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Unit 7 When Tomorrow Comes
初二上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write a description of your life in20 years
(描写二十年后的生活)
Unit 7 When Tomorrow Comes
导作任务Write a description of your life in20 years(描写二十年后的生活)
申题
口文体
描述文(以第一人称叙述自己未来的生活,可适当想象)
2话题
二十年后的生活,包括工作、家庭、居住环境、日常活动、兴趣爱好等
3人称
以第一人称1为主
4时态
一般将来时(will be going to/情态动词will be doing等)
5要点
,描述未来的职业或身份
,描述未来的居住地或家庭
>描述未来的日常生活或爱好
,表达对未来的感受或期望
6字数
80~100词(初中标准要求)
二、
文章结构
(三段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
简短引出话题,点明“二十年后的我”
>例:ln20 years,I will be34 years old.What will my life be like?
中间
分2~3个方面具体描述未来生活
①职业与工作场景
段落
内容要点
②家庭与居住环境
③日常活动或兴趣爱好
结尾
总结或表达对未来的期待
>I think my life in 20 years will be full of happiness and hope.
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词future未来;engineer工程师;doctor医生;teacher教师;smart智能的;robot机器人;
family家庭;house房子;garden花园;travel旅行;healthy健康的
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
in 20 years
二十年后
2
be a an...
成为一名…
3
live in a big city /small town
住在大城市/小镇
4
have a pet dog/cat
养一只宠物狗猫
5
work as...
从事..工作
6
spend time with...
和.一起度过时间
7
keep healthy exercise every day
保持健康/侮天锻炼
8
travel around the world
环游世界
基础造句
1 In 20 years,I will be a doctor and work in a big hospital.
2I will live in a house with a small garden.
3Every morning I will get up early and go jogging.
四、好词好句
(便详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
convenient
方便的
2
wonderful
精彩的
3
comfortable
舒适的
4
modern
现代的
序号
单词
释义
5
exciting
合人兴奋的
6
independent
独立的
7
helpful(robots)
有帮助的(机器人)
6
mea ningful
有意义的
加分句型
描述未来职业
I will work as a
because I am interested in
I am going to be a
and help
描述未来生活场景
(含时间状语从句或条件句)
>
When I get home after work,I will cook dinner for my family.
If I have free time,I will travel to different countries.
表达对未来的感受
I believe my life will be busy but happy.
It will be exciting to see how much the world changes.
使用will be doing强调状态
At that time,I will be living in a smart house with Al helpers.
结尾升华句
I will work hard now to make my dream come true.
I hope my future life will be full of love and success.
五、写作模板
In 20 years,my life will be quite different.
First,I will be a/an
I will work
I will be able to
Second,I will live.I will have
Every day,I will
Third,I will also
For example,I will
I am sure my life in 20 years will be wonderful.I will enjoy every day.
六、作文仿写
题目
Write a description of your life in20 years(描写二十年后的生活)
请写一篇描述你20年后生活的短文。
范文
My Life in 20 Years
In 20 years,I will be 34 years old.My life will be quite different from now.
First,I will be a teacher.I will work in a middle school and teach English.I will help my
students learn and grow.Second,I will live in a city near the sea.I will have a small house
with a garden.Every morning I will water the flowers and take a walk on the beach.Third,I
will also travel a lot during holidays.I will visit different countries and try local food.
I think my life in 20 years will be busy but happy.I will work hard now to make it come true.
(约100词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1
描写二十年后的生活
约98词
I am a doctor in 2044.I work at a modern hospital with smart robots.Every morning,I take an
electric bike to work.My family lives in a house with a garden.My wife and I have a daughter.
She is a high school student.After work,I like to cook dinner with my family.On weekends,we
go hiking or visit my parents.I feel happy and satisfied.Life is simple but full of love.I hope
everyone can be healthy and peaceful.
拓展范文2描写二十年后的生活
约96词
I live in a small eco-friendly town in 2044.I am a farmer growing organic vegetables.My
house runs on solar energy.Every day,I wake up early and water the plants.My neighbors are
kind and we help each other.I have two kids.They study at home online.After work,I read
books or listen to music in the garden.I don't own a car.I walk or ride a bike everywhere.Life
is slow and quiet.I enjoy nature and simple happiness.