Unit 4 Changing and Growing写作精讲精练-2026-2027学年八年级英语上册单元话题写作精讲（仁爱科普版）

仁爱新版 Unit 4 Changing and Growing 初二上 写作精讲精练 写作话题·Write about growing in the past year (记述一年的成长经历) Unit 4 Changing and Growing 导作任务Write about growing in the past year(记述一年的成长经历) 申题 口文体 记叙文（以第一人称叙述个人成长经历，可适当加入感悟与展望） 2话题 过去一年里自己发生的变化、取得的进步或克服的困难 ③人称 以第一人称1为主 4时态 一般过去时（描述已发生的事情）为主，结尾可用一般现在时或一般将来时表达感受或计划 ⑤要点 〉点明主题：回顾过去一年的成长 ,具体写1~2个成长事例或变化（例如学会新技能、改掉坏习惯、变得更加自信等） ，简单说明过程或感受 ，结尾总结收获或表达对未来的期待 6字数 80~100词（初中标准要求） 二 文章结构 (三段式) 段落 内容要点 开头 引出主题一一回顾过去一年，指出自己发生了变化或成长 中间 描述具体的成长事例一一过去是什么样→做了什么努力→现在变成了什么样（对比写 法) 段落 内容要点 结尾 总结成长带来的感受，或表达对未来的信心与计划 三、核心组词造句 核心词汇 词grow成长 词change变化 词 learn学会 词improve提高 词 try尝试 词overcome克服 词challenge挑战 词progress进步 常用短语 序号 短语 释义 1 in the past year 在过去一年里 2 used to ..but now... 过去.但现在.… 3 learn to do sth. 学会做某事 4 try my best 尽我最大努力 5 make progress 取得进步 6 become more confident 变得更自信 7 give up 放弃 8 keep doing sth. 坚持做某事 基础造句 1I used to be shy,but now I can speak in front of the class. 2 I learned to play the guitar and it made me happy. I made a lot of progress in English by reading more. 4I didn't give up when I met difficulties. 四、好词好句 (更详细) 高级好词 序号 单词 释义 1 confident 自信的 序号 单词 释义 2 independent 独立的 responsible 有责任心的 4 meaningful 有意义的 5 achievement 成就 6 experience 经历 7 struggle 努力；挣扎 8 succeed 成功 加分句型 过去与现在对比句 I used to be afraid of speaking English,but now I love talking with foreigners. In the past,I always made excuses now I face challenges bravely. 努力过程描述句 I kept practicing every day until I could do it well. With the help of my teacher,I finally overcame the difficulty. 感叹句（增强情感） What a meaningful year it has been! How proud I am of myself! 结尾升华句 This year's growth has made me a better person. I believe I can become even stronger in the future. 五、 导作模板 Last year was a year of growth for me.I changed a lot. First,I used to.But I didn't give up.I Now I can Second,I learned to It was hard at first,but I It really helped me I feel very proud of myself.I will keep growing and try my best in the new year. 六、作文仿写 题目 请以“Growing in the past year"为题，写一篇80~l00词的短文，记述你过去一年的成长经历。 范文 Last year was a year of growth for me.I changed a lot. First,I used to be shy and afraid to speak in class.But I didn't give up.I practiced speaking every day and joined the English club.Now I can give a speech in front of the class. Second,I learned to swim.It was hard at first,but I kept trying.It really helped me become braver and healthier. I feel very proud of myself.I will keep growing and try my best in the new year. 拓展范文背诵积累 拓展范文1 写给朋友的成长分享 约96词 Dear Li Hua, Time flies!Looking back on the past year,I have grown a lot.Let me share with you. First,I learned to manage my time better.I made a daily plan and stuck to it.Second,I improved my English by reading aloud every morning and watching English movies.Third,I became more confident.I volunteered to give a speech in class though I was shy at first. These experiences helped me become a stronger person.I believe you are growing too.Let's encourage each other! Yours, Zhang Wei 拓展范文2 导给自己的成长记录 约98词 Dear Me, This year has been a journey of growth.I want to remember what I have achieved. 1 I used to be afraid of asking questions,but now I actively raise my hand in class. 2I learned to cook simple meals,which made my parents proud. 3 I also joined a basketball team and made many friends.Playing sports taught me teamwork and patience. Though there were challenges,I never gave up.Each small step brought me closer to a better me.Keep going! Yours, Your past self