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Unit 6 Earth and Beyond
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write about Earth and its neighbors(介绍地球与周边星体)
Unit 6 Earth and Beyond
导作任务Write about Earth and its neighbors(介绍地球与周边星体)
申题
①文体
介绍性短文(说明文体,无需书信格式)
2话题
介绍地球及其邻居(如太阳、月球、火星等)
③人称
以第三人称(Earth,the Moon,Mars等)为主
4时态
一般现在时(描述客观事实)
5要点
>引出主题:地球在太阳系中的位置
,介绍地球的基本特征(大小、是否有生命等)
>介绍1~2个邻居星体(如月球、太阳、火星)的主要特点
,适当对比或总结,体现“地球的独特性”或“宇宙的奇妙”
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
开内见山,点明地球和它的邻居(如太阳、月球)属于太阳系
中间
分点介绍地球及1~2个邻居的基本特征
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结地球的特殊之处,或表达对宇宙的赞叹
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词Eath地球;Sun太阳;Moon月亮;planet行星;star恒星
词satellite卫星;neighbor邻居;solar system太阳系;space太空;universe宇宙
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
the third planet from the Sun
离太阳第三近的行星
2
be covered with water
被水覆盖
3
be known as
被称为.…
4
go around /orbit
围绕..运行
5
be far from be close to
离.远/近
6
the only planet with life
唯一有生命的行星
基础造句
1Earth is the third planet from the Sun and it has air and water.
2 The Moon is Earth's closest neighbor and it goes around our planet.
3 Mars is called the Red Planet because its surface looks red.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
amazing
合人惊叹的
2
vast
广阔的
3
mysterious
神秘的
4
incredible
难以置信的
5
unique
独特的
lifeless
无生命的(如月球、火星)
加分句型
介绍性句型
Earth is the only known planet in the solar system that has life.
The Moon is our closest neighbor in space,but it is very different from Earth.
对出句型
Compared to Earth,the Moon is much smaller and has no air or water.
Mars is farther from the Sun than Earth,so it is much colder.
说明原因/特点
Because Earth has just the right temperature and plenty of water,it is perfect for living things.
The Sun is a huge star that gives us light and heat.
结尾升华句
Our Earth is a special home in the vast universe-we must protect it.
Exploring the solar system helps us learn more about our own planet.
五、写作模板
Our home,Earth,is a beautiful planet in the solar system.
First,Earth is the third planet from the Sun.It has air,water and life
Second,the Moon is its closest neighbor.The Moon goes around Earth and has no air or
water.
Third,Mars is another neighbor.It looks red and is very cold.
Earth is the only place we know with life.Let's take care of it!
六、作文仿写
范文Earth and Its Neighbors
Our home,Earth,is a wonderful planet in the solar system.
First,Earth is the third planet from the Sun.It has air and water,and it is the only planet with
life.
Second,the Moon is Earth's closest neighbor.It goes around our planet.The Moon has no air
or water,so it looks very quiet and lifeless.
Third,Mars is another neighbor.It is called the Red Planet because its surface is red.Mars is
colder than Earth.
The solar system is amazing.Earth is special-we must protect our beautiful home.
教辅排版提示
〉各节标题可用粗体或加★标记
>核心词汇、好词好句建议用下划线或颜色高亮
作文仿写部分可单独用一个方框或缩进区分
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1介绍地球及周边行星
约95词
Dear Tom,
Welcome to our solar system!Let me introd uce Earth and its neighbors.
1Earth:It is the third planet from the Sun.It has liquid water and an atmosphere,which
support life.
2 The Moon:Earth's only natural satellite.It orbits our planet and causes ocean tides.
3Other neighbors:Venus is extremely hot,while Mars has a thin atmosphere and a red
surface.
These worlds are all different.I hope you enjoy learning about them!
Yours,
Wang Lei
拓展范文2
从太阳角度介绍邻居
约93词
Dear Lucy,
You asked about Earth's neighbors.Here is a short guide.
1The Sun:A huge star that gives light and heat.Earth orbits it once a year.
2 Mercury:The smallest planet,closest to the Sun.It has no atmosphere.
3 Venus:The hottest planet,covered with thick clouds.Earth is between Venus and Mars.
4 Mars:Known as the Red Planet,with volcanoes and ice caps.
Each neighbor has unique features.Keep exploring!
Yours,
Liu Fang