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Unit 1 My Dream Job
初二上
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写作话题·Nrite about my dream job(描写理想职业)
Unit 1 My Dream Job
写作任务Write about my dream job(描写理想职业)
申题
①文体
记叙文/说明文(以第一人称介绍自己的理想职业,表达原因和努力方向)
2话题
自己的梦想职业是什么,为什么选择它,打算如何实现
③人称
以第一人称1为主
4时态
一般现在时+一般将来时(表达愿望和计划)
5要点
,明确写出理想职业是什么
,说明2~3个选择理由(个人兴趣、能力、社会价值等)
,写出自己为实现梦想需要做的准备或努力
,结尾表达决心或希望
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
开内见山,直接说出自己的理想职业
中间
分条写出选择理由+未来的努力计划(2~3点)
段落
内容要点
结尾
总结并表达决心或展望
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词dream job梦想职业
become成为
helpful有帮助的
词patient耐心的;病人
engineer工程师
save拯救;节省
词work hard努力工作
study hard努力学习
knowledge知识
词future未来
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
want to be dream of being...
想成为…
2
help people in need
帮助有需要的人
make a difference
有所作为/带来改变
4
be good at
擅长…
5
learn a lot from...
从.学到很多
6
practice every day
每天练习
7
go to college
上大学
8
try my best
尽我最大努力
基础造句
1I want to be a doctor because I want to help sick people get well.
2I am good at math and science,so I want to become a scientist.
3 If I want to be a teacher,I must study hard and learn more knowledge.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
y
mea ningful
有意义的
2
professional
专业的
responsible
有责任感的
4
achieve one's dream
实现梦想
5
make a contribution to
为…做贡献
序号
单词
释义
6
look forward to
期待
加分句型
表达梦想
It has always been my dream to become a....
I dream of being a...when I grow up.
I am determined to be a...in the future.
说明理由
I choose this job because I am interested in...and I want to help others.
This job is meaningful because it can....
I admire my father a famous person who works as a...,so I want to be like him.
描述计划
To realize my dream,I will study hard and read more books about....
I will take part in...activities to gain more experience.
I believe nothing is impossible if I keep trying.
结尾升华句
I will never give up until my dream comes true.
My dream job is not only for living,but also for making the world better.
I hope I can become a...and bring happiness to others.
五、写作模板
My Dream Job
Everyone has a dream job.My dream is to become a
Why do I want to be a?First,
Second,
Besides,
To make my dream come true,I will
I believe that if I work hard,my dream will
one day.
I am looking forward to that day!
六、作文仿写
范文
My Dream Job
Everyone has a dream job.My dream is to become a doctor.
Why do I want to be a doctor?First,I want to help sick people get well and feel less pain.
Second,my father is a doctor,and I see how he saves lives.I admire him very much.Besides,
doctors are very important in our society.They make a big difference.
To make my dream come true,I will study hard at school,especially in science and biology.I
will also read more medical books.I believe that if I work hard,my dream will come true one
day.
I am looking forward to that day!
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1梦想成为宇航员
约95词
My dream job is to become an astronaut.Ever since I watched a rocket launch on TV,I have
been fascinated by space exploration.
★Why I love it:
1I want to see the Earth from space and feel the wonder of the universe.
2 Exploring new planets and helping science advance is exciting.
√How to achieve it:
Study hard in math and physics.Keep my body healthy through exercise.Read books about
space and watch documentaries.
I will keep working toward this dream because the stars are waiting for me.
拓展范文2梦想成为作家
约98词
My dream job is to be a writer.I love creating stories and sharing feelings through words.
Reasons:
1 Writing lets me build new worlds and characters.
2 I want to touch people's hearts and make them think.
Steps to reach my goal:
Read many kinds of books every day.Practice writing short stories.Take notes on interesting
things around me.Ask teachers for advice.
I believe that with hard work,I can turn my dream into a real book one day.