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Unit7 Happy Birthday!
初一上
写作精讲精练
写作话题·Write a post about how you celebrate your birthday
(写帖子介绍生日庆祝方式)
Unit 7 Happy Birthday!
导作任务Write a post about how you celebrate your birthday(写帖子介绍生日庆祝方式)
申题
①文体
帖子(社交媒体分享,可带标题,无固定书信格式;但需有开头、正文、结尾,语言亲切自然)
2话题
介绍自己过生日的方式(如和家人、朋友一起庆祝,吃什么、做什么、收到什么礼物等)
③人称
以第一人称I/We为主
4时态
一般现在时(描述习惯性庆祝方式)+一般将来时(计划中的生日)或一般过去时(回忆某次生日)均可,
建议以一般现在时为主,确保简单不出错
5要点
>点明主题:今天是我的生日/我想介绍我的生日庆祝方式
>描述具体活动:如吃蛋糕、唱生日歌、收礼物、和谁一起
,表达心情或感谢
,结尾可邀请大家评论或祝福
6字数
60~90词(帖子通常比信件简短,初一上可适度降低)
二、
文章结构(三段式或两段式)
段落
内容要点
开头
问候+引出话题(今天是我生日/我想分享我的生日庆祝方式)
段落
内容要点
中间
详细介绍庆祝方式(2~3个活动+简单说明)
①和家人一起做什么
②和朋友一起做什么
③最喜欢的礼物或食物
结尾
表达心情+祝愿/邀请互动
三、核心组词造句
核心词汇
词birthday生日
celebrate庆祝
cake蛋糕
candle蜡烛
词
gift/present礼物party派对
sing唱
wish愿望
词surprise惊喜
family家人friend朋友
常用短语
序号
短语
释义
1
have a birthday party
举办生日派对
2
blow out the candles
吹蜡烛
3
make a wish
许愿
4
sing“Happy Birthday"
唱生日快乐歌
5
get/receive a gift
收到礼物
spend time with...
和.一起度过时光
7
have a big dinner
吃大餐
基础造句
1I usually have a birthday party with my family.
2 We sing "Happy Birthday"and blow out the candles.
sI make a wish before I blow out the candles.
4My parents give me a nice gift every year.
5 I feel very happy on my birthday.
四、好词好句
(更详细)
高级好词
序号
单词
释义
1
celebrate
庆祝
2
wonderful
极好的
序号
单词
释义
3
lovely
可爱的;美好的
4
delicious
美味的
unforgettable
难忘的
6
prepare
准备
Λ
decorate
装饰
加分句型
引出话题句
Today is my birthday,and I want to share how I celebrate it.
Let me tell you about my birthday celebration.
描述活动句
First,my mother prepares a big birthday cake with 10 candles on it.
After that,we sing the birthday song together and I make a wish.
Then,I open all the gifts and say "thank you"to everyone.
表达感受句
It is a wonderful day because I can stay with my family.
The best part is that I get a surprise from my best friend.
结尾升华句
I love my birthday because it brings so much joy and love.
Happy birthday to me!What do you do on your birthday?Please share in the comments.
五、写作模板(帖子版)
Title(可选):My Birthday Celebration/Happy Birthday!
Hi everyone!
Today is my birthday,and I want to share how I celebrate it.
First,I usually have a big dinner with my family.My mother makes a delicious cake.Then,
we sing "Happy Birthday"and I blow out the candles.I always make a wish.After dinner,I
open gifts from my parents and friends.
I feel very happy on this special day.Birthday is the best day of the year!
What about you?How do you celebrate your birthday?
六、作文仿写
范文
My Birthday Celebration
Hi everyone!
Today is my birthday!Let me tell you how I celebrate it.
First,I always have a birthday party at home.My parents help me decorate the room with
balloons.Then,we eat a big chocolate cake.I light the candles,make a wish,and blow them
out.Everyone sings "Happy Birthday"to me.After that,I open my presents.This year,I got a
new book and a cute toy.
I love my birthday because I can enjoy the time with my family and friends.It is always a
happy day!
What do you do on your birthday?Please tell me in the comments!
(字数:约120词)
拓展范文背诵积累
拓展范文1向笔友介绍自己的生日聚会
约98词
Dear Tom,
You asked how I celebrate my birthday.Let me tell you about it!
First,I usually have a small party at home with my family.
1 Mom makes a big cake with my favorite fruit.
2 Dad lights the candles and we sing "Happy Birthday"together.
3 Then I make a wish before blowing out the candles
Later,I open all the gifts.I love the surprise cards and toys from my parents.For the evening,
we watch a funny movie and eat dumplings.I enjoy every minute of this special day.
How about you?Do you celebrate differently?
Yours,
Li Hua
拓展范文2
向网友分享生日新做法
约95词
Hi Jack,
My birthday last week was different and fun!I'd like to share.
First,instead of a party,I volunteered at an animal shelter.I helped feed the dogs and
played with cats.
Second,I invited two close friends to join me.Together we made birthday cards for the
animals.
Third,after the shelter,we had a simple dinner at a pizza place.No big cake or loud music
-just laughter and kindness.My birthday felt meaningful because we helped others.
I recommend trying this way.You will feel truly happy!
Yours,
Zhang Wei