed many dodos for food,and they became extinct. 四、好词好句 (更详细) 高级好词 序号 单词 释义 1 peaceful 平静的（描述渡渡鸟的生活环境） 2 gentle 温顺的（渡渡鸟性格） unusual 不寻常的 序号 单词 释义 4 forever 永远地（描述灭绝后不再存在） 5 habitat 栖息地 6 disappear 消失 加分句型 引出介绍 The dodo was a kind of bird that lived on the island of Mauritius. Dodos were unusual birds because they could not fly. 描远外貌与特点（含简单定语从句） They were large birds with small wings and a big body. They had a big beak and short legs,which made them look funny. 描述现状/原因（含because/because of) Sadly,dodos died out because humans hunted them. Because they could not fly,they had no way to run away from danger. 结尾升华句 We should learn from the dodo and try to protect other animals. Today,dodos only live in books and museums,but their story tells us to respect nature. 五、导作模板 Dodos were interesting birds that lived on Mauritius a long time ago. They were large and could not fly.Their food was fruit and small plants In the past,dodos lived peacefully on the island.However,humans came and killed them for food.Also,dogs and cats ate their eggs. Sadly,dodos became extinct hundreds of years ago. I think we must protect all animals so that no more creatures will disappear like the dodo. (约80词) 六、作文仿写 题目 Write a short paragraph about dodos. 范文 The dodo was a special kind of bird.It lived on the island of Mauritius.Dodos were large and couldn't fly.They ate fruit and lived a peaceful life.But then humans arrived on the island. They hunted dodos for food,and other animals like dogs ate dodo eggs.Over time,dodos died out completely.Today we can only see dodos in pictures or in museums.I think we should learn from the dodo's story and protect nature. (约85词) 教师点评 √时态正确：用了一般过去时描述渡渡鸟會经的生活和灭绝 √内容完整：包含了名称、地点、外貌特点、灭绝原因 连词使用恰当：But,Over time,Today让句子更连贯 √结尾有感悟：I think..升华主题 写作小贴士 ,写动物介绍时，多用had/were/lived/ate等过去式动词 ,如果想让段落更生动，可以加一句外貌描写：They had small wings and a big body. >不要忘记写“渡渡鸟已经灭绝”这个关键信息 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文1 介绍渡渡鸟 约93词 The dodo was a large,flightless bird that lived on the island of Mauritius.It had a rounded body,short legs,and a curved beak. 1 Dodos were about one meter tall and weighed up to 20 kilograms. 2 They ate fruits,nuts,and seeds found on the forest floor. 3 Since there were no natural enemies,they lost the ability to fly over time. Sadly,when sailors arrived in the 1500s,they hunted dodos for food and brought animals like pigs and rats,which ate the birds'eggs.This led to the dodo's extinction by 1681.We should learn to protect endangered species today. 拓展范文2渡渡鸟灭绝的教训 约96词 The dodo was a uniq ue bird that could not fly,living only on Mauritius.Its disappearance teaches us an important lesson. 1 Human activities,such as hunting and destroying forests,caused its decline. 2 Invasive animals introduced by humans also destroyed dodo nests. s Because dodos had no fear of humans,they were easy to catch,and their population fell rapidly. Today,the dodo is a symbol of extinction.We must protect wildlife and their habitats.If we do nothing,more species may meet the same fate.Let's take action to save our planet's biodiversity.